The River v0.4 Andy Casson

[andy casson]

More lyrics added, some more thought to the arrangement and use of piano/strings. Still a big a solo at the end, and I am sure I have driven her in doors mad!

Lyrics:
Come ride the river...down to the sea
Take all that's bitter...to make you complete
Follow the river...follow with me
Through hollow and hillside there we'll meet
There we'll meet

Come brother and sister... come follow with me
Breathe in a whisper... on the shore of the sea
Hold one another... hold on with me
And one day by shoreline... there we'll meet
There we'll meet

[tafka]

I think this a fantastic own origional song.
The lyric is sang with wads of emotion and the lead guitar fits so well.
i am a bit supprised that this song has had X amounts of hits without a reply

TJ.

[Gnasty]

Yes this is fantastic..Great song..Great Vox, and i really like that lead at the end bro.. Wow! Good stuff!!

i am a bit supprised that this song has had X amounts of hits without a reply

TJ.

Yes i`m astonished too and yet not surprised also..This song got my attention though

[Burtog]

 

This is great, sounds like a lot of work has gone into this one! I can hear several influences. The guitar solo is a great tone.

I agree with the other two but more great comments are bound to follow!

[andy casson]

thanks very much, you are very kind, the song has had two previous incarnations, so not so surprised there is not much feedback. The feel and arrangement is getting closer to what I have in mind. My feeling is I overdid the vocals at the end, and the piano needs to come up in the mix

[The Gobi Desert Canoe Club]

Hi Andy, a really good strong performance and excellent guitar work..............Willie

[Greeny]

This is a big song. Bags of emotion, and a spacious feel to the production. Love the mournful, soulful quality of the vocal in particular. And that's a massive solo! Has the tuneful, understated vibe of David Gilmour. Great work.

[Kenny B]

This is a great tune!!!  Very intense with so much feeling.

The vocals and guitars are outstanding!!!

The arrangement and effects are very cool.

I like this mix best because of the vocals.

kb

[T.C. Elliott]

Interesting hard pan on the guitar on the right, but it works really well... I love that bass on the 3 and 4. That works really well for me. And your vocals are sounding really good.

ooh, I like that solo at the end.

[Glenn Mitchell]

I particularly liked the lyrics.  I wish I could write like this.