I Pray v0.5 AKA Shine - Andy casson

[andy casson]

Some re-work of vocals, lyrics & arrangement, same feel to it I hope, looking for some idea of where to take it other than a solo?
Recorded on Sonar, les paul studio, Yamaha Bass, Rode NT1 mic

Lyrics:
Take me away from this pain
Take me away from this guilt and shame

Give me your shoulder, please feed me a line
My fever is rising, hold on and shine

Take me away into time and space
Take me away here and leave no trace

[Riche]

Excellent ... wheres the rest of it? .. no seriously I love it.

Rich

[Bluesberry]

WOW man, what a full sound here.......some idea of where to take it other than a solo......hmmm.....how about a real quite section, just acoustic guitrar and vocal, then blast into heavy guitar and big-ass solo.......hey, its an idea.

[Rata-tat-tat]

Oh yeah... love it bro. Great job here. I think bb has it nailed... quiet break of some sort and right into a huge solo. I was hearing the same thing.

[Hook]

Dig it brother! It needs a sparse bridge into a rockin' solo. My two cents, which are now only worth  .001.
Rock on!