A Thousand Goodbyes v0.1

Started by andy casson, August 22, 2011, 09:10:57 AM

andy casson

Thousand Goodbyes v1
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Kinda like a love song I guess, recorded on Sonar, 12 string accoustic, Yamaha bass, Les Paul Studio
Enjoy

Lyrics:

If love is the answer, then what is the question I say
You held all my dreams, threw all my heroes away
Away
Don't tell me that love will come stay

I see in your eyes a thousand goodbyes...again
Where words are not spoken, silence lays in your lies
Your lies
Don't give me your thousand goodbyes

I'm lost and I'm broken, take me and bring me to life
Where words are not spoken the pain of it sits in your eyes
Your eyes
Don't give me your thousand goodbyes

Rata-tat-tat

Wow... you have a great vox... love the chord progression on this one. Don't take me wrong... cause you have done a great job, but I think this deserves a much better mix. Seemed like the lead guitars were in the background a little too far as well as the BU vox. I was waiting for this to kick in with a huge "Stereo" sound when you go into the chorus AWAY/ Your Lies and so on. Just think some small tweaks could send this bugger to the moon. The arrangement is spot on and the lyrics are top shelf... as I said I love the arrangement... I absolutely love it.
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Tascam DP-24

I think this is a great song sung and played really well. Keep 'em rolling in..............Willie
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Boss BR-800

Hook

Nice work brother! I also really dig your progression and I love the vocals!!!
Rock on!

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Boss BR-80
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Boss BR-800
Because the Hook brings you back
I ain't tellin' you no lie
The hook brings you back
On that you can rely

Pipes

seems like the others were waving goodbye to this...

glad i spotted it...this deserves mre feedback:)

enjoyed the listen...

ps..i would bring the vox forward a little more..sounded a bit distant..and deserved more:)