Risin Sun...experimental Rock Ballad.. by Neil . cp 2011 BMI

SteveB · August 12, 2011, 09:08:24 AM

Hey, Neil, this is some arrangement.
I can imagine drivin along with this on the radio as the sun is risin.
A dang cool piece. Well done.

SwanSong · August 12, 2011, 10:52:33 AM

HI STEVE AND THANKS so kindly for the thoughtful comment.
and yes will agree that i t look s and feel s like a risin sun .
best regards NEIL

PS...BY the way here r lyrics that a freind of mine DARLENE
COMPOSED FROM ANOTHER SITE IF ANYONE WANT S TO
SING WOULD B AN HONOR !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Only When We Make Love By Darlene McCoy©

You move much closer to me
My heart begins to pound
You kiss me ever so gentle
As we crumble to the ground

I feel your body next to me
getting to know your essence
I am helpless, can not resist
Because you are in my presence

There's no place I'd rather be
But in your arms and you loving me

Chorus

..We spread our wings
..We take flight
..Soaring through the air
..All the release of the tention
..Makes the tears fall down
..From all the love we share
..Only when we make love
..Only when we make love

A slow and tender motion
I caress your intire being
You sigh and let me know
Without words how you are feeling

I Can no longer control myself
My body feels like it will emplode
One more minute,one more second
I know I will explode

Makes me wish I was apart of you
So you could never leave my sight

chorus
..We spread our wings
..We take flight
..Soaring through the air
..All the release of the tention
..Makes the tears fall down
..From all the love we share
..Only when we make love
..Only when we make love

When I See you just standing there
In the early morning light
I Remembering how we made love
In the darkness of the night

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Be who you are and say what you feel... because those that matter... don't mind...and those that mind...don't matter!

Darlene C.McCoy©2009
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