one more day

[Simon M]

Really liked this the chorus especially is epic.  Good guitar tone and really emotive vocals.  Hope your girlfriend likes it too.  She really should.

Keep Rocking

Simon

[Donna D]

What a beautiful love ballad. Lyrics so simple and honest. I especially like the "one more day, one more dream, one more night with you" section. A moving vocal performance, and a really nice solo.
Good job.

Donna

[The Gobi Desert Canoe Club]

Hi Lubo, nice bit of Songcrafting that for some reason sounds better when it's a little more personal.........Willie

[#gpmproject]

What a beautiful love ballad. Lyrics so simple and honest. I especially like the "one more day, one more dream, one more night with you" section. A moving vocal performance, and a really nice solo.
Good job.

Donna

my fault I didn't write a lyrics - it's: one more day, one more drink, one more night with you...but maybe it's same still I'm in love with my miss perfect:-)))

[Speed Demon]

Nice story-telling, music and production.

Well done!