"Bobby s girl say s Maybe?" Original Music by Neil . Vocals by Tricia..cp 2011

Started by SwanSong, July 20, 2011, 07:16:36 PM

SwanSong

FINAL TRACK OF BOBBY S GIRL . MUSIC BY NEIL . ..VOCALS BY TRISHA.....AND LYRICS BY J FREED
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This was a collaboration from another site....i have never set music to lyrics
that was not really my calling.. so i toook it on as a challenge and adventure.

Jimmy Freed wrote the lyrics. and Tricia did the vocals. now keep in mind
she normally does rock type of songs and never dabbled into the country
gender..so my hats off 2 her on this  attempt..
V1:
                                    Bobby's in the garage on Friday
                                    He's working up an appetite lately
                                    His work ethic it's not normal
                                    His boss Floyd looks at him oddly
                                 
                                    (Chorus)
                                    Doing everybody's job working faster
                                    He can't wait for lunchtime at the diner
                                     Talk to a waitress he's got a eye on
                                    Order something crazy,
                                    hoping Bobby's Girl Says Maybe..

                                    V2:
                                    He's telling his boys, today is the day
                                    Good luck will be coming his way
                                    Each of them handed him their money
                                    Let him do what ever makes him happy

                                   (Chorus)
                                    Doing everybody's job working faster
                                    He can't wait for lunchtime at the diner
                                     Talk to a waitress he's got a eye on
                                    Order something crazy,
                                    hoping Bobby's Girl Says Maybe..

                                    Bridge:
                                    His friends hear a bell, ring across the street
                                    They sit anxious in their seats
                                    Seeing Bobby coming out smiling happily 

                                    (Chorus)
                                    Doing everybody's job working faster
                                    He can't wait for lunchtime at the diner
                                     Talk to a waitress he's got a eye on
                                    Order something crazy,
                                    hoping Bobby's Girl Says Maybe..

Groundy


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If I had known i was going to be this thirsty this morning I'd of had another Beer last night...

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Greeny

Wow, Neil. This is great. You nailed a very cool country-rock sound on this. And the production is excellent. A very slick and listenable song. Nicely done!

Hi Neil, another winner from you, nice country song. Tricia has a really good voice but I feel there was just a tad to much reverb for me, I don't think she needs it. Excellent post..............Willie
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Geir

Cool one Neil.  Love the "jumping" bass-line and the vocals are really good, lovely harmonies.

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trev

great track - really nice voice and I'm with willie on this one I don't think she needs quite so much effect on it
great collab.

Trev

stoman

I agree with the others: too much reverb. But still a nice song, and Tricia's performance fits the mood very well. It's good to hear your composition with vocals, Neil!

I would also love to hear it with real drums. Drummers seem to have become a rare species though ...

Regards,
  Steffen


SwanSong

Thanks so much gents.. actually perhaps i did use a little 2 much
reverb .. according to the software it was lite reverb...and tricia..
wanted reverb on her vocals...................she said she always
uses reverb . on hers.. however she normally does not sing country
she has . but prepfers other genders..best regards and thanks NEIL
AND TRICIA