Meant To Be (Full Backing Demo)

Started by rich2k4, June 29, 2011, 07:21:59 PM

rich2k4

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a new one.  I think this one is the best of the songs i have written.  More in the style that i want to write in.  Although i'm not to sure about that "bridge" before the final chorus.  I think i should just replace the bridge with the chorus and have chorus go 2 times around before ending.

Farrell Jackson

Very nice Rich. I think it all works...even the bridge you are questioning. If you wanted the bridge to be more of a change or to stand apart more, you could always double track the vocal or add a harmony to it. Very nice writing and I like the jazzy chords you're using in the verses.

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Test, test, one, two, three.....is this mic on?

rich2k4

I just played this a little bit faster, and raised the key a whole step.  I think it increased the emotion of the song a little bit.  Should have recorded it that way, but oh well.

SwanSong

Great sound and vox..going on . truly worth a bump
regards NEIL

Geir

I always look forward to hearing new posts from you.

And I'm never disappointed. This is really a good song!

Love the guitarwork, especially the "fills" and your voice is always a pleasure to listen to.



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Oh well ........

Flash Harry

Cool cool vibes.

This is garden listening. Great guitar work.
We are here on Earth to fart around. Don't let anybody tell you any different
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This sounds fine to me. The performer is always his worst critic. Farrell Jackson's production work is always great you could try what he suggests but I like it..........Willie
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cuthbert

I also think this stands very well just as it is. Nicely done, Rich!
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Rata-tat-tat

Rich... I have to agree with FJ also... I think that bridge and the chorus would be so powerful if you tried some double tracking (Guitars/back up Vox). This track could be a major production IMHO... I think it sits great as is, but I also think some minor additions would send it to the moon. This is such a great track bro. Thanks for sharing.
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