a rough sketch

[thetworegs]

Hi,Your heading the right way that's for sure .........it has great feel to it .....your voice is excelllent.....oh it's stopped .....try again .......stopped again......read........arh!............it,s in pencil and it sounds this good can't wait for the colour version ......Trevor

[OsCKilO]

If this is a pencil sketch, I expect a Davinci Painting when you are finished!

This superb!

Welcome!

[Greeny]

I like your style. Quirky but pop-orientated songwriting that will be right at home here. I like the simplicity of this, and would hate to hear it over-produced. So maybe just do a bigger (i.e. longer) pencil sketch? Welcome aboard. I like what I hear!

[thegreatpoobarr]

Thanks kindly folks!

The positives are great, but negatives are always welcome too, it's the only way to make things better.

[cuthbert]

Bouncy little tune! Too short, I think (I don't often say that - usually, leaving 'em wanting more is not a bad idea).

Welcome to Songcrafters, thegreatpoobarr!

[Kenny B]

This is really good!   Very Cool!

Sounds really good ... can't wait to hear the rest of it.

Welcome.

Kenny B.

[Rata-tat-tat]

Poo... this is great... love the wierd tones in the background. Crisp clean guitar sound. Has a sound of it's own IMO. Love it.