a rough sketch

[thegreatpoobarr]

Hey,

Recorded on my br600 more as a placeholder than anything else, but I thought I'd upload it and get some peer feedback. It's rough as fxxk, way too short and stripped down, but am I headed in the right direction?

It's always good to get impartial critique

[Bluesberry]

Yeah, it sure is on the right track, after all the craziness around here the last few days, I was wondering who would show up and post a new song.  Well, you have come to the right place, if this is just a rough sketch, I am sure I will be floored by a full-blown recording.  I like that guitar strumming off on the side like that, and I must say, you have a great voice.  Really good first post.  I look forward to hearing many more.

[launched]

Wow, way to come in with a bang! I love everything about this tune, has some great newness with a little Byrne flair I think.

There is no law that says you have to "fix this up" any more - If that's what you want, great, but I think it has an awesome vibe to it as is. It is always fun to keep polishing, though!

Well done - Keep at it, post some more!

Mark

[launched]

Oh it seemed to have cut out on me, maybe you didn't finish?

[Bluesberry]

There is no law that says you have to "fix this up" any more - If that's what you want, great, but I think it has an awesome vibe to it as is. It is always fun to keep polishing, though!

yeah, other than the ending, I didn't mean to imply that you need to polish this up any further, just gotta fix that abrupt ending.

[launched]

Oh, so it did cut off - I reloaded the page, cleared my cache, etc! Well, it's a helluva good tune, so get on it poobarr!

Mark

[thegreatpoobarr]

Oh ignore the ending.

Think of it as a pencil sketch, still to be painted with water colours.

It's rough and ready, but some day it'll bloom.



Thanks for the feedback guys, it's appreciated.

[Bluesberry]

maybe its intentional, making a statement on mankind or the human condition or something.........great voice

[Bluesberry]

Ok, I see, watercolours are good....cary on man.

[Geir]

Fabulous way to introduce yourself !!

I really like your style. You've got a great voice and sure know how to put together a tune. Looking forward to the finished product and to hopefully many more songs !!!