Meant To Be (Demo)

rich2k4 · May 03, 2011, 12:01:28 PM

i want to see if this song has any potential. I'm not really happy with the verse after the first chorus. I also have nothing for a bridge except some "na na na na" singing.

Meant to be
Richard W

Do you feel like we were never meant to be?
even though we tried?
We played a trick on destiny
We altered the course of time

I've started to feel like our love was never real
I've starting to lose my mind
I want to know if you feel the same
All I need's a sign, i want to know

Should we be together?
Should we be apart?
I never really knew the answer to those questions.
We're like a simulation
A rather poor imitation
Of what we were meant to be.

I should have known from the start
How we'd turn out to be
I can't visualize this clearly
Help me to see, i want to know

Should we be together?
Should we be apart?
I never really knew the answer to those questions.
We're like a simulation
A rather poor imitation
Of what we were meant to be.

Redler · May 04, 2011, 04:10:09 AM

Man and guitar! Just a fine tune. This doesn't need anything else, imo! The chord progression is stellar!

Kari

The Gobi Desert Canoe Club · May 04, 2011, 04:35:31 AM

Hi Rich, I don't think you need worry. The song has a fine potential. If it were my song I would thicken the backing up a bit but then that would be me and not you. If you have any doubts leave it for a couple of days and then have another listen. It's surprising how much clearer things become when listening with fresh ears..........Willie