MBR tune w/multi guitar on pop5

[AlchemyMN]

Great tune, excellent tone!

Definitely has a game show, soundtrack, jingle feel...

[hardlock]

Wow, the vocals are cool!  Can't wait to hear the final take.  Boy have I got some editing to do now....   

[hardlock]

Here it is with stripped leads and vocals mixed as a 1st take.

Edits are rough so I'll work on them and you can have at the vocals James. 

[Oldrottenhead]

i can see the potential, cant wait to gt a crack at tightening up the lyrics and my vocals.

[Oldrottenhead]

here is 2nd take at  this one. now titled johnny's not in love.

i will be sending the vox track to hardlock so dont be surprised if any more mixes appear.

lyrics are as follows.

johnny's not in love
he says he'll get by fine without her
he's hanging with the boys
smoking grass and drinking cider


even tho' he's not complaining
it's plain to see his heart is breakin'
he's not thinking 'bout tomorrow
while he tries to drown his sorrows

he says he doesn't even miss her
but he's been talking with her sister
she said there's nothing he could give her
so he's back working on his liver

johnny's not in love


johnny's not in love

johnny's not in love
he said that he's a bit hungover
he's not got out of bed
i think he knows it's really over

he looks like he's caught something viral
he's headed on a downward spiral
when you ask he just keeps walking
what's on his mind he just aint talking
he said he didn't ever love her
but he's been talking to her brother
he said i think you better go now
she aint got time for a sad old wino


johnny's not in love

johnny's not in love

johnny's not in love

johnny's not in love

[Greeny]

Oh yeah! You guys really nailed it. This song is so unbelievably catchy and quirky. Sounds like a hit to me 

Brilliant.

[rythmking24]

this is awesome! reminds me of 'the allman brothers'. they rock! and it seems you do too. to quote neil young, i think, 'keep on rockin in the free world!'.

[troy6120]

Alright, this is cool as hell. Strange, and cool as hell.

[Oldrottenhead]

another on this day bump https://songcrafters.org/community/index.php?topic=1097.0;msg=7541

[Hook]

What a great song! i love the track hardlock and you lyrics are so well written ORH & your delivery is brilliant. Excellent song!!!!
Rock on!