Cloud Cuckoo Land

Started by T.C. Elliott, April 25, 2011, 06:17:46 PM

Bluesberry

Really good song man, I've given it a few listens.  Real nice smooth yet grungy feel.  Your vocals sound very good here.  I would be tempted to have some vocal harmony stuff at the chorus.  I don't know what to think of the spoken word part, I understand why it is here, but it makes it feel slightly odd.  Maybe if the spoken words were more like a counterpoint vocal weaving through the song.  Like what Neil Young does on his Dangerbird song, maybe that would sound good, bring them further into the song, but as a counterpoint to the main melody, working against it.  Great solos.  Drums maybe...... I believe this one of your strongest songs.

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Kevin Mammoth

I really like this song, grungy but melodic - maybe I'd dirty up the vocals towards the end, to sort of build up a crescendo, with drums kicking in - but what do I know either!....
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Hi Piggy, great to see a post from you and what a great piece of work it is to. Maybe a little percussion would just finish it off but it sounds fine as it is...............Willie
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thetworegs

loving that vocal.....lovin that sound
   
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OsCKilO

Superb Piggy!  got an Oasis meets Greenday meets the beatles vibe!  Digging it bigstyle!!

Great track!
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Bluesberry

Quote from: OsCKilO on May 06, 2011, 08:15:57 PMgot an Oasis meets Greenday meets the beatles vibe!
meets Neil Young

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Yeah i do love those muddy guitars and the song is your best to me too. I do agre with Vann to tone down the cuckoos.

Other than that its a great song T.C!
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Nice one TC.

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