Been working on this !

[SE]

been working on this any feedback would be great still getting to grips with BRM

[danieldesete]

Nice job,  some powerfull singing !
(maybe the intro is a little long, but this is only my point of vue...)
I wish someone would add a bassline - I can't-
daniel

[SE]

Thanks a lot for input intro is not what I wanted really wanted. Started with big idea of Johhny Cash country reverb guitar but kind of got side lined by lots of distortion. Will have to change to original idea.

                  Thanks again
                                     John

[holdempok]

Very nice. I kinda of hear a liitle bit of a Meatloaf sound in your voice. really cool.

[SE]

Thanks holempok nice to here some positive feedback. Make you want to keep trying.

[Bluesberry]

A real good road song, gets my head bopping.  Your voice is very clear and quite good.  Excellent job.  Very nice guitar playing also.  There is nothing bad to say about this one.

[Greeny]

Nice playing, and great vocals. Clear and tuneful and gives Springsteen a run for his money. Lovely work 

[Kenneth]

Here's a bump, way to sing it SE!

[kenny mac]

I missed this 1st time around.
I'm very impressed by this song mate,it's got a lot of scope,did you ever take it further?
I thought there was a bit of distortion on the higher level of some of the notes but it's a great clear recording.
Nice one.

[Farrell Jackson]

Nice writing on this one SE! It definitely has a country rock flavor to it. Throws some oooh's, ahhh's and backing vox in and it would take on an Eagles' sound. I forget what a good voice you have..that is until I listen to one of your songs and then there's no doubt. Great song!

Farrell