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Post Your Work => Original Songs => Topic started by: corryhully on October 08, 2010, 04:35:36 PM

Title: if i stay (lounge lizard version) vox by oldrottenhead
Post by: corryhully on October 08, 2010, 04:35:36 PM
this is another version of the post i did about a week ago https://songcrafters.org/community/index.php?topic=8690.0 . i must have been in lounge lizard type of mood at the time. anyway, i sent it to james and he weaved his magic.
A heart to heart
A tete a tete
A conversation
Are you listening

We need to tell
A few home truths
We need to know
And share our thoughts

(chorus)
So if I stay
Will you stay too
And if I go
Will you come with me
We're like the ebb and flow of the tide

We've had our share
Maybe our full
The good the bad
The highs the lows

We're all grown up
We've both matured
So why are we acting
Like little children

(chorus)

We've seen so much
We've come so far
We've done it all
Or so it seems
And both together
And both apart
Joined at the hip
Then snapped

A heart to heart etc
if i stay
music corryhully lyrics oldrottenhead
Title: Re: if i stay (lounge lizard version) vox by oldrottenhead
Post by: SE on October 08, 2010, 06:50:36 PM
Been their, this a  a cool jazz version. love,in it!!!
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Post by: cuthbert on October 09, 2010, 09:53:03 AM
Is that mandolin I hear there? Never heard one used in this style of music before - I like it! Great playing of guitar and mando, corryhully.

Jim, golden pipes as always. Don't know where you find the time!
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Post by: stoman on October 09, 2010, 10:11:38 AM
LOVE it!

Regards,
  Steffen
Title: Re: if i stay (lounge lizard version) vox by oldrottenhead
Post by: Nelson on October 09, 2010, 10:24:34 AM
Really Cool track Corry. Outstanding musicianship.

Smooth as Silk performance James.
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Post by: Johnbee on October 09, 2010, 07:32:35 PM
Nice and mellow.  Felt the ol' blood pressure go down.  Great work, guys!
 :)JB
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Post by: SwanSong on October 09, 2010, 08:17:11 PM
Definaltely agee with above comments. very laid back tune almost
like a smooth jazz peice. very well done and constructed thumb sup
tc NEIL.....................!!
Title: Re: if i stay (lounge lizard version) vox by oldrottenhead
Post by: Ferryman_1957 on October 10, 2010, 01:56:44 AM
Wonderful! Great combo of acoustic instruments and Jim's mellow vox, a sublime musical cocktail.

I'd love to relax to this with a nice cocktail, except it's 8:55 on a Sunday morning. Perhaps later.

Cheers,

Nigel
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Post by: Gnasty on October 10, 2010, 12:29:57 PM

This is beautifully awesome!!

Damn Corry, that guitar tone and playing is mucho fab along with ORH singing makes it a hit in my books!
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Post by: Facemask93 on October 10, 2010, 12:42:59 PM
What a lovely guitar tone you have acheived on this recording , beautiful all round track , ORH lyrics & vocals shine as per usual

Rob
Title: Re: if i stay (lounge lizard version) vox by oldrottenhead
Post by: corryhully on October 10, 2010, 04:26:10 PM
thanks for the good reviews. i do enjoy playing this and jim is just a smart arse. vocals and lyrics galore. glass wine now i think. care to join me ?  8)
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Post by: lg on October 10, 2010, 04:27:09 PM
This is as smooth as silk!

LG'
Title: Re: if i stay (lounge lizard version) vox by oldrottenhead
Post by: Oldrottenhead on October 10, 2010, 04:39:39 PM
Quotejim is just a smart arse.
you got me sussed lol.

this was fun lets do another.
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Post by: Geir on October 11, 2010, 03:19:02 PM
aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh

wonderful !!!! just wonderful !!
Title: Re: if i stay (lounge lizard version) vox by oldrottenhead
Post by: launched on October 12, 2010, 03:32:46 PM
Deeeelishiss tune, guys! Braw, tell yer maw!


Mark
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Post by: OsCKilO on November 01, 2010, 06:17:29 PM
Bump!!!!


This kind of track really shows how great Stringed instruments are!!!!

Especially when played this well!!!!


Awesome!!




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Post by: Tony W on November 03, 2010, 09:13:59 AM
The music here is incredible. I'm actually awestruck by how good it is. Jim's vocal delivery fit the music to perfection. Well done to both of you.
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Post by: The Gobi Desert Canoe Club on November 03, 2010, 10:10:56 AM
Great collab guys, some nice little jazz chords slipping in there and Jim has taken care of business as usual. Shouldn't be played at work though, far too mellow, tie undone, feet on desk, eyes half shut  8) top notch.........Willie
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Post by: chip withrow on December 10, 2010, 02:03:45 PM
A heartfelt acoustic song that sounds rich and needs nothing else. Tasty lead lines, warm and comfortable vocal. Not lounge lizard at all, I think - far too soulful.
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Post by: hardlock on December 10, 2010, 03:13:13 PM
Sweet and magical!  One fine song guys.  Yes, soulful's the word!
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Post by: Oldrottenhead on October 08, 2017, 12:21:01 PM
otd bump!
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