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Title: new original
Post by: danieldesete on October 03, 2010, 09:14:09 AM
hello all. Here's a ballad I wrote to make you smile.

[soundclick]9715242[/soundclick]

daniel

PS  now I too have a song with "no monkey on my shoulder"  ;)
Title: Re: new original
Post by: T.C. Elliott on October 03, 2010, 09:30:03 AM
I liked the guitars in this quite a bit. It's got a great feel to it and is an enjoyable listen.
Title: Re: new original
Post by: steelguitar on October 03, 2010, 09:34:34 AM

Beautyful song!

Love the lyrics and your chords for the song's harmony.

For the guitar part, I feel a gypsy 's touch for the solos and their chromatisms!!!

Félicitations, Daniel!

Jean-Sébastien

Title: Re: new original
Post by: Pipes on October 04, 2010, 10:23:41 AM
Hi...
I Get A Bobby Dylan vibe here...
...nice tone to your voice
Great
Nick
Title: Re: new original
Post by: stoman on October 04, 2010, 11:06:34 AM
Leonard Cohen meets Bob Dylan. Nice! :)

Regards,
  Steffen
Title: Re: new original
Post by: OsCKilO on October 04, 2010, 11:11:01 AM
Great New Song Daniel!

That Guitar is Awesome!
Wicked and Happy Tone.
Complicated and crafted to perfection.

Superb Story telling as well!


And Bro... It did make me smile!

Love your style bro!



Peace


Tharek
Title: Re: new original
Post by: Bluesberry on October 04, 2010, 05:15:58 PM
leonard cohen sorta song.  I really like this.  Great playing, singing, lyrics.  Its a sweet little package of goodness.
Title: Re: new original
Post by: Kenneth on October 04, 2010, 07:34:30 PM
A little Al Stewart in the vocals? Very nice job Daniel!
Title: Re: new original
Post by: danieldesete on October 05, 2010, 03:58:56 AM
dear friends, thank you for the kind comments and support. It really means a lot for me.

Indeed I have trouble getting away from Leonard Cohen and Bob Dylan, but that's the music I like...

Kenneth, I had never heard of Al Stewart before, so thanks for making me discover that "year of the cat" song.

daniel
Title: Re: new original
Post by: Tangled Wires on October 05, 2010, 11:47:49 AM
Perfectly constructed song Daniel, really like the solo acoustic work in there.

Great lyrics too, sums up a cat's life perfectly.
Title: Re: new original
Post by: The Reverend 48 on October 09, 2010, 10:50:50 AM
I think this is fantastic Daniel
great lyrics and a really unique vox
and some tasty licks
Well Done!
Title: Re: new original
Post by: Oldrottenhead on October 10, 2010, 03:29:15 AM
great song daniel certainly made me smile
Title: Re: new original
Post by: Nelson on October 10, 2010, 08:00:48 AM
Cool song Daniel.
Awesome guitar playing and mix.
Well Done

Nelson
Title: Re: new original
Post by: launched on October 12, 2010, 07:05:32 AM
Holy smokes, Daniel! I'm glad I finally caught this one, it's my cup of tea big time!

The vocals and rhythm match up great, and I love those sweet lead breaks. PiePod!

Awesome song creation, bro!

Mark
Title: Re: new original
Post by: steelguitar on October 19, 2015, 02:12:54 PM
The dream life of cats...

Beautyful song and great playing and singing!

Love your solos, a JJ Cale country jazz feel with style and inspiration,  I admire

Jean-Sébastien
Title: Re: new original
Post by: danieldesete on October 19, 2015, 02:32:14 PM
Thanks for the bump Steelguitar, I owe you a drink !
Title: Re: new original
Post by: Redler on October 19, 2015, 10:58:29 PM
Real fine songwriting and performance, Daniel!! Nice vocals and lead guitar additions!

Thanks for the bump, Jean-Sébastien, I heard this gem first time!!