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Title: Your Light
Post by: OsCKilO on May 09, 2010, 02:12:28 PM

The Closest I get to a Love song....

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=9121437


[soundclick]9121437[/soundclick]


(http://apod.nasa.gov/apod/image/0711/lighthouse_westcott_big.jpg)



https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qlnxspe1N4A




-Your Light-
We've heard all the compliments.
All said in a day.
They've lost all their meaning now.
Wasted away.
They were there when you were feeling fine and when you were,
Down and out.
With all a word can mean to you,
These should count.
The one last thing I'll say to you
Is....

The sun shines out....
Your arse...

I'll see no wrong in you, when I'm this blind!
So drunk on your Light I cant walk in a line.
I'll see no wrong in you, when I'm this blind!
I'll see no wrong in you, when I'm this blind!
When I'm this blind!
But I know that I have seen.


Show me a love, and I'll show you a road.
Where cobbles are humans,and rocks are our words.
Wearing our wheels...
And Running us down....

We've heard all the compliments.
All said in a day.
They've lost all their meaning now.
Wasted away.
They were there when you were feeling Down
When you were,
Down and out.....



With all a word can mean to you,
With all a word can mean to you,
With all a word can mean to you,
I'll sing just one last thing to you.



The sun shines out....
Your arse...


The sun shines ....

The sun shines out....
The sun shines out....
The sun shines out....


Your Arse.....







Hope you like it!

Peace

T (OsCKilO)



YOUR LIGHT
Words and Music by Tharek Mokbul
3 Track recording on Boss Micro BR
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: Gnasty on May 09, 2010, 02:32:05 PM
LOL....I don`t think the sun will EVER shine out my arse!!

Very different Song and love the accent!
You mean you haven`t wrote a love song before? Yeah I`ve come close too, but turns into a hate song when it`s done. This one turned into a thinking song for me. You have such an original and unique style to your songs and thats what keeps me listening and wanting more.

FANTASTIC BRO!!

YOU RULE THAREK!!
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: pjd1 on May 09, 2010, 02:36:53 PM
Hi Tharek this song has got a Irish feel to it !! liked it from the start but had to check out the words to see if was what i was hearing , great stuff OsCkilo !!!! i had a chuckle to myself about singing that to my better half !! i may give it a try !! Brilliant Song Osckilo , dont know how you manage to compose to much in a short period of time and then record it etc !!!
Great stuff and thanks for the smile !!!!!!
Dunny

Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: Tony W on May 09, 2010, 02:43:16 PM
I can hear that Irish twinge to it too, our big Irish Samoan with a love song... The harmonies are most excellent, and this is a well played song. Lyrically interesting.
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: Oldrottenhead on May 09, 2010, 03:21:08 PM
wow , fecking magic t and you do seem to have caught a touch of the blarney.
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: launched on May 09, 2010, 03:26:53 PM
Yes - I love it.

If you sang this song to me, I'd do ya!  ;D

Mark
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: Redler on May 09, 2010, 09:11:47 PM
Just a brilliant tune again, Tharek!!! I found the Irish vibe, too...real cool song!!

Kari
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: Ted on May 10, 2010, 12:17:25 AM
That's a really good guitar sound you got there. They rhythmic strumming and the droning strings makes this a really good foundation for some interesting lyrics--and you delivered.
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: Greeny on May 10, 2010, 06:23:44 AM
You romantic so and so! Lol. This sounds like an authentic old Irish folk song, and it's a great piece of songwriting. Your vocals and harmonies are brilliant, and the strumming is so pure. Fantastic. This is one love song I'll be coming back to!


Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: henwrench on May 10, 2010, 10:21:55 AM
brill... the lilt to the guitars is first class, and the vocals are great. Raised a laugh on hearing the first 'your arse', but the song is so good and strong I wasn't laughing by the end... just thinking 'What a damn fine tune'. Nice one, T.

                                               henwrench
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: Geir on May 10, 2010, 10:22:17 AM
Nice song, well played ;)
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: Jim1970 on May 10, 2010, 10:46:47 AM
Those lyrics Are Great!!!!!!
You guitar sound sounds great on my Small Laptop Speakers!!!

JIM
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: OsCKilO on May 10, 2010, 12:05:38 PM
Thanks Guys!! ;D


Did a Video for ya....



https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qlnxspe1N4A
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: Bluesberry on May 10, 2010, 12:21:32 PM
WOW dude, this is really stunning.  Great songwriting.


As a smart dude said: 'What a damn fine tune'




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Dude...did he say "arse"?  Whoa thats heavy



Dude

Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: SE on May 10, 2010, 01:05:51 PM
Great acoustic tune, really loved it and the vids great too.
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: Geir on May 10, 2010, 01:18:45 PM
This one shines !!! It's brilliant !!

Download ..... pie-pod.

Stellar !!
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: Satchwood on May 10, 2010, 01:25:48 PM
Definitely a great new Irish folk song!!  I can see the Keltic Cowboys or The Brazen Heads doing this number!  But heck I can hear you doing this live!  Kind of Celtic Punk Folk CPF :~)
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: hank987 on May 10, 2010, 02:23:43 PM
Guitar sounds great, words are cool and the harmonies...just excellent!
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: Tony W on May 10, 2010, 02:36:42 PM
Wow T, that's a hell of a video accompaniment. Very well done.
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: Geir on May 10, 2010, 04:28:38 PM
Great video too !!!
(http://img1.eyefetch.com/p/eg/325332-742acd07-34af-4ddf-ae0a-8a1c93a60eb3l.jpg)
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: Vanncad on May 10, 2010, 04:41:45 PM
That guitar sounds great "T".

"The sun shines out your arse..." (an English compliment perhaps?)  ???

Damn - it sounds like you've got ORH on backing vox too.

This is pretty cool song. Not quite sure how the ladies will take it though...  ;D
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: Jim1970 on May 10, 2010, 09:15:21 PM
WOW!! Great video for a great song!


JIM
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: OsCKilO on May 11, 2010, 04:24:36 PM
Thanks Guys!


The mantle on this song comes from the term:-
" he/she thinks the sun shines out of his/her arse...."

An impossible scenario which could never happen...

Unless it is a Greenpeace Advert...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UmdAJrXLnns



So I thought....... Telling Someone the sun shines out of their arse must be the ultimate compliment!




Or am I just stupid....???


:D ;) ;D
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: SwanSong on May 11, 2010, 04:32:26 PM
GREAT GREAT VIDEo loved the images of the past fine production
SONG was super and very trancing. and hypnotic. thumbs up on
this very cool song tc Neil.....................................................
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: Nelson on May 11, 2010, 08:48:14 PM
Great Love song T. (smile) More More.
What a great Line....The Sun shines out  of your arse. Just Brilliant.

You really do have some great images to enhance the musical experience.
I really love the thought you put into what you present. Brilliant

-Nelson
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: The Gobi Desert Canoe Club on May 12, 2010, 07:44:22 AM
Not sure if the current Mrs Willie would enjoy it quite as much as me, but I loved it and I've still got a smile on my face typng this and I hate typing. Willie
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: cuthbert on May 12, 2010, 12:30:34 PM
Another great song, Tharek - great Celtic feel and big super-strummy sound! I like how the words can cut both ways.

That said, must---resist----urge to type some potty humor.  :D
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: Ferryman on May 12, 2010, 02:19:08 PM
I love the song and the arrangement and it's a great performance but the lyrics confused me because saying you think the sun shine's out of someone's ar*e is always a negtive thing in my book, so I wasn't sure if you were being ironic, complimentary or cutting. I presume it's a compliment but it certainly threw me!

Cheers,

Nigel
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: Rata-tat-tat on May 12, 2010, 10:45:03 PM
T... love it... love the video too. Very cleverly written... And the production is just flippin stellar... I'm humbled by your greatness. Must show too Mrs. Rat. See if she gets it or if she lets me have it. (I got a flashlight in my hand now) LOL
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: Flash Harry on May 13, 2010, 02:29:26 AM
My god man it's anthemic!

Just fantastic!

 
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: Gu Djin on June 28, 2010, 02:21:38 AM
Yes stopping a love song becoming mushy is an art you've masted.  Great lyric - has a touch of - could be the wrong band here - The Pogues and Kirsty Mcall.

Perfect counter too all the soppy boyband stuff that seems to stem from that place across from the Isle of MAN.

Nice.

Leigh
Title: Re: Your Light
Post by: Tangled Wires on June 28, 2010, 03:51:52 PM
Brought a smile to my face, not only due to the "arse" reference, but also because I am so pleased to have listened to a such a great song.

The vid is cool too