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Title: Change
Post by: antisocialworker on January 23, 2010, 11:53:41 PM
Wanted to try one of these "unplugged" tunes
Havent played my acoustic in a long time.
The furnace was running when i recorded this
I couldnt make the guitar any louder, I use super extra light guage electric strings on my acoustic
If you listen close you can actually hear the "change"



I changed for you
I changed for me
I changed the way you look at me

I changed my looks
I changed my style
What it brought made it all worthwhile



I changed my heart
I changed my soul
you gotta change when life takes its toll


you change with time
you change indeed
sometimes the change is all you need

forgive yourself for the bad you've done
enjoy your life and have some fun
and when your feeling blue
remember baby I love you


You know we'll both succeed
cause Love is all you need
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Post by: Redler on January 24, 2010, 02:22:44 AM
What a nice acoustic pop song, Antisocialworker! I like this type of easygoing pop. The gtr solo was fine!! Thanks for adding lyrics, too...

-Kari
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Post by: launched on January 24, 2010, 05:49:33 AM
The electric strings sound great - Nice and crisp. Cool lyrics, and smooth vox.

Mark
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Post by: Groundy on January 24, 2010, 05:55:43 AM
Great sound asw, good tune, well done......Alex
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Post by: Torren61 on January 24, 2010, 08:17:55 AM
Cool song.
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Post by: lg on January 24, 2010, 08:22:45 AM
Way cool song!

LG
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Post by: Satchwood on January 24, 2010, 11:43:24 AM
This is a nice light-hearted song - cool !!  Enjoyed listening - cool chords and solo too!
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Post by: antisocialworker on January 24, 2010, 01:02:45 PM
thanks folks... though this sounded better last night when I was drunk. go figure
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Post by: 64Guitars on January 24, 2010, 05:41:04 PM
Another great song, antisocialworker. You really have a knack for songwriting. And the vocals are great too. You've mentioned a couple of times that you don't like the sound of your voice. I think that's probably pretty common among singers. But you really have nothing to worry about. Your vocals are quite good. Keep singing!


Quote from: antisocialworker on January 23, 2010, 11:53:41 PMWanted to try one of these "unplugged" tunes

I'm assuming that you wrote this song yourself and that it's not something that you'd previously recorded with electric instruments (electric guitar, synth, etc). If so, then I'm afraid that it's not what I mean by unplugged and I can't include it in the Unplugged Festival Jukebox (https://songcrafters.org/Festivals/Unplugged-2010.html). An unplugged song isn't merely an acoustic song. It's an acoustic cover of a song that was originally electric. For example, Geir did a great unplugged cover of Deep Purple's "Smoke on the Water". But it doesn't have to be a commercial song. If you prefer, you can cover another member's original electric song. Or, you can even cover one of your own electric songs as Gritter did with his "City After You" (https://songcrafters.org/forum/index.php?topic=5052.msg62697#msg62697) which had originally featured Moog synth bass (https://songcrafters.org/forum/index.php?topic=5049.msg62593#msg62593).

I hope you'll give it a try. I'd love to hear what you'll come up with.

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Post by: antisocialworker on January 24, 2010, 06:13:27 PM
oh I get it now
thanks 64.  I listened to Geirs version of smoke on the water
it'll be hell to even try to compete with that,
or ORH's entry. But it sure does sound like fun!
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Post by: Saijinn Maas on January 25, 2010, 12:44:36 AM
This is wicked cool!

Great job!
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Post by: Gritter on November 09, 2010, 02:27:14 PM
this is great!

B   U    M     P
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Post by: Geir on November 09, 2010, 03:45:24 PM
Indeed !!!
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Post by: Vanncad on November 09, 2010, 08:31:47 PM
Great bump!

Gotta love an AWS tune!

QuoteThe furnace was running when i recorded this
- holy sh*t, can I relate to that!!  ;D ;D ;D
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Post by: hardlock on November 09, 2010, 09:13:02 PM
Opps, sorry I missed this one.  GREAT all-around song AWS!  Really like it lots!