Songcrafters.org

Post Your Work => Original Songs => Topic started by: henwrench on January 07, 2010, 03:31:36 PM

Title: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: henwrench on January 07, 2010, 03:31:36 PM
well, well, well, what have we got here then.... boy, this took some doing.... it's all live, the whole shebang... been out most of the night.... thanks to Pete for doing some Drum stuff and Nick for the cheesy piano... all recorded on the microBR and thats about it... I know the vocals are a bit low but...maybe I'll post the shit I'm hollerin' someday....til then.....xxxx

                                           henwrench
              [soundclick]8580633[/soundclick]
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Tangled Wires on January 07, 2010, 03:40:20 PM
Fantastic Stuff Henwrench, been tapping my foot to this all the way through!

One of your best this!
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: OsCKilO on January 07, 2010, 03:43:35 PM
This is top shelf bro!!!

How did you get that effect on the vox live!?!?

Awesome!!!!


Tight song bro!!!!!!


Freaking Awesome!!!!
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: henwrench on January 07, 2010, 04:02:38 PM
ain't no fx, just double tracked

   i know this should go in lyrics but whaT THE hell....

    she fell 4000 feet and landed on my way
    she split my skin with a single flick of her whip-tail
   she's cute in a head too big for the body kinda way
    I'm sure she'll make a pretty fine wife someday

     Jane, let me see your room
     Wanna stay in your room
     Let me under your bed

   she's cute in a face too big for the head
   kinda way
   Eviller than keniveller on Pay Day
    with stick-like legs and hair
   Blacker than Reggie Kray
    I'm sure you'll make a pretty fine wife
    So some say

  chorus bit plus
    Jane, come and cut y'teeth on me
    let me under your bed

     she's cute!
     your bed, your bed
     let me under you...

   something like that anyway....

                                     fuck, it's COLD, man

                                                   henwrench    xxxx
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: OsCKilO on January 07, 2010, 04:04:57 PM
Damn!!!  Your Voice is Great Bro!!!

That Voice could sell records!!!



And Yep... It is Fooking freezing here!
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Satchwood on January 07, 2010, 04:12:44 PM
Holy Moly this if Flippin great - just flippin crazy great !!!  I luv it !!!  So off the wall off the hook great !!!

btw it's 70 degrees F today :) in sunny ArizonA
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: henwrench on January 07, 2010, 04:28:57 PM
Quote from: Satchwood on January 07, 2010, 04:12:44 PMbtw it's 70 degrees F today :) in sunny ArizonA

   you are off the scale, dude! it's only -3C here and thats unusual in itself... it rarely goes below zero, like once every twenty years or so.... oh man, I need more booze, cos at least that don't freeze.... unlike my feet...

                                      henwrench

    normally, it's t-shirts and shorts all year round....wheres my jumper?
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Gritter on January 07, 2010, 04:33:12 PM
Whatta track!!! You are the master! I Love it. Awesome recording!!!

THe drums sound so great - so you were all playing together? were the drums mic'ed? did they go through a mixer?

Brilliant mang brilliant!
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Gnasty on January 07, 2010, 04:41:19 PM
Very cool henwrench! It`s definitely original. Love the break beat near the end. Love the diversity of songs on this site. Glad i found you all :)

Peace out
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: henwrench on January 07, 2010, 04:43:30 PM
Quote from: Gritter on January 07, 2010, 04:33:12 PMTHe drums sound so great - so you were all playing together? were the drums mic'ed? did they go through a mixer?

  Drums, piano and 1 guit thru cheap mixer. (drums stereo overheads) all into 2 trcks... guit 2 and bass onto 3 and 4..... BOUNCE!... synth and guit 3.... BOUNCE!....   Two Lead vocals and b/vs together.... DONE!.... I really can't sing, so I always double track and hard pan L/R, and it works for so many of my heroes.... thats about it.... :)

                                                        henwrench
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Wiley on January 07, 2010, 05:10:58 PM
This is very catchy!!  Yup toe tapping, thats a good description!!
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Oldrottenhead on January 07, 2010, 05:26:46 PM
wow mark, the small faces crash into the wonderstuff in a helium factory, keep lickin thos frogs  man.
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: henwrench on January 07, 2010, 05:34:48 PM
Quote from: oldrottenhead on January 07, 2010, 05:26:46 PMin a helium factory

   it's all the fresh, cold sea air. My word, it livens you up when no body turned up with any w**d... fuckers! Gotta stick with the Baileys with Coffee  :-[ but it works... ;)

                                     henwrench
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Oldrottenhead on January 07, 2010, 05:36:22 PM
you in the o   zone baby
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: cuthbert on January 07, 2010, 05:55:31 PM
Great song, henwrench - especially loved the drony synths and tempo hitches. Your vocals sounded good to my ears, and not too low in the mix - I too am a fan of the double-tracking.  ;)
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: des0free on January 07, 2010, 08:40:29 PM
This is excellent.  Reminiscent to me of early (Peter Gabriel era) Genesis, which I like a lot.
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Ferryman_1957 on January 08, 2010, 02:45:36 AM
It may be -15 degrees outside but it's many degrees away from normal in the land of the Henwrench. An absolute killer, great, great sounds for a live recording. The tempo changes and wackiness of the slightly off kilter guitar add a lovable edge to this, and the keyboard sounds are great, they really make this so hooky. And the vocals, well they are just awesome. They are at just the right level for me, and the high parts are fab! It's a great song, but we are kind of getting used to that from you, no surprises there. I hope you are getting this stuff out in the real world, it is really, really strong material that needs (and deserves) a wider audience.

Now you have to share more with us how you did this and who your buddies are that helped out. Part of a regular Henny band? And how did you get such a great live recording - everything going through a mixer, some overdubs of the instrument parts?

BTW, this shares a lot of common ground with Bosko Schwarz's work on this site - do check it out if you haven't, you will really like it.

Cheers,

Nigel
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Nelson on January 08, 2010, 07:08:23 AM
Great job.  Live recording or not.  You guys are jamming.
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: lg on January 08, 2010, 08:04:16 AM
This is way out there...I Love It!
Bravo

LG
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: mr2kewl on January 08, 2010, 10:25:20 AM
i was effing blown away by this cut!!!

top shelf, henwrench

8)
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Satchwood on January 08, 2010, 11:17:03 AM
This is my fave Henwrench!!!  This is just so much fun to listen to !!!  Great stuff!!!
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Covermark on January 08, 2010, 03:01:13 PM
Henwrench, you often make me smile with your songs.

As you've said it yourself ... you might not be a great guitarplayer, you're hell of a songwriter !!

two thumbs up !!!!!

btw, it's -5 C here in Holland and I'm thinking on staying a few weeks at Satch's place. No worry, I'll bring my own beer  :D
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Satchwood on January 08, 2010, 11:51:05 PM
Gotta listen to this flippin crazy-ass tune again - just luv it!!!  That chorus is so dang catchy!!!

Covermark - bring some good beer and you can stay for free :)
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Satchwood on January 09, 2010, 02:16:16 AM
flippin luv this tune..............can i down load it?  want to put it on my mp3 player.....ahhhh this is flippin wild ass great !!!  cant sleep 2nite................soo it's some henwrench Jane's Room for me!
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Covermark on January 09, 2010, 03:34:00 AM
Quote from: Satchwood on January 08, 2010, 11:51:05 PMCovermark - bring some good beer and you can stay for free :)

Choose yourself out of these dutch brands : Heineken, Dommelsch, Amstel or Grolsch ?

Heineken : 1 week stay
Dommelsch : 1,5 weeks  stay
Grolsch : 0,5 week stay (gives me head ache)
Amstel : 1 month stay
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: zabel8484 on January 09, 2010, 06:59:21 AM
This Totally totally FUN FUN FUN!!
hahaha, i'm jumping around this track...
Way The GO!!!!
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: SteveB on January 09, 2010, 08:42:25 AM
HWH - If you (and your Friends on this cut, and your musical ideas), had been around and functioning in any year between 1960 & 1974 you would have had a recording contract within days.
(Others will disagree with that time-frame, but so be it). This is a very catchy toon indeed. In fact these quirky-outpourings seem to be your stock in trade, which gives you a couple of pluses on the originality scale. I could honestly see you having a cult-following among the populace-at-large, though possibly not much more than that because musical sophistication has been squeezed out of most of the young music-buying public (again, others will disagree. Oh well). But long may your sound-meanderings continue, the couple that I have heard have repaid the effort many times over.
Very well done.
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Bluesberry on January 14, 2010, 09:41:25 AM
Deal lord, I almost missed this one.  I was still in my post christmas stress/depression/drunk/blahhhhhgh hangover and was not too active there for a bit.  But today I am hearing this finally.  This song is waking me up.  I am inspired by this song.  I want some of what you were taking that night, it sounds so damn fun.  This is what is so great about this site.  We drift along, songs get posted, people come and go, and one day a song like this pops up, brilliant, beautiful, inspiring.  Thanks for sharing this one, just lovely.  I have nothing constructive to say here, I am too blown away by the girth of this, the weight of the creative impulse required to fashion something like this out of raw sound.  Art good sir, this is art.  Keep them coming Henwrench, keep them coming.
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Mach on January 14, 2010, 04:37:19 PM
Man this is frikkin' awesome. Where do you come up with this stuff?
"Eviller than keniveller on Pay Day with stick-like legs and hair"~~luv it!
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Torren61 on January 14, 2010, 10:03:39 PM
Ok.  I'm done listening to the friggin' radio.  There is more talent on this site.

What a very cool song.  I even got the Reggie Kray reference (I'm in the States).  Nicely done.

Btw, what's double tracking?  Also, what's a measure?  How do I know what key I'm playing in?  How do I know if it's an eighth note or a quarter note?
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Bluesberry on January 15, 2010, 06:21:07 AM
Quote from: Torren61 on January 14, 2010, 10:03:39 PMBtw, what's double tracking?  Also, what's a measure?  How do I know what key I'm playing in?  How do I know if it's an eighth note or a quarter note?
You got questions Torren, thats a good thing.  Time to dig in a bit. 

Great flipping song...stands up to repeat listens (12 and counting...)
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: henwrench on January 15, 2010, 07:21:24 AM
Quote from: Torren61 on January 14, 2010, 10:03:39 PMBtw, what's double tracking?  Also, what's a measure?  How do I know what key I'm playing in?  How do I know if it's an eighth note or a quarter note?

  Double tracking is the process of doing say, a lead vocal, and then doing it again on another track. I then pan one say L20, the other R20 and you get a bit of natural chorusing going on because the two vocals are going to have very slight differences in tuning and delivery. I like to pretty much always double track rhythm guitars and hard pan them left and right (L50/R50) which just gives a huge stereo spread and makes it all sound nice and wide.
  As for the other questions - Pass! Try asking 48 or somebody who know's more about theory, I'm afraid it's never been a strong point of mine.

                                  henwrench
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: chapperz66 on January 15, 2010, 08:43:05 AM
I just had to say that I agree with the comments everybody has already made. Great song, truly original and very well recorded.  Love it.

Paul Chapman
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: pjd1 on January 15, 2010, 01:37:30 PM
Ferkin great song with loads goin on must listen to some more of youre stuff , great arangement must have took you a while to nail some of those stops Talented lad !!!

Keep them comin !!!!

PJD1
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Oldrottenhead on January 15, 2010, 01:41:27 PM
bb you are a man that can sum up what we are all thinkng and cant express in a sentence.
yeah baby                  this is art!


Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: mike on January 15, 2010, 02:00:35 PM
This is the second time in a row I've been really impressed with your material.  This is just great.  Keep them coming please.  You get another maybe eight or so like the two I've heard recently and you'll have an album that would have to sell.  Very cool lyrics also.

Mike
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Satchwood on January 16, 2010, 09:55:06 PM
Luv this crazy ass song man - just flippin luv it!!
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Owen Bourne on February 03, 2010, 01:57:17 PM
Tharek is giving me guided tour!

Love this track. Bit like Supergrass who I love. Like the off key piano bits and really lively. Great stuff you should be signed to label but it's all shit business better off without it.
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: henwrench on February 03, 2010, 02:00:25 PM
Quote from: Owen Bourne on February 03, 2010, 01:57:17 PMGreat stuff you should be signed to label but it's all shit business better off without it.

   Yep. Sounds like you know how shit it can all be too. This place is way more fun and rewarding.

                                                henwrench
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Gringo on February 03, 2010, 03:17:11 PM
Wow, did not be hearing this one before. Is Jane a real person or off a cartoon like what your brain must be?
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Gritter on February 03, 2010, 03:45:07 PM
Seems Gringo's got a bit of a man-crush on you dude...as do many of us.
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: OsCKilO on February 03, 2010, 09:22:56 PM
Quote from: Gritter on February 03, 2010, 03:45:07 PMSeems Gringo's got a bit of a man-crush on you dude...as do many of us.


Me Too!


The Man is Musical Greatness!!



Henny!



Do something with this shit Bro!


Sell The Licence or something!!!!


Damn!!

To Good for forum work bro!
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Saijinn Maas on February 24, 2010, 11:06:57 AM
Didn't realize I never commented on this.

This is just awesome! Probably one of my favorite songs of everything you've done, and I like em all! I can't help but smile when i listen to this. Love the contradiction of what the song is about contrasted with how happy-go-lucky it sounds. Great work.

Dude, you definitely need to release a CD. I'd definitely buy it!
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Geir on February 24, 2010, 01:56:43 PM
Can't believe I almost missed this one !!!!!

This is absobloodylutely fantastic !!!!!

WOW this really made my day SO much better !!

I don't even know what to say ...

You are my new hero !!! (amongst other ... don't worry you my old heroes !!! :D )

EXCELLENT !!!!!!!!!
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Bluesberry on February 24, 2010, 02:37:29 PM
Quote from: Gringo on February 03, 2010, 03:17:11 PMWow, did not be hearing this one before. Is Jane a real person or off a cartoon like what your brain must be?
Gringo said it best, and I quoted him saying it best, and I am reading this to myself, this quote of Gringo saying it best.  To summarize, I love this song Henwrench.  I should listen to Gringo more often.
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: SwanSong on February 24, 2010, 04:49:48 PM
Hi there
Nice song. enjoyed it .. very unique vocals. reminds me of a BLIND MELON SONG NO RAIN
as far as that unique style they had. but great song and agree this is commerical ready
GL with this song . Neil
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Satchwood on February 24, 2010, 06:05:55 PM
Just a fantastic song Mark !!  Always puts a smile on my face when I listen to this!
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: OsCKilO on February 24, 2010, 06:44:24 PM
I am Gonna Practice the art of "Untruth" on your Thread...

Ready?


Hear I Go (Lies in Italics) ....   :-



I don't love this song...

This is not some of the best Music I Have ever heard.....

This could never be released as a Main stream song.......

I don't think you are one of the Most Talented People in the UK Music scene....

I am not wearing women's Panties
....




How did I do?

Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Rata-tat-tat on February 24, 2010, 07:36:59 PM
This is f#*kin unbeleivalble. It's like Queens of the Stoneage meets the Doors. I don't even know what to say. I'm totally blown away Henwrench. This song has soooo many fantastic nuances floating around and they all fit perfectly. And your vocals... HHHOOOLLLYYY SHHHEEEOOOOTTTT... top notch. I agree with so many other posts here can't quote them all, but I will say you have gained one more man-crush bro. As I sit  chair of envy... I can only dream of one day creating such a wonderful peace of music. My hat is off to you bro.


V/R

Tod
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Gritter on February 24, 2010, 07:42:12 PM
QuoteIt's like Queens of the Stoneage meets the Doors

Yes...that's it exactly!
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Satchwood on August 01, 2010, 01:32:59 PM
Needed to go visit Jane's Room today !!   BUMP

Def my fave from the Renwench Pipewrench Hermwench Henwrench!!
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: henwrench on August 01, 2010, 02:07:49 PM
Tommy, there is something wrong with you..... :D ;)

                                         henbleach
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Satchwood on August 01, 2010, 02:30:50 PM
Mwah ha ha ha ha   ~   really dig this tune Henspench  ~  i always thought that there was somethin wrong with me .... ha!

....one more comment and you hit the sacred 666 post read number......
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Speed Demon on August 02, 2010, 05:37:03 AM
I listened to this tune, once, then again, and then thought to myself, "Henwrench is the new Frank Zappa".
An awe-inspiring composition. Thanks for sharing it.
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Tony W on August 02, 2010, 02:52:55 PM
This is just crazy enough to be awesome.
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Jim1970 on August 02, 2010, 03:25:41 PM
Thanks for Bumping this one!!!

Almost missed this Gem!!!

JIM
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Saijinn Maas on August 03, 2010, 10:46:54 AM
Excellent bump! One of my favorite Henny songs! ;)
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: SE on August 03, 2010, 11:53:46 AM
Well bumped Tommy, don,t know why, but missed this, but so glad to hear it now, off the wall quality, just magic.
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: JMD2010 on August 08, 2010, 11:22:53 AM
You are so Damned good IT HURTS !
Great stuff.

John
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Satchwood on August 08, 2010, 04:10:52 PM
This is great LISTEN every time i listen to it!!   "She's eviler then knieviler on pay day"!!  My all time fave of yours Henpench!!
   
Title: Re: Jane's Room by henwrench
Post by: Oldrottenhead on March 21, 2017, 07:19:42 AM
spier bump for henwrench and gringo.