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Title: "Better" (1st BR song)
Post by: GeoHendrickson on December 06, 2009, 12:23:19 PM
Comments/suggestions welcome

http://www.box.net/shared/rmvejfnk5g (http://www.box.net/shared/rmvejfnk5g)


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Post by: BossMicroBRew on December 06, 2009, 04:17:03 PM
Cool, man. Like to dual vocals. nice touch

BossMicroBRew
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Post by: SteveB on December 06, 2009, 04:26:01 PM
GHN - Well, you may well have painted yourself into a corner with this, just how are you going to make your next song better than this?!!  ;D
Superb. Laid-back, yet flowing. 3 repeat plays straight off. Surely a talent found.
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Post by: OsCKilO on December 06, 2009, 04:29:00 PM
Hmmmmm...

Trying to find a word that suits this tune.......



Oh Yeah......

Got it....








AWESOME!!!!






Catchy Tune!!!! Sounds Like Leonard Cohen at points!


Love it!






Peace

T(Osckilo)
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Post by: fenderbender on December 06, 2009, 04:44:51 PM
hey thats nice --
nice tune there-----
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Post by: Vanncad on December 06, 2009, 08:07:54 PM
Hey GH - First of all, welcome!

This is a cool, catchy tune. Love the shaker!
Piano is cool too!

 -  Vann
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Post by: Satchwood on December 06, 2009, 09:16:48 PM
Wow very nice 1st song - Welcome and great job !!!  Enjoyed listening!!!
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Post by: The Reverend 48 on December 07, 2009, 03:18:20 AM
Welcome on board
Great vibe going on here!
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Post by: Ferryman_1957 on December 07, 2009, 05:30:08 AM
Excellent first post, nice recording and production all round. Vox sound great and I partuclarly like the drums - what did you use? the guitars are also very well recorded, great sound on the acoustics.

Cheers,

Nigel
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Post by: Wiley on December 07, 2009, 06:07:42 AM
I agree with Nigel, the drums are really well done.  Not overpowering like they cn sometimes be.   A very good mix!..  Great first post!!  And yes Welcome!!
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Post by: Gritter on December 07, 2009, 11:26:35 AM
This is a gem of a song...I checked out your website...very well put together...great music, great voice, amazing songwriting kills...You are a star!

Welcome to the site - you're gonna have a lot of fans here in no time.

I look forward to your future posts.

Sandy.
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Post by: Tony W on December 07, 2009, 01:22:03 PM
Everyone is right, this is good, and I am a fan.
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Post by: Krasi on December 07, 2009, 01:25:53 PM
This really sounds amazing. I listened to it twice in a row and I really like it. Like the others said its soo well put together. Everything is on its place and it sounds pro indeed. First br song??? Wow....
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Post by: Glenn Mitchell on December 08, 2009, 12:05:42 AM
Wow. very nice groove. Solid but not heavy. Well put together. Loved the drum track, the separation, the tone. The only thing I would want is the vox more out front.. and more songs.
An excellent introduction.
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Post by: Geir on December 08, 2009, 11:15:02 AM
After listening to Native Son, I went looking for more!

This is another great song!! Love it !
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Post by: SE on December 08, 2009, 01:06:04 PM
Hey great tune love the acoustic and vox hope to hear more.
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Post by: lexman on December 10, 2009, 02:08:22 AM
Very very nice song.
If this is your first...I am curious for the next.
Keep on doing the good work
Title: Song "Better" ,,
Post by: GeoHendrickson on January 09, 2010, 03:42:13 PM
 Downloaded 63 times and still counting..!!! thank you all very much..!
"The Light's on" coming very soon...think you'll like it.
Peace,
George
Title: Re: "Better" (1st BR song)
Post by: 64Guitars on July 26, 2011, 04:54:18 PM
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