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Title: "Oil" - original
Post by: Geir on August 04, 2009, 01:13:18 PM
A ship hit ground under a storm last friday at 1am. I saw the ship minutes before that as I was up watching my boat in the storm and helping others saving their boats. We didn't get the news until the morning and when the wind turned we also got the oil .....

Luckily not too bad but bad enough to inspire this song.

I will elaborate more later and add som pics I've taken.

If you google "Langesund Oil Leak" (http://www.google.co.uk/search?hl=en&tbo=1&tbs=cdr%3A1%2Ccd_min%3A2%2F08%2F2009&q=%22Oil+spill%22+Norway+langesund&btnG=Search&meta=) you'll get more info.

(http://www.sea-alarm.org/wp-content/uploads/2009/08/ship-oil-1-300x199.jpg) (http://www.sea-alarm.org/wp-content/uploads/2009/08/ship-oil-1.jpg)
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Title: Re: "Oil" - original
Post by: Geir on August 04, 2009, 01:19:18 PM
Here's the bird I found: It has been taken care of and will be washed and fed.......
(http://lh3.ggpht.com/_1lVlokE-EDk/SniJTeFRaVI/AAAAAAAABZA/4U7dk3DY2MI/s512/Bilde085.jpg)
Title: Re: "Oil" - original
Post by: Satchwood on August 04, 2009, 01:25:18 PM
Great original Geir - put together quite nicely!!  Good strummin and singing that gave me a picture of what this spill might be like!  Oil, we all need it, but it sure can make a big mess....
Title: Re: "Oil" - original
Post by: Bluesberry on August 04, 2009, 01:26:51 PM
Incredible song Geir.  You should see if your local radio station will play this.  It reminds us that the modern world is wonderful and terrible at the same time.
Title: Re: "Oil" - original
Post by: OsCKilO on August 04, 2009, 02:09:43 PM
I have never heard a song about this subject before.

Your very personal dealings with this subject has created something with an important and thought provoking message. Stunningly put to music and song.


I hope this is resolved soon for you guys.....

Peace friend

T(Osckilo)
 
Title: Re: "Oil" - original
Post by: StevieM on August 04, 2009, 02:27:22 PM
Great song, as always, Geir. It's always sad for everyone when this sort of thing happens. I feel for the crews too, I used to be in the Merchant Navy.

Here you go T, not quite the same, but similar subject. Always been one of my big favs

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q0DqPSF2fyo
Title: Re: "Oil" - original
Post by: launched on August 04, 2009, 02:28:03 PM
Are you sure you don't listen to Frank Black? This similar to something he might do - It's really good.

I agree you should try to get this played on a local station - It's personal info that everyone in the area can relate to.

A bleak picture was painted - Hope everything turns out ok in the end.

A good song can always ease the pain a little...

Great post!!

Mark

Title: Re: "Oil" - original
Post by: Bosko Schwartz on August 04, 2009, 02:31:26 PM
Beautiful awesomeness!!!

 :o :o :o ;D ;D ;D :o :o :o
Title: Re: "Oil" - original
Post by: 64Guitars on August 04, 2009, 02:34:30 PM
Great song, Geir! And an excellent production. Loved the sound effects. Did you record any of them on the Micro BR or did you find them on the web? Also loved the drums. Were they done on the Micro BR? The fills work really well.

I hope you don't mind that I added a picture and link to your post. It seemed more appropriate up there than down here.

Title: Re: "Oil" - original
Post by: guitarron on August 04, 2009, 02:59:27 PM
What a fantastic story and tune to go with it
good stuff-man
Title: Re: "Oil" - original
Post by: OsCKilO on August 04, 2009, 03:07:14 PM
Quote from: StevieM on August 04, 2009, 02:27:22 PMGreat song, as always, Geir. It's always sad for everyone when this sort of thing happens. I feel for the crews too, I used to be in the Merchant Navy.

Here you go T, not quite the same, but similar subject. Always been one of my big favs

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q0DqPSF2fyo

A friend of mine was in the navy.

He talks about how he could hear the ship bending in a big storm.

Scary stuff....
Title: Re: "Oil" - original
Post by: OsCKilO on August 04, 2009, 03:13:15 PM
Just listened again through headphones...... Bloody hell this is produced to an amazing standard!

How did you get your voice so low in the intro?!?!

You are a Suberb Singer songwriter G!

You really captured the topic with this one...
Title: Re: "Oil" - original
Post by: tafka on August 04, 2009, 03:49:45 PM
this is powerful Geir , and the intro sounds like "the new cranes" which no-one has heard of?? great talent , a well great song

T
Title: Re: "Oil" - original
Post by: Ferryman on August 04, 2009, 03:56:48 PM
Geir, you are chasing Greeny now in becoming another masterful singer/songwriter. This has a great feel to it, beautifully recorded, everything is so clear in the mix. Your vox are really, really good on this (and you've done some great performances in the past). You captured the emotion of the moment beautifully.

Cheers,

Nigel
Title: Re: "Oil" - original
Post by: Wiley on August 04, 2009, 05:25:07 PM
Wow!!  YOu have captured it all. Most excellent job!! You always show so much emotion in your songs. I love it.
Title: Re: "Oil" - original
Post by: SteveG on August 04, 2009, 05:53:31 PM
Love them waves!

Great song, even if inspired by a very sad event.
Title: Re: "Oil" - original
Post by: Davo on August 04, 2009, 08:27:25 PM
Where was this oil spill btw?  Its so cool that you can  make a relevant song like this so quickly.  It seems to take me weeks and months.
Title: Re: "Oil" - original
Post by: Oldrottenhead on August 05, 2009, 02:21:57 AM
this is simply stunning geir stunning we are not worthy,

 i think launched mentioned a frank black comparison. he did a song called the st francis dam disaster, but he wrote it from the perspective of the water.


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L6UZSy1vPEw
Title: Re: "Oil" - original
Post by: Flash Harry on August 05, 2009, 02:32:45 AM
Such a good song Geir, and a news broadcast too. You've done some great songwriting here and the playing and singing are excellent.

This song has to touch everyone who listens to it. How can you not be moved by the simplicity of the reporting of an incident and the damage that ensued? This is so much more immediate than seeing a bulletin on a news program. Perhaps all news events ought to be delivered as songs. I'm sure that more people would pay attention.

It's a wonderful song Geir. Thank you for bringing me the news from Norway. I hope your part of the coast is cleaned up and restored to it's natural conditions soon.
 
Title: Re: "Oil" - original
Post by: Greeny on August 05, 2009, 02:52:33 AM
I love the way the opening, watery vox give way to the clear strummed beauty of the first verse. Great use of effects too. But most importantly, this is an inspired and very tight piece of songwriting. Love the way you sing... kind of fragile but with a bit of gravel. It all works SO well. A lovely, lovely song and performance.
Title: Re: "Oil" - original
Post by: hooper on August 05, 2009, 05:42:22 AM
Well done Geir!  It's all there: the event, the inspiration, the response of writing the song and the performance.  A real lesson in songwriting and production. The special effects add seasoning but your basic guitar and vocal is very solid.  Fine job!
Title: Re: "Oil" - original
Post by: knniggits on August 05, 2009, 10:44:53 AM
Magical work!
Really cool song!
Powerfull stuff,loved the way you delivered your vocals.
Title: Re: "Oil" - original
Post by: Geir on August 10, 2009, 06:24:27 PM
Thank you all for kind comments, sorry I haven't had time to answer you before.

I left my cabin nearly a week ago and things look ... well not good, but not too bad either....today I heard that there's been more oil in the Rognsfjord, but I haven't had time to go out and check it myself yet. The fucked up thing is that the ship has not yet been emptied for oil!!! so it's still leaking after 10 days of calm weather!!!

Quote from: 64Guitars on August 04, 2009, 02:34:30 PMLoved the sound effects. Did you record any of them on the Micro BR or did you find them on the web? Also loved the drums. Were they done on the Micro BR? The fills work really well.
I did try to record the soundeffects with my yoga stereomic (as I've done earlier) but because of wind and rain the result was too crappy to use .... the drums are all mbr, as everything but the soundeffects are. Sondfx added in Audacity. Mastered on mbr.

QuoteI hope you don't mind that I added a picture and link to your post. It seemed more appropriate up there than down here.
Not at all ! Thank you for doing that, I had very little time/bandwith when posting this so it was a welcomed addition!

Quote from: tafka on August 04, 2009, 03:49:45 PMthis is powerful Geir , and the intro sounds like "the new cranes" which no-one has heard of??
You've mentioned them before and I did a search without luck on finding some audiosamples :( Do you have a link?

Quote from: Davo on August 04, 2009, 08:27:25 PMWhere was this oil spill btw?  Its so cool that you can  make a relevant song like this so quickly.  It seems to take me weeks and months.
The spill was Just south of Langesund in Norway. Langesund is the town closest to my cabin, and close to Porsgrunn, where I live too. see pic 3:

Mark (& Jim) Thanks for pointing me to frank black

Flash Harry, that's a brilliant idea, so long as we don't have death metal for every fatal accident  ::) ...........

Weather Report would be nice tho  :D .... and Traffic .........




1. A is where the ship stranded. B is where my cabin is.
(http://lh5.ggpht.com/_1lVlokE-EDk/SoCrGR0zgrI/AAAAAAAABZo/1ZV2zvdMQkI/Rognstranda-S%C3%A5stein.jpg)

2. A is my cabin, B is where I stood in the storm, watching the ship pass by, and C is my boat and where I found the duck.
(http://lh3.ggpht.com/_1lVlokE-EDk/SoC0-4i72oI/AAAAAAAABao/-K137llau7g/s512/Hytta%20satelitt%20gulesider%20m%20pil.jpg)

3
(http://lh4.ggpht.com/_1lVlokE-EDk/SoC00KMDT2I/AAAAAAAABaI/1CyueF2pLMs/kart.jpg)

Title: Re: "Oil" - original
Post by: Davo on August 11, 2009, 01:15:25 AM
Ahh I see-clearly this struck a chord with you, me too.  Flash Harry is correct SEEING, smelling, hearing, feeling death and destruction is quite different from reading about it in the paper, or watching a news report-where you see everything but know nothing (bowie quote I believe).
Old rottenheimer thanks for posting that Frank Black song-Ive never heard it!  How does he come up with that stuff-thats a great topic, like Geirs!

Geir for what its worth-yours is a real song-the genuine deal.