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Post Your Work => Original Songs => Topic started by: Oldrottenhead on July 26, 2009, 03:01:40 PM

Title: rain on your window. music bodie vox/lyric by orh (the boskoschwartzitis mix)
Post by: Oldrottenhead on July 26, 2009, 03:01:40 PM
definitely got a bad case of boskoschwartzitis here is the third take.
Title: Re: rain on your window. music bodie vox/lyric by orh (the boskoschwartzitis mix)
Post by: OsCKilO on July 26, 2009, 07:08:42 PM
I Can actually tell the Difference.....New one for me...

I dont know which one I prefere.........

Harmony  in this one.....?

Cant decide Jim....

Maybe drop the Harmony a Little in the Mix.....
Title: Re: rain on your window. music bodie vox/lyric by orh (the boskoschwartzitis mix)
Post by: launched on July 26, 2009, 08:13:53 PM
I like this one better - Don't ask me why, but it just feels better somehow. The vocals are probably locked in more solidly I think.

A really good song, Jim!!

Mark
Title: Re: rain on your window. music bodie vox/lyric by orh (the boskoschwartzitis mix)
Post by: Blooby on July 26, 2009, 08:21:48 PM


My first reaction was the volume of the vocals, but I think the production works for this tune.  Unforgettably catchy and fun.

I'm going back in to listen again.

Blooby
Title: Re: rain on your window. music bodie vox/lyric by orh (the boskoschwartzitis mix)
Post by: Ferryman_1957 on July 27, 2009, 04:46:35 AM
This one is a better balanced mix IMO, and the vox "fit" better with the overall sound and mix. But there's something plaintive and slighltly "cracked" in the vox on the previous version which have less processing on them in the verse, and I really liked that. But I think on balance this sounds more like the complete article to me. Still a great song regardless.

Cheers,

Nigel
Title: Re: rain on your window. music bodie vox/lyric by orh (the boskoschwartzitis mix)
Post by: Oldrottenhead on July 27, 2009, 04:59:50 AM
QuoteBut I think on balance this sounds more like the complete article to me. Still a great song regardless.
im still not happy with it, so am gonna live with it for a bit and try again soon.
Title: Re: rain on your window. music bodie vox/lyric by orh (the boskoschwartzitis mix)
Post by: jackofall on July 27, 2009, 05:05:45 AM
Really nice!
Title: Re: rain on your window. music bodie vox/lyric by orh (the boskoschwartzitis mix)
Post by: hooper on July 27, 2009, 05:55:37 AM
There's a lot of entertainment going on here. Lots of ear candy with the fine guitars, double lead vocal and harmony.  Very nice production!
Title: Re: rain on your window. music bodie vox/lyric by orh (the boskoschwartzitis mix)
Post by: Greeny (No longer active) on July 27, 2009, 06:08:04 AM
Tinkering again! You little tinker!

I can see where you're going with this one - the doubled vox are really smooth now. Can't put my finger on what they remind me of. Or maybe they just remind me of you, lol. Either way, they work beautifully. I agree with Nigel that you've lost a touch of emotion and vulnerability from the original, but this sounds done to me.
Title: Re: rain on your window. music bodie vox/lyric by orh (the boskoschwartzitis mix)
Post by: Geir on July 27, 2009, 06:15:51 AM
to quote a good friend of mine :

FMGWAGP !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Title: Re: rain on your window. music bodie vox/lyric by orh (the boskoschwartzitis mix)
Post by: Ted on July 27, 2009, 02:00:04 PM
I've created a new topic for a glossary of terms used on this site.

The first term in the glossary is Boskoschwartzitis (https://songcrafters.org/forum/index.php?topic=3785.msg40719#msg40719).
Title: Re: rain on your window. music bodie vox/lyric by orh (the boskoschwartzitis mix)
Post by: Oldrottenhead on August 08, 2009, 04:10:07 AM
final mix now here http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7934708
Title: Re: rain on your window. music bodie vox/lyric by orh (the boskoschwartzitis mix)
Post by: Oldrottenhead on July 26, 2021, 04:17:29 PM
on this day bump, i need to get off my fat arse and write something.
Title: Re: rain on your window. music bodie vox/lyric by orh (the boskoschwartzitis mix)
Post by: tonyc on July 28, 2021, 12:09:03 PM
great song , flows along superbly , and like the vocal and lyrics , the guitar sounds great to .....cheers tony cee
Title: Re: rain on your window. music bodie vox/lyric by orh (the boskoschwartzitis mix)
Post by: StephenM on July 28, 2021, 11:50:40 PM
I like this alot...great backing track and really rocks along nice and the vocals take you to another place...and that little lead noodling away so nicely...its excellent...glad I got to hear it...
Title: Re: rain on your window. music bodie vox/lyric by orh (the boskoschwartzitis mix)
Post by: Nelly 20 on July 29, 2021, 12:48:07 AM
  Great music! Very good production!
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