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Title: Live your life.
Post by: kenny mac on April 04, 2025, 09:57:15 AM
A song about living in the now and burying your worrys, putting them aside and just living your life.
It's a straight forward guitar rocker.
Hope you like it .



You can't see
For
Those clouds
surrounding you
All you see is
A wall of negativity
It's all right to shine out like a beam
It's all right to go and live the dream

(Chorus)
Stop it
Make your move
rock it
Take that path
Walk it
Make it
Alright
Go and live your life.

You have been
Locked inside a broken dream
Just unwind, and paint yourself
A different dream.

It's all right
to climb up to the top
It's all right
To give it what you've got.

(Chorus)
Stop it
Make your move
rock it
Take that path
Walk it
Make it
Alright
Go and live your life.
Title: Re: Live your life.
Post by: chapperz66 on April 04, 2025, 10:58:14 AM
Sometimes all you need is a straight forward guitar rocker. When it comes with a sound lyrical message it's even better.  And a cool guitar solo ices the cake.
Title: Re: Live your life.
Post by: StephenM on April 04, 2025, 12:31:19 PM
this is what I love about your music:  just kickin ass and takin names with a guitar and a voice.
no gimmicks.  Blue jeans and T shirts rock.
goes from punk to ZZTop... and all in between and I will take that all day long.

I am pinging off the walls... this works.
Title: Re: Live your life.
Post by: Pete C on April 04, 2025, 01:54:19 PM
Love this Kenny, great punk vibe to it and I can really relate to those lyrics at the moment. Cool solo !

Pete
Title: Re: Live your life.
Post by: OdilonGreen on April 04, 2025, 04:06:41 PM
I really like the straight-ahead rock energy to this! The positive, exhorting vibe is a terrific jolt of energy, and the optimistic "life is what we make of it" message, although obviously relevant any time, is especially welcome these days when it is so easy to get lost in world events. It's a real fun toe-tapper!
Title: Re: Live your life.
Post by: drumbum on April 05, 2025, 11:14:09 AM
Cool Tune. Good lyrics. Straight ahead rocker for sure. Any chance of a drumless track?

 :Drumbum
Title: Re: Live your life.
Post by: Farrell Jackson on April 05, 2025, 11:34:17 AM
Kenny is rockin' out and I like it! You've taken a 50's Rock n Roll vibe and brought right into 2025. Cool vocals, words and the guitar solo is scorching!   
Title: Re: Live your life.
Post by: Ted on April 05, 2025, 12:53:48 PM
The chorus is made for an arena ("Stop it/Make your move/Rock it"), begging for crowd call-and-response. You, Kenny, in red leather pants, holding the mic out to the audience, because you know they know the words.

This is one of those songs that could be done in many genres – which is the signature of a solid song. More treble in that guitar tone, and it would be near punk territory. I really like the guitar solo – reminds me a little of Steve Jones (which is probably why my mind went to punk).