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Title: If This Is Drowning By Oldrottenhead
Post by: Oldrottenhead on March 27, 2025, 08:54:28 AM
Messing about with the fender telecaster and this came.

it is what it is.
Drifting slowly
Where the light won't reach
Whispers swirl in the undertow
I'm weightless now
In a world so deep
Your voice I can barely hear
If this is drowning leave me be
If this ain't love then set me free
Every breath
Is a stolen kiss
Every wave says don't let go
The tide pulls soft
like your fingertips
tracing lines in the dark unknown
If this is drowning leave me be
If this ain't love then set me free
Dancing ghosts in the silent blue
The folding shapes of a liquid moon
What if love is just a breath too few
Then let me drown let me stay with you

If This Is Drowning
W/M
By
Oldrottenhead
Fender Telecaster
HB Jazz Bass
Iphone Soft Synth
GarageBand Drums
Vocals
Title: Re: If This Is Drowning By Oldrottenhead
Post by: Diego Ayala on March 27, 2025, 09:42:26 AM
Listening while serving 1st breakfast... Will download as it had me whistling/humming a melody 1st go round. Abrazos from this side🎵🎶
Title: Re: If This Is Drowning By Oldrottenhead
Post by: Pete C on March 27, 2025, 11:29:08 AM
Nice relaxing song, just what I need at the moment. I take it the Spark was involved ? It seems to be inspiring you into making some great music

Pete
Title: Re: If This Is Drowning By Oldrottenhead
Post by: Ray Brookes on March 27, 2025, 12:04:32 PM
Cool laid-back track.
Title: Re: If This Is Drowning By Oldrottenhead
Post by: Oldrottenhead on March 27, 2025, 02:05:07 PM
Quote from: Pete C on March 27, 2025, 11:29:08 AMNice relaxing song, just what I need at the moment. I take it the Spark was involved ? It seems to be inspiring you into making some great music

Pete
not this time, tho I am noodling on my spark 2 most days, this probably came from stuff I've been playing/experimenting whist noodling on it.
Title: Re: If This Is Drowning By Oldrottenhead
Post by: StephenM on March 28, 2025, 05:36:08 AM
typically great ORH track... this one though the vocals hit a little bit higher on the very high scale.
lovely
Title: Re: If This Is Drowning By Oldrottenhead
Post by: kenny mac on March 28, 2025, 06:48:54 PM
Nice one mate.
Like that kick drum on this.

Nice ambiance in that structure.
Title: Re: If This Is Drowning By Oldrottenhead
Post by: thetworegs on March 29, 2025, 11:52:14 AM
Laid back gentle like a lovely hug
Title: Re: If This Is Drowning By Oldrottenhead
Post by: OdilonGreen on March 29, 2025, 01:07:24 PM
I'm really getting into the delicate, pastoral-pop vibe and gentle contemplative aura. Perfect for a lazy weekend afternoon.
Title: Re: If This Is Drowning By Oldrottenhead
Post by: SE on March 29, 2025, 09:30:28 PM
Nice Rotten stuff has all the vibe but all too short!!
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