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Title: Now The
Post by: StephenM on March 25, 2025, 09:22:01 PM
Get on board the train.  We're gonna take you to
that gaseous rain.  It's for you're own good.
I got to corral you in the hood. 
When you die with a bomb strapped to your side
to take out the infidel.  12 virgins clothed in black and
white await you in the bye and bye. 
Take me deeper.  Take away my fear of the reaper. 
Help me find products cheaper.  Be my amazon.
Be my banging gong.  Help me hit the bong.
Let me hear your peepers.  Remove all the package
wrappers.  Deliver me from all those crackers. 
Be my amazon.  Be my bangin gong.
Help me hit the bong.
Look out!  Here comes that truck.  It drives like
they don't give a fuck.  The drivin really sucks.
Save me from the cats whiskers send me a personalized
frisker.  Down the hatch and into the snow avalanche about to blow.
Be my amazon.  Be my bangin gong.  Help me sing my song.  Send in
the adoring throng.  Throw away my hat, provide me with a
baseball bat.  If I ever lose my crown send the orthodontist. 
Going down the glory hole.  After I bathe in my cereal bowl.
Now I'm clean but covered in bananas.  My mom she always wore bandana's.
Hip hop hip hop hip hop hee.  R and B just ain't for me.
I can't rap and I can't funk.  I can barely take a crap. 
Send the gangsters to my door I will pour them full of holes.
I got a paper puncher.  If that don't work I'll use a can scruncher.
Hip hop hip hop hip hop hee I can't rap and I can't sing.
And I can't dance but I spend all day trying to pee.  Now tryin to even the score.
I just turn the numbers higher.  My ai is just plain smarter. 
In a world of clock and dagger I will want an AK47 you don't like guns well
neither do I.  But letting criminals free it frightens me.  Now the politician's are
hidding.

Now The .mp3
Title: Re: Now The
Post by: StephenM on March 25, 2025, 09:25:09 PM
this is like i am getting more varied... like I can intake all news, all music, all feelings, all SM posts, and then focus them into music... weird... I think it has always been that way... but now I am one of the carriers.  Are you?
are you? 

really this was music endeavor just practicing and found this cool guitar thing... and then worked my butt off on the drums but it was so satisfying... and likely the drums should be redone... but I just gave into the spontaneous combustion of this madness...
Title: Re: Now The
Post by: thetworegs on March 26, 2025, 02:00:11 AM
 a prayer from a depraved mind driven by a motivated guitar line works for me
Title: Re: Now The
Post by: chapperz66 on March 26, 2025, 04:25:56 AM
Wild stuff Stephen.

Wouldn't have it any other way.
Title: Re: Now The
Post by: bruno on March 26, 2025, 05:46:13 AM
Wow, that is a serious Fuzz, what did you use for that sound.
Cool tune and energy Stephen.
Title: Re: Now The
Post by: StephenM on March 26, 2025, 06:01:57 AM
Quote from: bruno on March 26, 2025, 05:46:13 AMWow, that is a serious Fuzz, what did you use for that sound.
Cool tune and energy Stephen.


The fuzz is a preset i found on my boss ME-25 guitar processor.  I used to hate that sound then after reading so many SC posts about fuzz I figured I better find out what the fuss was about.  Truth be told I didn't understand how to use it.

Guitar was HB PRS copy single coil on and both pickups.
Thanks for listening friends
Title: Re: Now The
Post by: Ray Brookes on March 26, 2025, 07:44:21 AM
Mad track, Stephen and that guitar sound is crazy. Cool lyrics which too are a little mad! God knows where you get the themes from but they always seem to work somehow.
Title: Re: Now The
Post by: Pete C on March 27, 2025, 03:34:07 PM
You come up with some crazy lyrics Stephen, I wish I had a fraction of your ability. Great track !
Title: Re: Now The
Post by: OdilonGreen on March 29, 2025, 01:28:32 PM
There is a wildness, a frenzy to this, in words and in temperament, that wonderfully captures a mind going in 100 directions at once. Riveting!
Title: Re: Now The
Post by: TPB on March 29, 2025, 05:42:57 PM
From inside the mind of madness it is good to get it out every once in awhile lol I am with you on the fuzz can never get it to sound right for me
Tim
Title: Re: Now The
Post by: Pru on March 29, 2025, 08:21:09 PM
bloody hell! crazy track mate. love the lyrics and that frantic guitar is just wild!
Title: Re: Now The
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on March 30, 2025, 03:50:06 AM
I loved it from the first second, the fuzz guitars and drums just smash you in the face from the get go. And you spitting out all this lyrical content, it's great. The chaos in the music fits the lyrics. You never disappoint.
Title: Re: Now The
Post by: BerryPatch on April 03, 2025, 07:27:16 AM
Wicked late 60's garage rock/pysch sound in the music. I love the swinging feel here with the snare rolls and phenomenal fuzz guitar. The stream of consciousness lyrics fit here as well. ;D Great stuff