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Title: Lord set me free
Post by: kenny mac on March 21, 2025, 02:50:21 PM
Sometimes people struggle with life and personal demons , or feel the world is against them.
I don't know where these songs come from but sometimes I feel they are a message sent to put out to people.
This tells the story of a guy who has hit rock bottom and turns to God for help.
I guess the message here is never give up,there's always someone who will listen ,even if in your mind it is your faith
 
I'm tired of this phase that' is haunting me
I'm tired of this face looking back me
I'm tired of this feeling deep inside my brain
I'm lost in a world that's driving me insane.

In the still of the night
I pray to God to send to send me some light
I need to pull back into line
I need  some  one to send me a sign


Oh lord set me free
From these chains covering me
Oh lord set me free
Just want to live , here in peace

I'm lost and confused
On a lover's path
I'm broken and used
Need to find my way back

Oh lord set me free
From these chains covering me
Oh lord set me free
Just want to live , here in peace 
Title: Re: Lord set me free
Post by: Trist on March 22, 2025, 05:05:27 AM
High quality production and performance, great vocals and delivery, i like that it has a slight gospel touch in the chorus yet the track is more modern and pop rock orientated, really cool guitar solo, its another excellent track and very enjoyable and relatable to many lyrically
do you release any of these songs ?
Title: Re: Lord set me free
Post by: StephenM on March 22, 2025, 08:00:38 AM
this is the real goods KM...
Title: Re: Lord set me free
Post by: kenny mac on March 22, 2025, 09:44:05 AM
Quote from: Trist on March 22, 2025, 05:05:27 AMdo you release any of these songs ?
No but I may look into a website to get them out there to a wider audience.
I think the record buisness is broken now so can't see them getting anywhere.
Title: Re: Lord set me free
Post by: TPB on March 22, 2025, 08:16:50 PM
Good message good music what more do you need I like the upbeat tempo nicely done
Tim
Title: Re: Lord set me free
Post by: thetworegs on March 23, 2025, 09:30:54 AM
nicely produced from the off and excellently performed good one Kenny
Title: Re: Lord set me free
Post by: bruno on March 23, 2025, 12:57:58 PM
I can imagine this full reggae and bob Marley. Great vibe, and fabulous vocal performance. Excellent Kenny, take a bow.
B
Title: Re: Lord set me free
Post by: kenny mac on March 26, 2025, 08:34:26 AM
Quote from: bruno on March 23, 2025, 12:57:58 PMI can imagine this full reggae and bob Marley.
Might be an idea for a future mix Bruno  ;D
Title: Re: Lord set me free
Post by: Pru on March 26, 2025, 12:06:19 PM
love your songs! always first class writing and performing. super-duper vocals and epic production mate. that guitar playing cooks! my god i struggle with just a few chords ha ha.