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Title: Wings of White - alt
Post by: Trist on March 18, 2025, 07:56:53 AM
Something a little different music wise
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Post by: Farrell Jackson on March 18, 2025, 08:23:03 AM
I like the way you had just the kick drum through the first verses and chorus and bought the rest of trap set in later, which is a cool production technique. Your soft vocal is excellent and is supported well by the synths and bass. The acoustic guitar strumming and picking is perfect...nicely done Trist!
Title: Re: Wings of White - alt
Post by: Ron D Bowes on March 18, 2025, 09:56:10 AM
You have a style all of your own Trist. The way you deliver your vocals is instantly recognisable. Soft, rasping but emotional. Cool track bro.
Title: Re: Wings of White - alt
Post by: Johnbee on March 18, 2025, 12:16:14 PM
Loving the peaceful atmosphere.  The vocal and synth complement each other nicely.

 :) John B
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Post by: StephenM on March 18, 2025, 02:54:09 PM
yeah, what Ron said... ...
a style all your own.
pulsing, mesmerizing.. healing... drawing me into it...
all the intelligence and emotion pulling me in...
I won't try and stop the vacuum that draws me close...
it is like a wonderful long hug that I never want to escape..
I feel part of me wanting to run but I don't... instead I lean in with tears
streaming down my face and enjoying the embrace. 
Title: Re: Wings of White - alt
Post by: TPB on March 18, 2025, 03:14:59 PM
I really like this one
Tim
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Post by: godinqc on March 18, 2025, 04:12:32 PM
Cool track , excellent vocals and I really liked the beat and atmosphere
Well done.
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Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on March 19, 2025, 05:37:17 AM
This sounds brilliant musically and your vocals and lyrics are always great. I like the synths too. They mix really well with the rest of the insrruments. Nicely produced. Great song Trist.
Title: Re: Wings of White - alt
Post by: bruno on March 19, 2025, 06:20:15 AM
I could imagine Dave gilmour singing this. Love that glitchy effect, step flanger?
B
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Post by: thetworegs on March 19, 2025, 02:10:04 PM
Great vocal loving the atmosphere you've created
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Post by: hardlock on March 21, 2025, 02:28:12 AM
A very soothing composition and well produced and performed! 8)
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Post by: kenny mac on March 21, 2025, 11:09:53 AM
I'm with Bruno on this  sound like Dave gilmour vibe.
Great clarity in this production.
Vocals sound great.
Love that acoustic sound.
Title: Re: Wings of White - alt
Post by: Pru on March 23, 2025, 05:06:20 PM
such a lovely emotive song mate. the use of those synths works perfectly and i love the laid back vocal.
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Post by: Ray Brookes on March 23, 2025, 07:17:17 PM
As Ron says above - you have your own unique vocal style, Tris. Nice song and well produced with that kick driving the song along. Nice touches on the guitar too and the synths sound great.