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Title: Save The World From Farting Cows (Superbowl Queen)
Post by: StephenM on February 10, 2024, 06:12:06 AM
Here is my tribute to the superbowl... which it's beginning to look like scripted choreography these days... and as I have gotten older I find myself not very interested in all the stuff they pedaling and especially all the "social agenda" stuff... if I am going to watch a game... that is all I am interested in...
so yes this is my meager protest to what I see as hypo's

anyway.. it is a weird song... and almost no one will listen to it or like it but I think it's at least interesting...

also I have been posting alot of songs but these I have been working on over a period of a week or so and they just happened to come about..

the dog barking is my sons dog that I was watching and she saw something out the window at just the right time and I loved the way it fit the line about the cheer from the adoring throng...  and if you listen close right after the cat meows.... that was actual and both were coincidental...
Title: Re: Save The World From Farting Cows (Superbowl Queen)
Post by: Mike_S on February 10, 2024, 06:32:32 AM
The good thing about this place is folk are welcome to do their thing. And this is you doing your thing, so Amen to that and long may it last. Well I suppose it is weird, BUT a lot of us here like weird. I do anyway. But there is always something in your vocal that makes us listen, makes us believe what you are saying and you often splice in some crazy stuff in the lyrics... and humour too. All in all a great mix. Excellent Steve.

Mike
Title: Re: Save The World From Farting Cows (Superbowl Queen)
Post by: Ted on February 10, 2024, 11:06:09 AM
The ominous pulse of this in contrast to the silliness of the lyrics. The organ in the background is particularly menacing. The Easter egg some people might not notice is the cowbell in the mix – pretty funny in a song about farting cows.

When I ran a songwriters circle, I began every meeting by reminding everyone of the rules. The rules about politics were:


These rules were implemented after a couple of members of the group kept arguing politics at every session.
Title: Re: Save The World From Farting Cows (Superbowl Queen)
Post by: Oldrottenhead on February 10, 2024, 12:34:27 PM
Do I get the prize for finding out you are really "The Residents". Magic!
Title: Re: Save The World From Farting Cows (Superbowl Queen)
Post by: Zoltan on February 12, 2024, 10:43:07 AM
Quote from: Ted on February 10, 2024, 11:06:09 AMThe Easter egg some people might not notice is the cowbell in the mix

You gotta be kidding! :D If there was more cowbell the cows would go home.

Give a mighty cheer? Bronx cheer? It's weird and yes... Slightly menacing. The use of organ is a master stroke. It's pure udders! Before the song ends it manages to convey both Violent Femmes and Phantasm (soundtrack).

That dog bark followed by a laugh is the highlight of the song :)
Title: Re: Save The World From Farting Cows (Superbowl Queen)
Post by: Pete C on February 12, 2024, 12:16:04 PM
Fantastic, even the dog and cat join in. Love the lyrics and I totally understand who and what the song is about.

Pete
Title: Re: Save The World From Farting Cows (Superbowl Queen)
Post by: Johnbee on February 13, 2024, 05:43:04 PM
Are you referring to Taylor? (She's a hometown girl but I don't think much of her).  The "farting cow" thing started with a certain congresswoman IIRC. Trying to put this all together with the Super Bowl in my mind.  Hey, I love the dog bark! ;D  I bet you cued him.

Another fine FZ influenced tune.

 :) John B
Title: Re: Save The World From Farting Cows (Superbowl Queen)
Post by: Geir on February 13, 2024, 07:31:07 PM
I think you will find that there are quite a few weirdos here that find your music rather appealing.

I surely am one.

Keep'em coming
Title: Re: Save The World From Farting Cows (Superbowl Queen)
Post by: thetworegs on February 14, 2024, 01:13:22 AM
We are all on the weirdo bus that's why we're here I've got my ticket and you've certainly got yours Steve ...it's quite the experience being in your head for the superbowl keep those thoughts coming
Title: Re: Save The World From Farting Cows (Superbowl Queen)
Post by: StephenM on February 18, 2024, 07:47:03 AM
Quote from: Johnbee on February 13, 2024, 05:43:04 PMAre you referring to Taylor? (She's a hometown girl but I don't think much of her).  The "farting cow" thing started with a certain congresswoman IIRC. Trying to put this all together with the Super Bowl in my mind.  Hey, I love the dog bark! ;D  I bet you cued him.

Another fine FZ influenced tune.

 :) John B

yes... JB it is about Taylor but I took alot of "artistic liscense".... poking a bit of fun at the commercialization and colaboration of the NFL, Taylor Swift (and she has ties to the whole you should not have cars thing, at least not petroleum based cars)... so I decided to poke fun at what I perceive is elitist hypocrisy)....
Title: Re: Save The World From Farting Cows (Superbowl Queen)
Post by: Lurker on February 18, 2024, 08:58:57 AM
I think this is a really cool song. The overlapping vocals are representative of the constant yammering of the commercialized, politicized, sexualized, compromised world in which we live.



Are farting cows a greater threat than farting humans? Don't forget belching. It's all about the gas.
Title: Re: Save The World From Farting Cows (Superbowl Queen)
Post by: Blooby on February 18, 2024, 09:59:01 AM

Dr. Demento would have dug this. I really don't follow much sports-wise these days, but I certainly share your sentiment.

Blooby

Title: Re: Save The World From Farting Cows (Superbowl Queen)
Post by: Ron D Bowes on February 18, 2024, 10:21:34 AM
Sort of thing I would expect from Zappa in his early days. Nothing wrong with interesting and weird! I am a big Edgar Broughton Band, Frank Zappa and Capt Beefheart fan. Well done!