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Post Your Work => Original Songs => Topic started by: Oldrottenhead on February 02, 2024, 09:08:33 AM

Title: A Different Sky by Oldrottenhead
Post by: Oldrottenhead on February 02, 2024, 09:08:33 AM
I left everything plugged in from last weekend and had the day off work today and this happened.
It is what it is.

The sky looks different tonight
And you can't get to sleep
The stars are brighter than bright
On this cold cold night
You're snug and warm
In your upstairs room
So confused
Too much going on in your head
Too many thoughts racing round in there
You want it all to stop make it go away
No more fear no more pain
Let it out
You don't know what to do
So you close your eyes
But you still can see
That there's a different sky
A Different Sky
W/M
by
Oldrottenhead
Fender Telecaster
HB Bass Guitar
Akai MPK Mini
GarageBand Drums
Vocals
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Post by: SE on February 02, 2024, 04:55:56 PM
Cool, the changes from laidback to up tempo are class, excellent listen!!
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Post by: Pete C on February 03, 2024, 09:06:45 AM
You seem to have a thing about skies and stars in your lyrics...wonderful music to relax to.

Pete
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Post by: Blooby on February 04, 2024, 08:05:34 AM

Another floaty offering from you. You have really developed your own thing, and I am a huge fan.

Blooby

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Post by: Johnbee on February 04, 2024, 06:34:49 PM
Love the laid back atmosphere.

 :) John B
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Post by: Ted on February 05, 2024, 11:16:23 AM
Surprising chord changes in the chorus. It climbs and then climbs again. And somehow lands on the Terra firma of the verse.
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Post by: StephenM on February 06, 2024, 06:08:00 PM
brilliant!  wonderful.

it does things inside me

well done
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Post by: chapperz66 on February 07, 2024, 02:19:00 AM
Superb song - floaty dreaminess with great harmonies.  Spot on production too.

Paul.
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Post by: Oldrottenhead on February 10, 2024, 12:36:28 PM
Quote from: Blooby on February 04, 2024, 08:05:34 AMAnother floaty offering from you. You have really developed your own thing, and I am a huge fan.

Blooby


Cheers, from a big "Museum of Oddities" fanboy!
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Post by: Ray Brookes on February 10, 2024, 01:14:36 PM
Nice atmospheric track and cool production techniques.
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Post by: allysonmarie on February 10, 2024, 08:26:44 PM
I love how the music does shape in mind a quiet, starry night. Very cool.
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Post by: Pru on February 10, 2024, 10:25:04 PM
i like this song. got a nice warm ambience.
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Post by: Jarle on February 11, 2024, 09:58:12 AM
Wonderful and relaxing. Nice harmonies.
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Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on February 11, 2024, 12:10:35 PM
This is a Great song with a great David Bowie sound, love the music throughout, cool lyrics and vocals.
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