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Title: Alone with the night
Post by: thetworegs on November 29, 2023, 04:28:19 AM
Again I was having a strum and this one leaked out ...thanks for listening
The easy going  drifter is moving down the road
Looking for adventure no matter where it goes
He knows the dream of yesterday he's got to unload
The misery of failure leave it to the road
The darkness of the night
Sets a soul alight
Its dark but its groovy cause his alone with the night
Alone with the night

The sunrise is coming up yeah  he can hear its call
The first glimmer of the day as darkness starts falls
Hope is in the skyline a little further down the road 
Salvation with sunshine a little hope for the soul
He can almost see a future beyond the bend in the road
he's got to start believing cause this doubt is getting old
The darkness of the night
Sets a soul alight
Its dark but its groovy cause his alone
his alone
his alone with the night


Break

On the road its all the same
One foot goes in front of the other 
The memories wurre  around and inflame
Pulling a man down
Swimming him in pain
Till there is nothing left to gain or explain
nothing left to explain


Just leave him alone
Just leave him alone
let him alone

let him alone
to the night

On the road its all the same
One foot goes in front of the other 
The memories wurre around in  flames
Pulling a man down
Swimming him in pain
Till theres nothing left to gain
Till theres nothing left to explain
nothing left to explain


Just leave him alone
leave him alone
leave him alone
leave him alone
To the night
To the night

leave him alone
leave him alone
leave him alone
To the night
To the night
Title: Re: Alone with the night
Post by: StephenM on November 29, 2023, 11:50:10 AM
it don't sound like you vocally... well played
Title: Re: Alone with the night
Post by: Bluesberry on November 29, 2023, 12:05:05 PM
Damn this is so flipping cool...love the change up in the vocal delivery....very effective
Title: Re: Alone with the night
Post by: hardlock on November 29, 2023, 10:50:00 PM
A very inventive song. I can hear many genres in there. Reggae comes to mind as well as a Garfunkel air? Another one I'm DLing to jam with. Great song! 8)
Title: Re: Alone with the night
Post by: Geir on November 30, 2023, 01:31:59 AM
Oh yeah. This is really cool. The sort of restrained vocals fit the song perfectly and suits you well also.

The intense guitar contrast the vocals cleverly and makes this a great listen.

Well done Trev
Title: Re: Alone with the night
Post by: BerryPatch on December 05, 2023, 09:40:29 AM
Nice laid back feel here. I love the chimey guitar tone and the mellow vocals are excellent.
Title: Re: Alone with the night
Post by: Jarle on December 05, 2023, 10:53:41 AM
I love your vocals in this, and the guitar sounds great, crystal clear.
Title: Re: Alone with the night
Post by: Mike_S on December 07, 2023, 03:40:26 PM
Yeah nice mellow one Trevor. I like that tone you are getting on guitar too, very well recorded. A nice chilled late night listen here on headphones.

Mike