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Title: "Run Away" w/Lurker
Post by: Blooby on November 21, 2023, 04:07:07 PM

Fashionably late for All Hallows' Eve.

Blooby

Title: Re: "Run Away" w/Lurker
Post by: Lurker on November 21, 2023, 04:20:22 PM
I started writing these lyrics as a joke.

I stand all alone and bay at the moon
For I am the bearer of a terrible boon
I was scarred by a fearsome beast
That I regret didn't finish me
I was bitten on a night such as this
My sweetheart I engaged in a tryst
When out of a thicket the beast did burst
Killing my lover and leaving me cursed

Run away
Get away
Stay away from me
I'm not gonna know you
When the beast is set free

When they hear my howl grown men cry
Mothers gather children and cower inside
A shadow in moonlight I lie in wait
For doubters and fools who're one step late
If you find my kind it's better to die
Than to carry this curse and live half a life
When you hear me howl don't hesitate
Kill me with silver or be werewolf bait

Run away
Get away
Stay away from me
I'm not gonna know you
When the beast is set free

Each month for the days the moon is full
I'm overcome by the way of the wolf
Any encountered become my prey
Until the moon sets at the break of day
The rest of the month I hide my scar
And travel the byways that take me far
From a home I lost that fateful night
When I was marked by the full moon's light

Run away
Get away
Stay away from me
I'm not gonna know you
When the beast is set free
Title: Re: "Run Away" w/Lurker
Post by: Farrell Jackson on November 22, 2023, 06:40:11 AM
A good one for Halloween! A super mix with a cool chorus, vocals and chords. The lead guitar mid break is a great change up. Well done guys!
Title: Re: "Run Away" w/Lurker
Post by: thetworegs on November 22, 2023, 08:20:40 AM
Good story to the lyric for Halloween well performed and liking that howling breakdown
Title: Re: "Run Away" w/Lurker
Post by: TPB on November 22, 2023, 08:43:33 AM
Got me howling at the moon  great song
Tim
Title: Re: "Run Away" w/Lurker
Post by: cuthbert on November 22, 2023, 12:45:51 PM
Man, that opening has some interesting panning.

Stunning guitar work here, and power in those vocals. Joke or not - I enjoy a tale of werewolves/lycanthropy, which has a fascinating history going way, way back in our Western culture.
Title: Re: "Run Away" w/Lurker
Post by: hardlock on November 23, 2023, 01:57:04 AM
Powerful! Reminds me of a 60's heavy band (Pink Floyd, or Deep Purple maybe?). The unique beat and chorus really sets it apart from most. Love the lyrics and vocals along with the guitar punch. Real nice! 8)
Title: Re: "Run Away" w/Lurker
Post by: Geir on November 23, 2023, 08:32:59 AM
Wow. From the opening chord you had me hooked.

Fab rocker with a twist. Excellent guitar work as usual and the vocals are just astonishing. More gritty than usual and it fits the song perfectly.

Love that short outburst of a solo. Just perfect

Title: Re: "Run Away" w/Lurker
Post by: StephenM on November 23, 2023, 01:51:30 PM
killer work men.. I especially like the rhythm guitar... saucy stuff... very saucy and sassy
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Post by: Ray Brookes on November 24, 2023, 12:09:10 PM
Great track. Love the rhythmic groove in the engine room (drums, bass and rhythm guitar) and terrific vocals. That short guitar solo works so well. Cool lyrics too and well suited to a Halloween night
Title: Re: "Run Away" w/Lurker
Post by: SE on November 24, 2023, 04:29:06 PM
Wow, crazy stuff which is just  excellent.
Loving the performance and recording,loved the wolf howel too, just cool!!
Title: Re: "Run Away" w/Lurker
Post by: kenny mac on November 25, 2023, 01:25:27 AM
Excellent track.
Love that vocal,laced with  attitude.
Great harmonies
Great guitar tone,excellent riffage.
And that lead guitar. Wow.short but amazing.
Title: Re: "Run Away" w/Lurker
Post by: Mike_S on November 29, 2023, 03:21:02 PM
I just spotted this before it slips off the end of the list. I do like the whacky lyrics, It's a cool tale perfect for that dark night in a strange place! John you belt it out good and proper and tasteful growling guitar that comes to life in a nice burst for that solo.

Mike
Title: Re: "Run Away" w/Lurker
Post by: chapperz66 on November 30, 2023, 11:12:18 AM
I love this!  Nowt wrong with the lyrics in my opinion - but I was always a Philippine.

Paul
Title: Re: "Run Away" w/Lurker
Post by: Johnbee on November 30, 2023, 06:59:11 PM
Very unique.  Has a sound all its own.  Enjoyed the listen.

 :) John B