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Title: The Dream
Post by: thetworegs on July 06, 2023, 07:10:03 AM
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I was having a tinkle on the ivory and this came to mind...it might be a load of old tosh but it filled some time .....thanks for listening
The house was by the river 
where everyone desired to live
The forest was a shrine
for those who couldn't forgive
The small city
Was large in everyones eyes
The facade of houses hid all that was despised
The yellow city seemed so full of flies
The suburbs by the sea were seen as small
Everybody behind the  grey walls sat and cried
for a loss of all those despised

Karl was a confident man
He wanted it all
He wanted everything around him grand
The Austrian solider sat by his side smoking a pipe
He'd lost his future it was no where in sight
He'd lost his future it was no where in sight
His friends sat round the cold round table
Waiting for an individual explanation
Karl raised his hand
The hermits started to congregate
they formed a rock and roll  band
The heroine stood on top of the mountain and  sang
The time of the genius  began
The time of the genius began
The time of the genius began

The dream was about to end
The dream was about to end
The dream was about to end
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Post by: TPB on July 06, 2023, 07:44:13 AM
Great brother the intro really set it up nice loved your vocal on this one
Tim
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Post by: hardlock on July 06, 2023, 03:34:46 PM
Wow, this seems your perfect match of style, mood and vocal presentation! Maybe this is the other Reg?  8)
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Post by: SE on July 06, 2023, 05:04:28 PM
Yes a piano led cool track with a storytelling lyric.
This is so well performed which makes it a great listen!!
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Post by: Redler on July 07, 2023, 09:14:11 AM
Fantastic story telling song, Trev! Piano and your voice, what an enjoyable combo! Great track!
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Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on July 09, 2023, 03:47:03 AM
Another great song. Really cool.
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Post by: Bluesberry on July 10, 2023, 08:44:08 AM
Superb Reg....love this....why aren't you submitting this for the festival? It's definitely a story song.....
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Post by: kenny mac on July 11, 2023, 05:08:17 AM
That's a great story there and the  mood is set by that piano.
Nice one.
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Post by: Mike_S on July 13, 2023, 02:49:17 PM
Intriguing story, lots of lovely imagery. I kinda of zoned out nicely with this playing and time kinda stood still. I like this piano/vocal style you do sometimes Trev.

Mike