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Title: John Smithblack - a song by Pipes and Chapperz
Post by: chapperz66 on May 15, 2023, 02:49:27 AM
John Smithblack is a big dude.  Probably best not to mess with him.

John Smithblack

John Smithblack, shoulders like hay stacks
a chest like a whisky barrel.
John Smithblack, don't ya turn ya back
don't ya get him in a quarrel.
John Smithblack, anvil on his back
with guns to sink a Galleon.
John Smithblack, he'll shake you Into cracks
whilst shaping shoes for Stallions.

John Smithblack, don't ya get him In a huff
cause he's got a mighty hammer
John Smithblack, he never says a word
so he don't need any grammar

Heat, bend, smack and twist
change, alter, manipulate
Heat, bend, smack and twist
change, alter, concentrated.

John Smithblack, not so fine and delicate
he never says a spoked word
John Smithblack, he's ready to attack!
For he'll strum you like a guitar chord.

John Smithblack, don't ya get him In a huff
cause he's got a mighty hammer
John Smithblack, he never says a word
so he don't need any grammar


Heat, bend, smack and twist
change, alter, manipulate
Heat, bend, smack and twist
change, alter, manipulate..
Heat, bend, smack and twist
change, alter, manipulate
Heat, bend, smack and twist
change, alter....so concentrated.. ...

solo

Heat, bend, smack and twist
change, alter, manipulate..
Heat, bend, smack and twist
change, alter, manipulate
Heat, bend, smack and twist
change, alter, manipulate..
Heat, bend, smack and twist
change, alter... so concentrated
Huh!

John Smithblack, don't ya get him in a huff
John Smithblack, don't ya (get him in a huff! )
John Smithblack, he's got a mighty hammer
John Smithblack, cause he's (got a mighty hammer! )



Link to higher quality wav:  https://soundcloud.com/paul-chapman-24/john-smithblack?si=0c06de35b1a743e38996e4e928406ce7&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

Title: Re: John Smithblack - a song by Pipes and Chapperz
Post by: Trist on May 15, 2023, 03:38:59 AM
That is such a impressive into with the keys and drums and production, i like the lyrics and vocal, the song is really unique inventive and a little quirky with such a original style, impressive  production all round, enjoyed, will liste on soundcloud too
Title: Re: John Smithblack - a song by Pipes and Chapperz
Post by: StephenM on May 15, 2023, 03:50:04 PM
You know I love this Paul... because you know what?  It's so inventive musically.  It wasn't exactly the vocals I am used to hearing from Pipes... they are brilliant but on this one he sounds a bit different then the ones I have heard lately... still incredible vocals however.

the music is quite proggy... it's like Styx and Kansas got together from the Paradise Theatre era...

some of my favorite music times those were and this is incredible!  I like the way you answer the vocals with the lead guitar on the "John Smithblack" chorus.

interesting lyrics about a guy that maybe you had to be a little careful around... but likely why he was so good with that hammer!  Cool rendition... sort of right up there with Tull as well.... brilliant stuff men
Title: Re: John Smithblack - a song by Pipes and Chapperz
Post by: thetworegs on May 16, 2023, 03:59:38 AM
Loving the music as it twists alters manipulates and smacks you between the ears excellent solo loving the vocal and the catchy chorus lines
Title: Re: John Smithblack - a song by Pipes and Chapperz
Post by: TPB on May 16, 2023, 01:24:08 PM
Ear candy got the early Kansas feel from the keys guitar and vocals everything in its pace
Bravo
Tim
Title: Re: John Smithblack - a song by Pipes and Chapperz
Post by: Pete C on May 16, 2023, 02:23:28 PM
Another stunner ! Fantastic instrumentation and production and a class vocal !

Pete
Title: Re: John Smithblack - a song by Pipes and Chapperz
Post by: Ray Brookes on May 16, 2023, 03:28:51 PM
Oh yeah, another fantastic epic production from you guys. Brilliant instrumentation and the production/ arranging is first class. Always impressed with your guitar work, Paul. Great rock vocals too - another excellent collab from you two.
Title: Re: John Smithblack - a song by Pipes and Chapperz
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on May 17, 2023, 10:21:46 AM
This is amazing work Paul ( and pipes) that prog influenced synth intro was spectacular mate..this sounds like it should be from a 70's musical.
That music and production is brilliant..so pro sounding. Love the solo.
Those vocals are so good..what a voice.
I'm not messing with that John dude.
Title: Re: John Smithblack - a song by Pipes and Chapperz
Post by: Blooby on May 17, 2023, 12:40:46 PM

Jesus, this is talent heavy. Sounds like Danny Elfman meets Trevor Rabin yet all original.

What a cool post. Wow.

Blooby
Title: Re: John Smithblack - a song by Pipes and Chapperz
Post by: Ted on May 18, 2023, 03:29:36 AM
The lyrics viewed on their own suggest a classic American folk song –  not this crazy fusion of prog, electronica, and nu metal.  %)!
Title: Re: John Smithblack - a song by Pipes and Chapperz
Post by: karl1171 on May 19, 2023, 06:22:45 AM
A decent slice of prog. Well written, played and produced. I can hear several influences along the way but its never derivative, a totally original piece.
Title: Re: John Smithblack - a song by Pipes and Chapperz
Post by: Mike_S on May 19, 2023, 04:31:59 PM
Seriously brilliant. That intro is so good... gives me an early Rainbow feel. I love the mix of styles, I even get a bit of AC/DC in there for a moment. Off the scale soloing and beautiful tone. But overall just the creativity is the winner here from all involved.

Mike
Title: Re: John Smithblack - a song by Pipes and Chapperz
Post by: Ted on February 22, 2024, 08:53:53 AM
An excellent addition to the 2023 jukebox! This song is a wild ride! And such great playing.
Title: Re: John Smithblack - a song by Pipes and Chapperz
Post by: StephenM on February 22, 2024, 04:42:46 PM
great sampler selection.... glad I am listening again... this time I think the lyrics are great and that John was a blacksmith was the perfect job for that kind of guy... probably would do alot more damage if he wasn't... smashing things...

I especially love Paul's guitar work against the Nick vocals... so good
Title: Re: John Smithblack - a song by Pipes and Chapperz
Post by: Geir on February 23, 2024, 02:07:53 AM
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Oh WOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fanbloodytastic !!!!!

                                 
This is so good I'm all outta words ...


Wow
Title: Re: John Smithblack - a song by Pipes and Chapperz
Post by: Mike_S on March 28, 2024, 09:51:32 AM
God... this one popped up today... seriously good.

Mike
Title: Re: John Smithblack - a song by Pipes and Chapperz
Post by: godinqc on March 28, 2024, 11:07:03 AM
Excellent song .. Really liked the Prog Rock feel to it .. also the synth sounds great .. well played and produced.
Brilliant piece of work..
Title: Re: John Smithblack - a song by Pipes and Chapperz
Post by: SE on March 30, 2024, 05:11:47 PM
Defo progtastic,shades of Yes but heavier.
The synth intro with guitar is fantastic.
Well the vocal is exceptional.
Stand out for me are the drums programmed real?
Just a great recording and performance,loved it!!
Title: Re: John Smithblack - a song by Pipes and Chapperz
Post by: Pru on April 03, 2024, 01:17:19 PM
fabulous production vocal and playing. it all sounds so complicated yet it all works perfectly
Title: Re: John Smithblack - a song by Pipes and Chapperz
Post by: Blooby on May 15, 2024, 04:56:13 PM

This warranted a bump to say the least. Still a huge wow.

Blooby

Title: Re: John Smithblack - a song by Pipes and Chapperz
Post by: SE on May 16, 2024, 03:41:46 PM
Just back for some progtastic excellence!
Title: Re: John Smithblack - a song by Pipes and Chapperz
Post by: thetworegs on May 16, 2024, 04:01:04 PM
Bravo chaps got this one downloaded a while back always good to hear