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Title: This is the Life
Post by: Mike_S on March 20, 2023, 11:31:43 AM
I spent weeks on a different song but in the end it didn't work out so I have shelved that idea for the moment. As a way to make me feel better (although this tune is a bit miserable :)) I decided to back to a more familiar style for me.

The title came I think out of the blue and went for a walk and a bit of the tune and a couple of lines came, being careful not to be spotted singing on the street recorded a snippet. Anyway this is it...

1 main vocal, 1 backing vocal
2 guitars left and right
1 Bass - cheap HB mini bass (my best purchase pound for pound)
1 organ sound played on guitar via Boss SY-200
Drums - Mr GB

You better watch out
Cause they're coming for you
You might not think so
But hey I've got news for you

You can take a look
Take a look around
But you won't see them
And they... won't make... a sound

But this is the life
That you wanted
And this is the life
That you will have
And it's too late now
For you to change
Change a thing

You can feel it coming
Cause it's in the air
You won't be left out
No you won't be spared

A little push is
Is all it takes
When they turn on you
For all... of your... mistakes

But this is the life
That you wanted
And this is the life
That you will have
And it's too late now
For you to change
Change a thing

——————

Solo

——————

And it's too late now
For you to change
Change a thing
Title: Re: This is the Life
Post by: Bluesberry on March 20, 2023, 04:16:06 PM
Flipping love this Mike....menacing and spooky....it's got the spook....love those background vocals....love the lyrics....love your vocal delivery....love the guitars .....and great punchy bass......total pro song in your usual awesome style.....oh yeah, almost forgot....love the wonderful understated solo....just perfect
Title: Re: This is the Life
Post by: SE on March 20, 2023, 05:58:10 PM
Yes cool stuff from, Mike S, loving the vocal and the vibe, that guitar  break is just class,enjoyed it  lots!!!
Title: Re: This is the Life
Post by: Oldrottenhead on March 21, 2023, 01:26:31 AM
That's a cracker of a song Mike.
Title: Re: This is the Life
Post by: Ray Brookes on March 21, 2023, 03:33:03 AM
Love this. Cool song, Mike & those guitars panned left & right sound great. Lyrics are dark and suit the overall mood of the song perfectly. Then that guitar solo at 2:39 .... beautiful.
Title: Re: This is the Life
Post by: thetworegs on March 21, 2023, 03:39:53 AM
Loving it Mike a beaut of a track
Title: Re: This is the Life
Post by: Ron D Bowes on March 21, 2023, 05:59:19 AM
Attention grabbing intro. Like the panning of the guitars (my default when I record). Cool compostion and well produced.
Title: Re: This is the Life
Post by: StephenM on March 21, 2023, 06:26:00 AM
the guitars are so pro and sound awesome. 

I dig the lyrics... could be an excellent video track.  Awesome writing and recording Mike!  The way BB describes it I agree... this has life in it...

your solo soars!
Title: Re: This is the Life
Post by: chapperz66 on March 21, 2023, 06:40:53 AM
This has the wow factor for me great song, performance and production.  Very impressive stuff, Mike.

Paul
Title: Re: This is the Life
Post by: Zoltan on March 21, 2023, 11:45:47 AM
When i hear a Mike song i always go for the vocs. Then comes all the other good stuff which there's always a plenty and this is no exception.

I like the build up you're able to achieve here both musically and lyrically. The drum beats are also inspired. Something a bit different from the norm.

A song that gets under the skin. Great stuff Mike!
Title: Re: This is the Life
Post by: TPB on March 21, 2023, 12:57:41 PM
Wow smoking song brother love everything about it
Bravo Tim
Title: Re: This is the Life
Post by: BerryPatch on March 21, 2023, 01:38:31 PM
Really good song Mike! The lyric and melody here particularly stand out and you deliver a great vocal on top of it. Really nice music to go along with it: fine, fine work!
Title: Re: This is the Life
Post by: launched on March 21, 2023, 05:28:59 PM
Yes, I love this one Mike it's great! Spot on instrumentation and vox, and a perfect mix. I'm sure you'll get on with your other tune someday!!

Title: Re: This is the Life
Post by: Kenneth on March 22, 2023, 05:08:17 PM
Hi Mike, had a nice listen here.
I really like it.
Love the clear recording , delay sounds ,and of course the vocals are really good.

 Always love a Strat, I believe that's what you are using?
Title: Re: This is the Life
Post by: Pete C on March 23, 2023, 04:27:42 PM
Loving this Mike, you can certainly write and perform a great song !

Pete
Title: Re: This is the Life
Post by: Redler on March 23, 2023, 10:28:59 PM
Brilliant songwriting, Mike! Widely panned guitars and backing vocals sounds good. Guitar solo is icing on the cake...enjoyable listening.
Title: Re: This is the Life
Post by: StephenM on February 16, 2024, 07:18:49 PM
glad to hear this beauty again... sure the lyric content is a bit tough to swallow... but it also seems very true... so that makes this a warning... a kind of "watch out who you think is your friend" kind of song.

the guitars sound amazing... the way you bring that one in at just the right time over and over again..

I love this mix... it is awesome... way way up there for me
Title: Re: This is the Life
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on February 17, 2024, 04:12:47 AM
Another great song I hadn't heard before, thanks Stephen for bumping this. The music is brilliant, love the lyrics too.
Title: Re: This is the Life
Post by: SE on February 17, 2024, 08:04:32 PM
Yes, one of his own Stephen M makes some of the best tunes, imop, cool stuff, loved it !!




Title: Re: This is the Life
Post by: Farrell Jackson on February 18, 2024, 08:19:34 AM
A very good song Mike! Outstanding vocals and the guitars are so plush. There's a message of warning in the lyric that can be applied to many situations. Nicely done on the solo!
Title: Re: This is the Life
Post by: Lurker on February 18, 2024, 08:43:33 AM
The haunting melody is perfect for the lyrics. The production is brilliant. The guitar tones, the chord structure, the vocal setting, the rhythm ... it's all there. Excellent song.