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Title: mexico
Post by: TPB on March 14, 2023, 06:35:00 PM
Well the spring planting is done guess it is time to get of my ass and start Recording excuse the crappy lead if anybody to play lead let me know
Tim
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Post by: BerryPatch on March 14, 2023, 07:34:09 PM
Neat track Tim! The vocals are super crisp and the hook is super smooth. I like the lead work here too. The song has a Red Hot Chili Peppers vibe, I could've sworn I could hear Anthony Keadis sing this with these kind of lyrics. Very cool  8)
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Post by: Farrell Jackson on March 15, 2023, 07:45:57 AM
This sounds fantastic and so full Tim. The rhythm and lead guitar blend perfectly. You have done some excellent vocals to top it off! There's nothing wrong with your lead solo at all. Well done!
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Post by: Ray Brookes on March 15, 2023, 11:33:19 AM
Great song, Tim that drives along very nicely with that four to the bar kick drum. Vocal is stellar and no problems with the lead guitar; the ending is a bit abrupt though?
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Post by: chapperz66 on March 15, 2023, 01:49:11 PM
Great song - and I agree, the lead guitar is fine - but I too would fade the ending.

Paul
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Post by: StephenM on March 15, 2023, 03:12:26 PM
this is Tim B goodness... instead of Johnny b good...

ain't nothin wrong with that lead... yes... it could be different... better?  maybe, maybe not..

dig the vibe of the tune as well... there is a good hunger in your voice... I like that
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Post by: SE on March 15, 2023, 04:15:04 PM
Moves along nicely with that guitar refrain.
Enjoyed the vocals a lot,lots like,cool stuff!!
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Post by: thetworegs on March 16, 2023, 01:40:24 AM
Nothing wrong with that lead Tim, if you want wrong you should let me have a go 😁 great vocal you've now given me gas to go to Mexico
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Post by: Groundy on March 16, 2023, 02:47:13 AM
Nice one Tim, love this really well-done pal.
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Post by: launched on March 16, 2023, 12:41:54 PM
Awesome tune Tim, so well constructed and phrased! Love the chorus vocals, very addictive.

You crafted a good one!!
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Post by: Redler on March 18, 2023, 04:11:28 AM
Fantastic vocal melody both on verse and chorus! Lead guitar additions sounds so good!

Well done, Tim!
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Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on March 19, 2023, 04:46:13 AM
Yeah, just echoing what everyone else has said. A brilliant song, great music, i love the lead guitar, nothing wrong at all.
Great vocals..kind of like a springsteen song. love it.
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Post by: Kenneth on March 22, 2023, 05:28:58 PM
It's been a long time Tim, and you've got a laid back groove going here. Vocals are fantastic, and i'm really diggin the clean lead. so relaxed and it actually suits the song beautifully. Seemed to end quick though...
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Post by: Bluesberry on March 22, 2023, 06:10:47 PM
I meant to comment on this the other day but the wife called me away on some urgent issue or another........came back tonight........great vibe on this song...and yes, the vocal is awesome.....lots of heart and soul in the guitar work........very tasteful playing.........I like this .....would be a good one to listen to as I drive around
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Post by: Ron D Bowes on March 24, 2023, 07:20:55 AM
This reminds me of another musician that Farrell and I know called Bubba Reeves. Similar vocals, but different timbre. Anyhoo, I like this very much. Cool vocals and melody. Solid backing.
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Post by: Greeny (No longer active) on March 27, 2023, 03:50:47 AM
Great vibe and atmosphere. Nothing wrong with those melodic lead lines. The whole thing hangs together really nicely, and I love that chorus so much. Cool!
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Post by: Frank53 on March 27, 2023, 06:44:18 AM
Good song. As has been mentioned, catchy hook on the chorus.
All the parts fit well together, including the lead.
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Post by: Trist on March 29, 2023, 07:27:30 AM
col groove and guitars . pace and flow work well, has that classic rock bluesy feel to it which i liked