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Title: Moonrock
Post by: Zoltan on January 29, 2023, 12:09:49 PM
This is based on the one and only "poem" i ever wrote...

Moonrock

V1
It was real country dark
We had parked near the river of shenandoah

We got in the backseat
the world was ready for our love

CH:
I saw a star
It was Blob
Yeah
moonrock

V2

I let out the dog
Number one what she was called

I got behind the rock
I was ready for number two

CH:
I saw a star
It was Blob
Yeah
Moonrock

*
And that's all he wrote!
Title: Re: Moonrock
Post by: Bluesberry on January 29, 2023, 12:33:41 PM
Ahhh man you did it....read the lyrics and couldn't imagine what you were gonna do .....bam....you did the thing up proper.....so frigging fine.....laughing, crying, dancing around the kitchen with my startled wife.....a real slice of cake this is....chocolate cake with fudge frosting and one cherry straight up on the middle....what a day it's been
Title: Re: Moonrock
Post by: Bluesberry on January 29, 2023, 02:31:48 PM
I F'kn love this.....I will listen to this everyday for the rest of my life!!!!!!!!! ........lol ......wicked touch here.....wicked...every time I listen I feel energized healed holy.....it's musical vitamins I tell you......bottle this stuff......this is how it's done
Title: Re: Moonrock
Post by: launched on January 29, 2023, 03:00:53 PM
This is amazing, I love it
Title: Re: Moonrock
Post by: StephenM on January 29, 2023, 05:25:17 PM
This countrified rickabilily...
Funny as heck lyrics..
They could play this at all the baseball games this year..
Its a drug in itself... you created a new cult following like Abba...
Footstomping, thigh smacking, spoon clicking, hound dog howling modernized space bluegrass...
We dont have a dog but I see one smiling at me with sunglasses on...
Lemonade please!
Title: Re: Moonrock
Post by: Bluesberry on January 29, 2023, 05:42:36 PM
Quote from: StephenM on January 29, 2023, 05:25:17 PMWe dont have a dog but I see one smiling at me with sunglasses on...
Lemonade please!
Whatever you are putting in your lemonade, I'll have some of that too please........
Title: Re: Moonrock
Post by: Greeny (No longer active) on January 30, 2023, 01:59:45 AM
Hurtles along like a demented freight train. Completely brilliant and infectious. Loved that little sci-fi synth that crept in (as the UFO hovers above the car). My only complaint: TOO SHORT!
Title: Re: Moonrock
Post by: StephenM on January 30, 2023, 06:59:28 AM
Quote from: Greeny on January 30, 2023, 01:59:45 AMHurtles along like a demented freight train. Completely brilliant and infectious. Loved that little sci-fi synth that crept in (as the UFO hovers above the car). My only complaint: TOO SHORT!

I know right Tim however I am not sure my brain could take more than short doses of this drug at a time... wow... but yeah a 3 min version would be great.
Title: Re: Moonrock
Post by: thetworegs on January 30, 2023, 11:25:56 AM
This gives me the ooh yeahs
Title: Re: Moonrock
Post by: BerryPatch on January 31, 2023, 07:48:02 PM
Way cool Zol! Space-aged pychobilly country reggae...what a combo. Very original with a stellar vocal and laugh out loud lyrics! The recording is excellent too...