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Title: Curiosity-New Original
Post by: Johnbee on December 12, 2022, 03:10:54 PM
I recently bought Native Instruments Session Horns Pro and was experimenting with it.  It seemed to fit perfectly into a new song I was working on.  Some of the horn arrangement here was edited pre set patterns and some of it was my own arrangement. 

Hope you enjoy it.

Am I awake or am I dreaming?
It is so hard to tell
You have numbed my better senses
You know me so well
Something in me has to know the workings of your spell
But I'm so close that I can't see what's in store for me
Can you give me one small clue
or must I keep running blind?
Could you tell me anything new?
Will I be left behind?
You have me so curious
Intriguing. I'm hypnotized but blind

Is this the truth or just a cruel lie?
Has it been all a farce?
One day I'm basking in your love light
Next day I'm in the dark
Your alluring bright brown eyes continue to mesmerize
Will I ever learn your secret?  Will you ever tell?
Constantly a back-and forth.  Contentment to despair
What you've done to my poor heart is more than just unfair
It's so hard to see it through
and fine what really pleases you.

                            (Break)

Is there a way for me to know exactly where I stand?
Could you make it a bit more clear? Do I misunderstand
what you're really all about?
I beg you.  Please don't leave me behind



c 2022 John Bowen
Curiosity.mp3
Title: Re: Curiosity-New Original
Post by: StephenM on December 12, 2022, 03:49:49 PM
another John Bee stunner!  the lyrics are just so good... and I can totally relate too...
the music is at the same level as the lyrics and vocals...so it is all very good, very pro...
it is nice that you can find new tools/toys to play with and build sounds with... isn't that a good fun and challenge?  Good for the brain to learn new things...

a little Chicago too... like it.

Merry Christmas John! 
Title: Re: Curiosity-New Original
Post by: Ray Brookes on December 12, 2022, 06:07:10 PM
Always enjoy listening to your music, John. Love the flowing melodies and abstract harmonies, all placed nicely in the mix. Horns sound great too adding that Chicago feel that Stephen mentions.
Title: Re: Curiosity-New Original
Post by: Farrell Jackson on December 13, 2022, 07:57:03 AM
The Chicago-ish horns sound great John. Really good lead vocal, harmonies, lyric and melody. The bass and drums even remind me of Chicago. Well done!
Title: Re: Curiosity-New Original
Post by: Ron D Bowes on December 14, 2022, 06:43:19 AM
Very cool. Nicely constructed song and I like the vocal delivery. Trumpet sound is a nice touch.
Title: Re: Curiosity-New Original
Post by: TPB on December 14, 2022, 08:14:08 AM
Lots and lots going on here listened to it twice to catch everything the key work is sublime and complex sounding at the same time
Nicely done
Tim
Title: Re: Curiosity-New Original
Post by: Rene Asologuitar on December 14, 2022, 11:42:12 AM
Quote from: Johnbee on December 12, 2022, 03:10:54 PMI recently bought Native Instruments Session Horns Pro and was experimenting with it.  It seemed to fit perfectly into a new song I was working on.  Some of the horn arrangement here was edited pre set patterns and some of it was my own arrangement. 

++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Lovely vocals, as always.
Congrats on your new Native toy.
Another gem of a creation, well done!!!
Rene
Title: Re: Curiosity-New Original
Post by: chapperz66 on December 15, 2022, 03:37:31 AM
Really cool song John.  Intriguing chord sequences, fine vocal and lyrics and the muted brass adds to the slinky feel.  The drummer was on form and the false ending almost caught me out. But I know better than to hit stop to soon!

Fine song.

Paul
Title: Re: Curiosity-New Original
Post by: Johnbee on December 15, 2022, 04:47:43 AM
Hi StevenM, Ray,Farrell, Ron, Tim, Rene & Paul, and thanks so much for listening!

 :) John B
Title: Re: Curiosity-New Original
Post by: Zoltan on December 15, 2022, 10:16:35 AM
That playfulness. Those melodies. The chords changes and harmonies fly way above my head yet you're still making it all so easy to access.

Those vocals are great (as always) and the mix is the definition of clear. Those horns sound great too. And that bassline.

Great song(writing) and arranging skills.
Title: Re: Curiosity-New Original
Post by: Johnbee on December 17, 2022, 05:01:21 AM
Quote from: Zoltan on December 15, 2022, 10:16:35 AMThat playfulness. Those melodies. The chords changes and harmonies fly way above my head yet you're still making it all so easy to access.

Those vocals are great (as always) and the mix is the definition of clear. Those horns sound great too. And that bassline.

Great song(writing) and arranging skills.

Thanks so much, Zoltan!

 :) John B
Title: Re: Curiosity-New Original
Post by: Redler on December 17, 2022, 05:36:29 AM
Another brilliant piece of pop jazz song. Everything sounds so good!

Well done, John!
Title: Re: Curiosity-New Original
Post by: StephenM on December 18, 2022, 05:07:25 PM
It seems longer ago than a week since this was posted. 

It is like Chicago... and that is pretty darned good.  I didn't listen to that many Chicago albums (or should I say 8 tracks? which is what i had) but the ones I had i wore slap out... I tend to listen to music groups hundreds of times per album... I bond with the music... it is etched into my soul...
it never goes away...
and now the great John Bee is also etched... I think even in heaven I will be able to refer to this... hear this again...
Title: Re: Curiosity-New Original
Post by: Johnbee on December 19, 2022, 03:45:47 AM
Quote from: StephenM on December 18, 2022, 05:07:25 PMIt seems longer ago than a week since this was posted. 

It is like Chicago... and that is pretty darned good.  I didn't listen to that many Chicago albums (or should I say 8 tracks? which is what i had) but the ones I had i wore slap out... I tend to listen to music groups hundreds of times per album... I bond with the music... it is etched into my soul...
it never goes away...
and now the great John Bee is also etched... I think even in heaven I will be able to refer to this... hear this again...
Thanks again, Steve. 

Just want to say that I've been a huge Chicago fan since 1970. especially when their original guitarist, Terry Kath was still there.  Their second album (w/"25 or 6 to 4", Make Me Smile", "Colour My World") is my favorite album of all time and I've owned it in almost every format (LP, CD, 8-track & cassette) and wore them all out and I'm so glad the great producer, Steven Wilson chose it to remix because he did an awesome job with it.  I'm also a big fan of Tower of Power, another horn band.  I love and I'm proud of the Chicago compare but I feel the arrangement in this song is more Tower of Power than Chicago mainly because I use the TOP line up with 2 trumpets in the high end and a baritone sax (and trombone) in the low end.  Chicago rarely uses baritone sax (but has on a few album tracks) where TOP uses it constantly.  But I appreciate all who compare me to Chicago, although I'm not anywhere near as good.  Thanks again.
 :) John B
Title: Re: Curiosity-New Original
Post by: StephenM on December 19, 2022, 06:05:48 AM
Quote from: Johnbee on December 19, 2022, 03:45:47 AM
Quote from: StephenM on December 18, 2022, 05:07:25 PMIt seems longer ago than a week since this was posted. 

It is like Chicago... and that is pretty darned good.  I didn't listen to that many Chicago albums (or should I say 8 tracks? which is what i had) but the ones I had i wore slap out... I tend to listen to music groups hundreds of times per album... I bond with the music... it is etched into my soul...
it never goes away...
and now the great John Bee is also etched... I think even in heaven I will be able to refer to this... hear this again...
Thanks again, Steve. 

Just want to say that I've been a huge Chicago fan since 1970. especially when their original guitarist, Terry Kath was still there.  Their second album (w/"25 or 6 to 4", Make Me Smile", "Colour My World") is my favorite album of all time and I've owned it in almost every format (LP, CD, 8-track & cassette) and wore them all out and I'm so glad the great producer, Steven Wilson chose it to remix because he did an awesome job with it.  I'm also a big fan of Tower of Power, another horn band.  I love and I'm proud of the Chicago compare but I feel the arrangement in this song is more Tower of Power than Chicago mainly because I use the TOP line up with 2 trumpets in the high end and a baritone sax (and trombone) in the low end.  Chicago rarely uses baritone sax (but has on a few album tracks) where TOP uses it constantly.  But I appreciate all who compare me to Chicago, although I'm not anywhere near as good.  Thanks again.
 :) John B

I think Blood, Sweat, and Tears were on a lesser level but very similar style.  Obviously the vocals were different but the music had similarities.  I think bands more toward this style have made a minor comeback these days...
Title: Re: Curiosity-New Original
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on December 19, 2022, 07:30:13 AM
This is a really nice song, very well put together. I love the style, those session horns sound great too.
Great guitars and drums. Love your vocals and overall sound.
Darren
Title: Re: Curiosity-New Original
Post by: kenny mac on December 19, 2022, 08:18:48 AM
Nice sounds on this ,New york vibe for me .
Alot going on,horns sound fab .
Nice one.
Title: Re: Curiosity-New Original
Post by: Blooby on December 19, 2022, 08:49:46 AM

I love how fearless your vocal melodies are. Very cool tune. Money well spent for those horns as they sound remarkable. Are the horn swells your doing, or is that an option in the software?

I really zeroed in on the bass on this one.

Blooby
Title: Re: Curiosity-New Original
Post by: godinqc on December 19, 2022, 09:12:42 AM
Great song .. for sure there's a Chicago vibe to it ..  :)
Great lyrics, really liked the Native Instruments Horns section.
Well done.
Title: Re: Curiosity-New Original
Post by: Lurker on December 19, 2022, 10:13:38 AM
I love your melodies. The chord progressions demonstrate a depth of understanding and challenge the listener in unexpected ways.
Title: Re: Curiosity-New Original
Post by: Johnbee on December 21, 2022, 10:49:15 AM
Steven, Darren, Kenny, blooby, godingc
and lurker-Thanks guys!
Bloody, the horn swells are programmable in SHP via keyswitch.
 ;) John B