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Title: The Irresolute Priest
Post by: Ray Brookes on December 06, 2022, 12:11:11 AM
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Guided by a Northern star, three kings came from the east
Followed by the wisest men they happened on a priest
"Such royalty from foreign lands! Where goes thee on this morn?"
"To Bethlehem we go to see the Messiah today is born"

"What news is this?" The priest he cried. "Why was I not told?
Kings, shepherds and three wise men, yet I'm the last to know"
"Never mind, holy man" the kings replied. "Travel with us on this morn.
To the holy town of Bethlehem to see the Messiah born"

"Huh, I think not" the priest he scoffed "Not until I'm officially informed
Perhaps your words are only false and the truth here is deformed.
Be on your way, all of you. In this venture I'll not be drawn.
How can it be true without my knowing that a new Messiah is born?"
 
And it came to pass God spoke to the priest at the setting of his sun
"How could you have been so irresolute about the birth of my only son?
Go now to your resting place and remember this lesson learned
And in your next life believe in me when the new Messiah returns."
Title: Re: The Irresolute Priest
Post by: Farrell Jackson on December 06, 2022, 06:16:18 AM
A wonderful gift for the YuleFest Ray! Some beautiful guitar picking, a compelling story and a vocal style that presents it like a pro. Thank you!
Title: Re: The Irresolute Priest
Post by: chapperz66 on December 06, 2022, 09:48:03 AM
Beautiful song with profound imagery.  Great performance and production as I would expect from you, Ray. 

I'm a fan.

Paul
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Post by: kenny mac on December 06, 2022, 12:14:47 PM
Brilliant track,
I love everything about this.
The story tells a story that often happens in reality.
People wait to be officially informed of something that is happening in front of thier eyes.
An amazing piece of work.
That guitar tone is beautiful.
Title: Re: The Irresolute Priest
Post by: StephenM on December 06, 2022, 05:04:11 PM
this one floors me Ray... what an grand idea....and delivery.  massive!

love that 12 string sounding I think.... it's all gorgeous!
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Post by: Redler on December 07, 2022, 02:10:37 AM
I love feel of the composition and performance. The music reminds of Suzanne Vega from Solitude Standing era (great album, imo). Another listen...enjoyable!
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Post by: TPB on December 07, 2022, 05:27:16 AM
Ray this such a great story and the delivery is exceptional the music sets the mood to a TEE
Tim
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Post by: Mike_S on December 07, 2022, 03:21:42 PM
2nd listen... this is lovely. that guitar playing is spellbinding. great warm production and the tale is told fantastically well. great idea and execution Ray.

Mike
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Post by: hardlock on December 08, 2022, 05:34:25 AM
I'm speechless - Outstanding entry. Took my breath away!  ;oOo;
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Post by: Ron D Bowes on December 08, 2022, 03:46:06 PM
A beautiful number Ray. What more is there to say?
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Post by: T.C. Elliott on December 25, 2022, 10:27:54 AM
Wow, what a great take both lyrically and musically. I like your arrangement very much, you have a good melody and I like the sense of emotion and depth you've created here.
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Post by: Trist on December 30, 2022, 07:06:33 AM
Very nice song indeed Ray, really tastefully done . nice arrangement and performance. good story telling, the song is real nice, enjoyed all the attributes of the track.
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Post by: thetworegs on December 01, 2023, 03:59:27 AM
Bump! ....A Beautiful song vocally lyrically musically
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Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on December 01, 2023, 04:57:38 AM
Great bump for Christmas. 
What an amazing story Ray. I couldn't stop listening to see what happened to the priest.. Guess he suffered the wrath of god. Haha.

Brilliant. The music is awesome as usual. Amazing production and great vocals.
Merry Christmas. 
Title: Re: The Irresolute Priest
Post by: StephenM on December 01, 2023, 05:09:13 AM
glad to hear this gem again.  A real treasure!

I am not generally into Christmas songs except the old standards but this is such a great track... for me this could be played anytime.

as great as the music is I love the idea of the lyrics...

very fortunate to hear the great songs of Ray Brookes

lead guitar is beautiful against the acoustic
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Post by: Geir on December 01, 2023, 05:57:54 AM
Wow.

This is a true gem.

Such a beautiful song and the delivery...... oh my. I can hardly find words.

The production is stellar and the performance just top notch. I love those tastefully placed guitar licks that just put this song over the top for me.  Excellent!!!
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Post by: Johnbee on December 08, 2023, 06:03:53 PM
Smart to bump this back up.  Beautiful in every way.

 :) John B
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Post by: The Gobi Desert Canoe Club on December 09, 2023, 07:24:28 AM
A truly beautiful piece of music whatever your chosen religion or God. There's nothing I don't like about this wonderful song.    Willie
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Post by: Pru on December 09, 2023, 11:56:17 AM
nice one unc. i like that guitar playing and you have sung it well. nice story too.