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Title: Break it Gently
Post by: The Gobi Desert Canoe Club on August 23, 2022, 07:02:30 AM
Hi all, my first effort with the BR800, production not so hot but it will get better, hope you enjoy.

Gibson Les Paul Junior, Gibson SG, Fender Pecision and Organ from GarageBand.

Willie

Break it gently, don't let me down
I thought that you'd be here for evermore
You say you're leaving, going back to town
I see your cases by the door

What did I do, what did I say
That makes you feel this way
Think it over are you sure
Before you walk outside my door

Yeah what can I say, if you really feel this way
You know I'm missing you
Are you sure you've thought it through

Instrumental

Yeah what can I say if you really feel that way
You know I'm missing you
Are you sure you've thought it through

One last chance then don't come back
You know I'm feeling kind of flat
Here's your case now where's my key
Don't come running back to me.

Yeah what can I say if you really feel this way
You know I'm missing you
Are you sure you've thought it through

Outro







Title: Re: Break it Gently
Post by: Farrell Jackson on August 23, 2022, 09:46:03 AM
The Gibsons sound great Willie! I like the classic heartbreak story in the lyrics. Some fine vocals and the solo break fits the vibe of the song perfectly. Coolness all the way!
Title: Re: Break it Gently
Post by: StephenM on August 23, 2022, 10:35:52 AM
this sounds great to me... so you got some new gear?  congrats and well done... your guitar playing and vocals always nails me right to the floor...no exception here ...
Title: Re: Break it Gently
Post by: Rene Asologuitar on August 23, 2022, 10:44:52 AM
Hi GDCC,
I love your vocals in this song.
I love the fact that the vocals is on top of the mix, the way I like it.
Very nice guitar track and solo.
Love this recording.
Rene
Title: Re: Break it Gently
Post by: Zoltan on August 23, 2022, 03:05:15 PM
A few days ago i was walking the dogs and thinking of these glimpses of life showcased in these GoBi songs. There's a thread and a vision that runs thru all of  these songs. There are a lot of heartbreaks and hopefullness in these songs. Even when things look bad, and occasionally even a touch of humour.

I think these can be oddly comforting if someone is going thru hard times. I would imagine the songwriter behind these songs is a hopeless romantic at heart.

Great songwriting with equally great performances.

Title: Re: Break it Gently
Post by: TPB on August 24, 2022, 09:24:15 AM
New gear is always good to inspire I loved the entry to the song and vocals are spot on well done brother
Tim
Title: Re: Break it Gently
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on August 24, 2022, 12:16:19 PM
The new gear has certainly worked. This sounds great. Excellent music and vocals.
Darren
Title: Re: Break it Gently
Post by: Blooby on August 24, 2022, 01:19:06 PM

Another post where song is king. I completely respect that about you. Great tones, playing, lyrics, and production. I even dig the petering out at the end.

Blooby

Title: Re: Break it Gently
Post by: Hook on August 29, 2022, 04:05:53 AM
Alright brother ,another Rock solid song and you seem to be taking to tge br800 well. I also just acquired one and am trying to find my way around it. Can't wait to hear the next one brother.
Rock on!
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