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Title: "Leave Me Alone" w/Lurker
Post by: Blooby on May 06, 2022, 04:13:07 PM

A first mix of yet another I don't know what. With regard to the opening, I leave the room when John does his vocals, and he often gets a tad weird.

Peace.

Blooby

Title: Re: "Leave Me Alone" w/Lurker
Post by: StephenM on May 07, 2022, 06:32:17 AM
note of super loving that drumming right at the get...

once again I hear the southern influence in that guitar... killer work too... that bass chugging along takes it to a bit different direction though for me... then we go into this soft synth world of lovely goodness... almost proggy...
I am laughing at the lyrics "they got nothing to say but they say it anyway".... yeah... we do.

will hear this a bunch.. love that yes like outro guitar..  vocals are super as usual.  hell of job on that guitar though...top shelf stuff Blooby
Title: Re: "Leave Me Alone" w/Lurker
Post by: Lurker on May 07, 2022, 09:39:37 AM
It's not often that I find my self so inspired by the eloquence of the children that I teach.

I'm standing here watchin
All these people talkin
They're asking for something
When all I got is nuthin
I just want to shout

Shut up
Leave me alone
I'm done
I'm going home
Don't call
Stay out of my phone
Shut up
Leave me alone

I want to go on a rant
Like an adolescent brat
Get up in your face
Put you in my place
But no

Shut up
Leave me alone
I'm done
I'm going home
Don't call
Stay out of my phone
Shut up
Leave me alone

So few know how to listen any more
So many talk as they walk in through the door
Maybe they're afraid they might learn something new
As if knowledge were a threat to their cozy world view

People making noise
All they do is annoy
They've got nothing to say
But they say it anyway
Why can't they

Shut up
Leave me alone
I'm done
I'm going home
Don't call
Stay out of my phone
Shut up
Leave me alone
Title: Re: "Leave Me Alone" w/Lurker
Post by: Redler on May 07, 2022, 11:22:58 AM
Nicely grooving rock song! The bridge works really well. Excellent job, guys!
Title: Re: "Leave Me Alone" w/Lurker
Post by: Ray Brookes on May 07, 2022, 02:54:22 PM
Great song, great vocals and great production (love that drum track) Excellent guitar work too and that middle eight is a nice touch.
Title: Re: "Leave Me Alone" w/Lurker
Post by: Nelson on May 07, 2022, 07:33:16 PM
Love the music. As for the vocals, I'll take that weirdness every day of the week and twice on Sunday.
The last bit reminds me of The Doors but the energy throughout has Kenny Wayne Shepherd all over it... vocals and guitar...... Just Sick.
Title: Re: "Leave Me Alone" w/Lurker
Post by: kenny mac on May 08, 2022, 03:45:05 AM
That's a killer track the vocals are excellent and fit right in.
The guitar work is exceptional and tone and clarity is spot on.
Well done guys.
Title: Re: "Leave Me Alone" w/Lurker
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on May 08, 2022, 04:26:36 AM
What a great track. Really catchy groove and chorus. The music and vocals are superb.
Darren
Title: Re: "Leave Me Alone" w/Lurker
Post by: Farrell Jackson on May 08, 2022, 07:49:31 AM
This track has a great groove with cool guitar and vocals. I like lyrics and vocals that have a call and answer section as this does. The synth is nice change up to the production. Well done guys!   
 
Title: Re: "Leave Me Alone" w/Lurker
Post by: TPB on May 08, 2022, 08:49:53 AM
From the opening knew I was in for a treat killer drums smoking guitar the the vocals this song has it all
Bravo Tim
Title: Re: "Leave Me Alone" w/Lurker
Post by: Rene Asologuitar on May 08, 2022, 08:53:40 AM
Quote from: Blooby on May 06, 2022, 04:13:07 PMA first mix of yet another I don't know what. With regard to the opening, I leave the room when John does his vocals, and he often gets a tad weird.
Peace.
Blooby
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HI Bloobvy,
Very nice composition.
The vocals is super nice, and the guitars is excellent.
The guitar solo is my fav in this production.
Great work!
Rene
Title: Re: "Leave Me Alone" w/Lurker
Post by: Mike_S on May 08, 2022, 03:23:02 PM
Super interesting track. Lot's of different ideas in here. The great riffing along to the vocals in that Hendrixy style is waay cool. Love those slightly eastern stylings it has here and there. Excellent.

Mike