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Title: Put My Foot Down (Rayon Vert)
Post by: Farrell Jackson on February 07, 2022, 08:11:44 AM
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A new song for The NumbersFest.
Credits: Rayon Vert.
Gary Carciello - All guitars, drums programming and mix/master.
Rob Grant - Song idea and bass.
Doctor C - All keyboards.
Farrell Jackson - All vocals and lyrics.
Put My Foot Down RV (Farrell Jackson © 01/01/22)
(V1) When we first became a couple
I needed to say who was the boss
She looked at me all wild and crazy   
And said "give that some thought"
"Whoa oh Lady"
"You don't need to be so hasty"
"That's the advice my daddy gave me"
"I trust his words explicitly"
(Chr) So I put my foot down 1 time
Then I put my foot down 2 times
Before I could put it down 3 times
She put her own foot down
(GC solo)
(V2) This seems kind of funny
But I didn't want to lose my honey
So, some changes were in order
If I was to stay in these quarters
(Chorus) (GC slide solo)
(V3) Now it's been many blissful years
Since we clarified our roles
I needed to treat my lady with respect
A happy spouse means a happy house
(Chr) ) But I put my foot down 1 time
Then I put my foot down 2 times
Before I could put it down 3 times
She put her loving foot next to mine
Title: Re: Put My Foot Down (Rayon Vert)
Post by: StephenM on February 07, 2022, 09:00:04 AM
Tell Gary I love the mix!  Great song again... it has that classic rock vibe that I resonate with so much.  love the slide guitar.  Bass work is really fine.  Nice drum work for sure. 
of course the vocals are top notch...cool lyrics too.  Not bad for a rocker from the Cowboy Capital! (watched the video)...
thanks Rayon

kind of hit me like Deep Purple...deep purple....Deep Purple
Title: Re: Put My Foot Down (Rayon Vert)
Post by: Ray Brookes on February 07, 2022, 12:43:19 PM
Love these tracks you guys produce. Great mixing, mastering, instrumentation, vocals - the whole package is just superlative. And that guitar work! Brilliant and so tasteful.
Title: Re: Put My Foot Down (Rayon Vert)
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on February 07, 2022, 01:18:07 PM
This is really good. Fantastic performances from all of you, it's a great song and has that classic rock sound. The guitar work is just brilliant. Love the bluesy tone and riffs. Superb music throughout, vocals and production on this.
Darren
Title: Re: Put My Foot Down (Rayon Vert)
Post by: Nelson on February 07, 2022, 08:53:05 PM
Brilliant indeed. This song is rocking from the first note to the last.
Strong vocals, musical performances, arrangement and production.
Killer groove, guys
Title: Re: Put My Foot Down (Rayon Vert)
Post by: AndyR on February 08, 2022, 01:50:47 AM
I was getting a Deep Purple vibe too... I thought I was getting it from the vocal... but then when I tried to put my finger on it, the impression disappeared...

On a second listen, I'm feeling Crest of a Knave period Jethro Tull instead, but that's when they were sounding more "Deep Purple" like!  ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D

Anyways...

Yeah, love it. Very cool performances from everyone.
First time I was listening, the speakers were down low. It's 8:45 am now, just done my first Zoom meeting of the day (hour and a half!! sheesh ::)), so the speakers are LOUD...
Wow, sounds FANTASTIC turned up.

Special shout out to the guitaring ... the style, the economy, the touch and feel here is right up my alley! Some sublime playing.
Title: Re: Put My Foot Down (Rayon Vert)
Post by: Blooby on February 08, 2022, 09:57:04 AM

Blimey, so well done. And the lyrics...ain't it the truth? I must ask Gary what was being used for that first lead solo (What guitar? Amp or modeler?). What a great tone.

Great mix. Great song. Great performance. Loved the modulation. I'm really liking what you guys are doing.

Blooby
Title: Re: Put My Foot Down (Rayon Vert)
Post by: AndyR on February 09, 2022, 01:20:37 AM
Came back for another listen after finding Jump In.

You guys are making a fabulous sound.
Title: Re: Put My Foot Down (Rayon Vert)
Post by: Mike_S on February 12, 2022, 05:00:01 PM
Jesus H so glad I decided to go down the list a bit tonight to see what I have missed. This sounds so good lads. Rayon Vert... what a band. But yes, that guitar... hmmm, it's so damn good. There are hints of Steve Morse and a little Ritchie B in there too. Ritchie Blackmore is a big part of why I like rock in the first place I so dig his style. But anyway, this is superior stuff. Classic Rock is alive and well in 2022.

Mike