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Title: Time And Place by BerryPatch
Post by: BerryPatch on January 18, 2022, 07:33:39 PM
Another "full production one". I haven't really been feeling in the mood to record lately though recording this is getting me excited to write more. I used my new Epiphone SG Classic to record the guitar parts (with P-90s :P) and started this one on Garageband (tracking Piano, Bass and GB drums) before putting it on the BR 1200 again.

Epiphone SG Classic Worn
Epiphone Viola Bass
Korg Piano
Mellotron App
Godin Acoustic
Shure Sm58
Fender Blues Junior Amp (with Fuzz Factory Pedal added in certain places)
GarageBand Drums and Electric Piano
Mixed on a BR 1200

What is it all worth in today
Memories collapse as decades fade
Lost in some era that passed as it was
Is there a cost to where it's turned
Just look at all those bridges burned
Have we forsaken it all just because

Can't think of anything at all
I know it's held up to a fault
I was the first to watch it fall
To paint their faces on the wall
As from above just like the sky
Half blinded by the truth in lies
Oh there was time and a place not far gone

Can't help but think of better days
Days when it all seemed not so grey
Picking up pieces that people forgot
And it makes wonder about what's next
Passing the aisles to see what's left
Nothing can hold if the center will not

Can't think of anything at all
I know it's held up to a fault
I was the first to watch it fall
To paint their faces on the wall
As from above just like the sky
Half blinded by the truth in lies
Oh there was time and a place not far gone

Crumbling walls in a sea of light
And the blue sky turns to red
"Well take your time and don't run away," she said "Never be misled"

Can't think of anything at all
I know it's held up to a fault
I was the first to watch it fall
To paint their faces on the wall
As from above just like the sky
There was a reason to know what's right
But that was time and a place now far gone
Title: Re: Time And Place by BerryPatch
Post by: Zoltan on January 19, 2022, 02:38:31 AM
It was such a nice start for the day to begin with hearing a song of this pedigree. The production is top-notch and your songwriting skills really shine here. The arrangement is also superb. There's so much to hear with this one and there are several layers of sounds, hooks and ideas to be heard. Your vocal sound is always warm and there's (especially in this song) that instantly pleasing 70's feel to it all. This sounds like a hit from the days gone by. The kind of song that isn't instantly hitting you in the head with a huge main hook, but a one that's filled with several. The playout sections were also a real joy and the outro.
Such a great song!
Title: Re: Time And Place by BerryPatch
Post by: StephenM on January 19, 2022, 06:29:00 AM
ah, the master comes through again!

I have read your lyrics for a while now (back there with "Raging Fire" ) I think it was called and onward.  My observation is that you are an older soul.  I don't want to sound too airy fairy or new agey but your lyrics ask questions and make observations that only a wise soul can do.  When I was your age it was mostly about getting the next beer or finding some weed.  I just want to congratulate you on your focus! 
another great song Keith.  I am not even remotely qualified to comment other than to say it's great.
Title: Re: Time And Place by BerryPatch
Post by: Hook on January 19, 2022, 09:20:55 AM
Dude...Outstanding brother. Top quality production, has a bit of a 70s stadium band kinda feel.I dig.
Rock on!
Title: Re: Time And Place by BerryPatch
Post by: Oldrottenhead on January 19, 2022, 09:52:36 AM
gaun yersel young berry. fabulous.
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Post by: Ray Brookes on January 19, 2022, 11:36:30 AM
This is great, Keith. Everything shines here - the playing performances, the production, the vocal and the lyrics are insightful social comments that work so well. Super stuff mate; well done.
Title: Re: Time And Place by BerryPatch
Post by: tonyc on January 19, 2022, 01:43:15 PM
superb song keith great sound and mix smart guitar work .....cheers tony cee
Title: Re: Time And Place by BerryPatch
Post by: Johnbee on January 22, 2022, 01:31:24 PM
Love the chord changes, the Melotron work and the general atmosphere.  I'd say bring the drums up just a bit in the mix.

 :) John B
Title: Re: Time And Place by BerryPatch
Post by: Mike_S on January 23, 2022, 04:47:50 PM
Great work Keith, love the melody, very sophisticated, but instantly pleasing on the ear. Some great lines in there, especially that "Nothing will hold if the centre does not". It's true it has that gentle classic 70s rock feel.

Just a little aside... there is a slight touch of Ozzy to your vocals on this one. But a version where Ozzy can actually sing as your vocal is a lot better than his.

Mike
Title: Re: Time And Place by BerryPatch
Post by: ODH on January 24, 2022, 01:59:33 AM
That's really great and well put together. Love thé Melotron. The Ozzy resemblance struck me too.
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Post by: The Gobi Desert Canoe Club on January 24, 2022, 09:17:53 AM
Real nice song and the production sounds perfect to my old ears. There's nothing I don't like about the piece.
The Gobi Desert Canoe Club
Title: Re: Time And Place by BerryPatch
Post by: guitarron on January 26, 2022, 11:06:20 AM
Fantastic sounding track. So well produced and performed.
Title: Re: Time And Place by BerryPatch
Post by: BerryPatch on January 30, 2022, 09:35:37 AM
Thanks for all the comments guys! Interesting to hear the Ozzy comparisons, I personally love his voice. He only got better as Black Sabbath progressed and had a real command of the mic. He certainly didn't get overpowered by the music. His voice was perfect for the band imo...
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Post by: Farrell Jackson on January 30, 2022, 06:39:41 PM
This song has some excellent production and mix details in it...I love the break at the 3 minute mark as the set up for the guitar solo that follows...well done there! I too hear the Ozzie tone in your vocal, but you stay in tune much better. A lovely song and the Epi SG with P90's sounds excellent!
Title: Re: Time And Place by BerryPatch
Post by: Redler on January 30, 2022, 08:42:40 PM
Just brilliant songwriting and performance!!

This has a strong 70's vibe, imo. It would deserve time on air...perfect pop song!
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Post by: cuthbert on January 31, 2022, 01:05:56 PM
I thought I had commented on this earlier? Certainly meant to do so... better late than never, I suppose.

Loved it from the first Mellotron note! The pianos reminded me a bit of The Beach Boys, and the guitars in places reminded me of Badfinger, but it's all you Keith. Just a perfectly put together pop-rock song.

Quote from: BerryPatch on January 18, 2022, 07:33:39 PMI used my new Epiphone SG Classic to record the guitar parts (with P-90s :P)

I've become a big fan of P-90 pickups lately. I picked up a used Epiphone Casino (made in Korea) last year - I love the sound I get out of its pickups!
Title: Re: Time And Place by BerryPatch
Post by: godinqc on February 01, 2022, 01:55:24 PM
Really good song, really liked the 70's vibe to it .
All instruments sound really good and so is your vocals.
Also really well mixed/mastered.
Great work
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Post by: Bluesberry on February 01, 2022, 07:28:45 PM
Blindingly brilliant song writing, playing and recording.....what can you say....love that punchy bass...and what great vocals......
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Post by: kenny mac on February 01, 2022, 10:44:32 PM
Im a fan of your stuff,your vocal is  instantly recognizable.
The drum prograing on this is clever also and I love the fills,they give the song a dynamic.
Music is excellent, a belter of a track.
Excellent.
Title: Re: Time And Place by BerryPatch
Post by: Blooby on February 02, 2022, 08:08:31 AM

Loved those dual guitars right out of the gate. Lovely sounds wrapped in a wonderful arrangement. Great performances all the way around and a banging production. Really loving the bass in this (Crikey!). Such a strong tune. Again, great arrangement.

Wow, that was good.

Blooby
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Post by: Geir on February 02, 2022, 12:38:34 PM
What a truly wonderful song.

Just makes you happy listening to it.

Fabulous performance and brilliant arrangement, from the mellotron and piano to the guitars and bass and the clever use of triple(?)-tracked vocals that then changes to widely spread octave vocals and back again. Excellent

I'm a fan!
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Post by: Pete C on February 02, 2022, 01:17:53 PM
Great song, very 70's feel. The playing and production is outstanding, even down to little details like that little left to right panning around the 3.00 mark. Great vocals and harmonies too !

Pete
Title: Re: Time And Place by BerryPatch
Post by: Rob Grant on February 09, 2022, 11:35:51 AM
Stunning production....Really reminded me of Todd Rundgren. Every instrument shines, loved the lead guitar tone, and your vocals, lead and harmonies are great????
Title: Re: Time And Place by BerryPatch
Post by: AndyR on February 10, 2022, 12:46:33 AM
Oh this is a total knock out for me.
Wonderful.

Loving the arrangement/production. You seem to know instinctively how to add interest when needed but not over-do it. And then, when mixing, ensure each little bit gets it's appropriate moment in the spotlight.

The song and the vocal are superb.
The whole thing is just fabulous.

Digging those P90s too.
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Post by: TPB on February 10, 2022, 08:07:59 AM
I can hear the Ozzy reference but it is a upgraded much better version. I know I am late to the party and not sure how I missed this one so I am glad I got to listen to this today. The production is outstanding as is your norm fantastic piece
Bravo
Tim