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Title: In The Air by BerryPatch
Post by: BerryPatch on December 10, 2021, 10:16:16 PM
This one started out a long while back as an attempt at a shoegaze style song. I listened back a month ago to and got to work adding more on top; lead guitar, synths, extra bass and vocals. I also added the outro at the end, feeling the song was a little short without one. It was fun playing around with the reverse settings on a Boss Digital Delay pedal, which you can kinda hear at the end of the track. I was too lazy this time to record with the mic and the amp ;D so it's just DI using the BR1200 effects, which worked quite well once again. The vocals and lyrics were a PAIN for this one, it took a while to think up something decent overtop the track, but I think its sounding better now. Enjoy...

When it is done,
Don't dream it away ,
Though nothing can be saved,
You take your time and search the velvet sky,

Set the stage,
And read out the names,
The black ink stains the page,
And never feel ashamed of thoughts that may pass by,

In the air
In the air
In the air
In the air

Step inside,
To leave it behind,
No one can ease my mind,
The people stare but have you seen them cry,

Just like there's a calm
Before the storm,
It's holding out the score,
Walking along these empty streets
still wondering why,

In the air
In the air
In the air
In the air

See yourself till you're not there
Title: Re: In The Air by BerryPatch
Post by: StephenM on December 11, 2021, 05:35:22 AM
I made a comment but when I went back it was not there...go figure.
first off...the DI guitars sounds great... I always do that because it is easy and unless you have a specific reason to go with a mic'd amp (maybe edge of feedback? etc, sounds?).  Now a days you can even amp model...so!
the intro on the song here grabs you straight away.  The voices are superb from all over and the keys at 2:30...
then it just kills at 3:00...glad you added that..
sensational recording here young Berry

oh yes and I  love the lyrics as well
Title: Re: In The Air by BerryPatch
Post by: guitarron on December 11, 2021, 05:38:18 AM
In the air is aptly named. This has an easy breezy feel to it. The guitar effects sound fine. Those harmonies are freaking great. Love this tune Keith
Title: Re: In The Air by BerryPatch
Post by: Zoltan on December 11, 2021, 09:28:56 AM
Such a cool song! And the DI guitars work a treat. I've been thinking about doing a "shoegaze" song also, but i wouldn't know where to start. I can only imagine using lots of reverbs - delays etc. This song is much classier than any regular "shoegaze" song. The 60's influenced backing vocals and the hippie - Beatles vibe of it all. The vocal performance is ace too!
Clean and clear heavily layered production. Huge thumbs up!
Title: Re: In The Air by BerryPatch
Post by: Redler on December 11, 2021, 10:43:50 AM
Very laid back vibe and the harmonies are just stunning! Cool job with solo guitar at the outro...

This is like a warm summer breeze...works perfecly!
Title: Re: In The Air by BerryPatch
Post by: Mike_S on December 11, 2021, 01:51:13 PM
I think you nailed what you were after here Keith. It's got a great dreamy other world feel. Production is fab, all those vocals are perfect, everything definitely worth persevering with, it's funny how you can have song that is just looking for a missing piece for ages, but yeah really worth keeping at this one.

Mike
Title: Re: In The Air by BerryPatch
Post by: dasilvasings on December 11, 2021, 07:09:22 PM
Wow. This song is really well crafted! Congratulations.
The Outro brings another life to the song. Glad you did it. Really like how you add the phaser(?) to the drums in the end. It works.
IMO you could spend some 4 or 5 minutes playing around instrumentally in the end. The mood is there for a long instrumental part, with lots of distortion and feedback.

If you don't know and you have time, try to listen to a Smashing Pumpkins song called "Drown". The long version, 8 minutes long. Not the 4 min version. Technically it is not "shoegaze", but more grunge, but the song ends with a 4 or 5 min improvisation heavy on guitar feedback. I suspect you may like it.
Title: Re: In The Air by BerryPatch
Post by: SE on December 12, 2021, 05:19:16 PM
Wow absolutely loving the production, this is just too cool.
Maybe look for a vocalist to match your writing which is just excellent. Loved It!!!
Title: Re: In The Air by BerryPatch
Post by: godinqc on December 12, 2021, 06:20:53 PM
Really well recorded and mastered .. the guitars and vocals (harmonies) are really good ..
Great laid back song ..
Title: Re: In The Air by BerryPatch
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on December 13, 2021, 04:23:44 AM
This is so good. I love the kind of 60's psychedelic sound in some of it. Great music and production and I really like your vocals.
Title: Re: In The Air by BerryPatch
Post by: tonyc on December 13, 2021, 07:05:01 AM
wow great song love the effects , sounds superb . brill mix clear , and love the vocal , the ending [ outro ] reminded me of the beatles sgt pepper . fantastic listen ....cheers tony cee
Title: Re: In The Air by BerryPatch
Post by: Ferryman_1957 on December 13, 2021, 08:02:40 AM
Absolutely brilliant Keith. It really ticks the Cocteaus meet Slowdive boxes for me, it's got exactly the right groove and an amazing lush sound. I love the bass sound and the bass playing, just right with the washy guitars. The vocals are superbly done, great harmonies, and I love the lead guitar sound and the outro. Plenty of reverse effects, just what you need for some good shoegaze. I love the production as well, superbly done because there's a lot going on but it is crystal clear and well balanced. Loved it!!
Title: Re: In The Air by BerryPatch
Post by: Bluesberry on December 14, 2021, 08:41:18 AM
Yes, this is another brilliant offering from the kid.....so good on so many levels....you say shoegaze...I say psychedelic, power pop, grunge......spectacular as always...way to go Keith....love, love, love that bass
Title: Re: In The Air by BerryPatch
Post by: Johnbee on December 14, 2021, 02:57:52 PM
Very nice production values.  Especially enjoyed the special effects.
 :)John B
Title: Re: In The Air by BerryPatch
Post by: hardlock on December 14, 2021, 04:23:31 PM
Uh, Ah, this takes me back to some good time memories! Great all around and love the effects and harmonies!  It's a hit! 8)
Title: Re: In The Air by BerryPatch
Post by: TPB on December 14, 2021, 04:38:38 PM
Smoking song young blood and as become your norm excellent production
Tim
Title: Re: In The Air by BerryPatch
Post by: BerryPatch on December 14, 2021, 07:50:40 PM
Drown is very, very cool Dasilva! I must admit I don't know much Smashing Pumpkins outside of their bigger songs, but I've always been meaning to check them out. I love how the whole song builds up the big solo, can't imagine how they cut that part out...
Title: Re: In The Air by BerryPatch
Post by: hooper on December 15, 2021, 06:53:41 AM
Very nice work! Creative and well organized... and everything just performed so well.  The atmospheric ambiance reminds me of some of the more sophisticated West Coast music coming out of the LA area in the late 60's, especially when the vocal harmonies come in. You have really learned a lot about developing a complex arrangement and managing the mix. Love this sound!
Title: Re: In The Air by BerryPatch
Post by: kenny mac on December 15, 2021, 01:51:37 PM
I really like this.
Youve created a sound thats instantly recognisable as you.
A great performance, nice one.
Title: Re: In The Air by BerryPatch
Post by: cuthbert on December 15, 2021, 08:58:48 PM
So lush - I loved it.

I also hear bits of West Coast Sixties psychedelia and also an Olivia Tremor Control type of vibe to the vocals. But mainly what I hear is someone comfortable in their songwriting and performance (as well as production). You mentioned vocals and lyrics being a pain, but it really doesn't sound like it at all in the song - it all flows, seemingly effortlessly. That also shows great skill.

And the outro is a really nice touch - I love a good outro.

Well done, Keith!
Title: Re: In The Air by BerryPatch
Post by: Rob Grant on February 09, 2022, 12:15:37 PM
Another stellar production. Man!! You really know how to create that wall of sound. Arrangement, performances, and production are all pro quality????
Title: Re: In The Air by BerryPatch
Post by: AndyR on February 10, 2022, 12:33:21 AM
Wooo... this is mighty cool.

Lovely spacious sounds, cool vocals, layers, and that psychedelic outro.

Love it.
Title: Re: In The Air by BerryPatch
Post by: SE on May 05, 2022, 06:39:59 PM
Totally taking back my comment about needing a vocalist.
This is just cool!!