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Post Your Work => Original Songs => Topic started by: thetworegs on April 04, 2021, 01:52:26 AM

Title: Come let the sun shine on me
Post by: thetworegs on April 04, 2021, 01:52:26 AM
Having a mess around with the wah and came up with this one .....Thanks for listening
As the clouds start to break the suns on the run again
Keeping all that rain at bay
I've had enough of this damn lockdown
I want out, I want  to live and have some fun again
Come on sun shine down on me
Come on let that sun shine down on me yeah!

Break

I want these blues to leave me
Now give me the sun the beach and the sea
Get some of that sunshine on me, yeah
Let that sun shine down on me, alright  yeah

Outro

It's getting so close I can almost feel it
Title: Re: Come let the sun shine on me
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on April 04, 2021, 03:26:48 AM
Oh yes, this is giving me images/ flashbacks of the 60's, ( and I wasn't even born then lol.) but it sounds really authentic it could have been . A great psychedelic sound. Love that wah wah guitar and the groove is great. Love your gritty vocals. :)
Title: Re: Come let the sun shine on me
Post by: BerryPatch on April 04, 2021, 09:01:10 PM
Great chunky rhythm sound. Reminds of that Bill Withers song that's popular on YouTube as a backer. Fine wahing and some highly relatable lyrics haha.
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Post by: Kenneth on April 04, 2021, 11:39:11 PM
Can't help but get into that groove. Another class tune Trev.
Title: Re: Come let the sun shine on me
Post by: Groundy on April 05, 2021, 01:01:52 PM
Another hit for me Trev,.. Alex
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Post by: Gritter on April 05, 2021, 02:01:56 PM
Funky-ass rhythm. Wahnderful!
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Post by: Bluesberry on April 05, 2021, 07:41:04 PM
its all about the groove baby...and you got it....tight groove
Title: Re: Come let the sun shine on me
Post by: Hook on April 06, 2021, 04:22:33 AM
Well done brother.
Rock on!
Title: Re: Come let the sun shine on me
Post by: Mike_S on April 06, 2021, 08:54:06 AM
Always a massive fans of an extended intro. So cool! It is indeed all about the groove. You can really get down into some really bluesy/funky riffing Trevor. So raw and alive. Nice!

Mike
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Post by: Ferryman_1957 on April 06, 2021, 09:23:25 AM
Absolutely wah-tastic! Love that funky wah and the amazing vocals. Some nice lead work in there as well. Very cool track Trev!
Title: Re: Come let the sun shine on me
Post by: tonyc on April 06, 2021, 11:40:57 AM
catchy track trevor , nice funky guitar work and wow what a vocal worth another listen .....cheers tony cee
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