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Post Your Work => Original Songs => Topic started by: thetworegs on April 03, 2021, 12:07:13 PM

Title: I'll give you all of me
Post by: thetworegs on April 03, 2021, 12:07:13 PM
 While kids watched TV eating chocolate,we had easter early as their cousins came over after they left I had a couple of hours this afternoon so of course i got the guitar out i used the fender stratocaster with a 12 string plugin through the kemper  Thanks for listening ..
Oh baby don't you hear me
can't you see me
I wear it on my sleeve
I've been waiting for many a year
just to try and make you see and hear me here
If I got your love
If I got your heart
I'd  give you what you want and need
So give me one chance and I'll show, you what you want and  need from me
I'll give you my heart
I'll promise I'll give you what you need
I promise I'll give you all of me
I'll give you what you need

The days pass by I feel I'm drowning without you by my side
You've been out there in the cold, cold day  only meeting men treat you hard
Now give me a moment and I will show you I know exactly what you want
Cause I got the love, yeah and  I tell you, I certainly I got the need
I'll give you what you want from me
I give you my heart
I got the want and I got the love for you
I promise I'll give you what you want
I  give you all of me
I'll give you what you need

Break

I've been looking for your for a longtime, to try to win you back
Now I've found you again I don't want to lose you. no, I want you back
I never wanted to go
but I had too I hope you understand
These days go so slow without you holding my hand
You give me what I need
And I'll give you all of me
I promise I'll try to give you what you need
And I'll give you all of me
Title: Re: I'll give you all of me
Post by: Ray Brookes on April 03, 2021, 03:00:55 PM
Nice spontaneity about this track, Trevor. Cool rock/bluesy vocals as always. Are you gonna develop it further?
Title: Re: I'll give you all of me
Post by: thetworegs on April 03, 2021, 04:08:32 PM
I'd love to Ray but I'm no good on bass and drums if you would like to that would be great as I always get stuck after the initial start of rhythm lead and vocal but no worries if not ;D
Title: Re: I'll give you all of me
Post by: Redler on April 03, 2021, 10:01:11 PM
I admire the creativity by you...a couple hours and there it is...a new song! Excellent job, Trev!
Title: Re: I'll give you all of me
Post by: Groundy on April 05, 2021, 12:09:43 PM
Quote from: Redler on April 03, 2021, 10:01:11 PMI admire the creativity by you...a couple hours and there it is...a new song! Excellent job, Trev!

+1. Great sound Trev... Alex
Title: Re: I'll give you all of me
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on April 05, 2021, 01:58:26 PM
I think this sounds great Trevor. It's good how you quickly come up with these song ideas. It would be good developed further, be interesting to hear if it is. Like the melody of the chords and your vocals always sound good. :)
Title: Re: I'll give you all of me
Post by: Hook on April 06, 2021, 04:32:54 AM
Love that progression, big zep feel to this one.
Rock on!
Title: Re: I'll give you all of me
Post by: Ferryman_1957 on April 06, 2021, 06:35:21 AM
Agree with everyone else, there's some great chord progressions here and the vocal sounds great, you are working that doubler really nicely. Great use of a few spare hours!
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