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Title: C,mon NOW WITH VIDEO ( Greeny and Kenny Mac)
Post by: kenny mac on March 27, 2021, 04:04:22 AM





Caught in your secrecy

Your electricitys is falling out

Wired up to the moon

Watch or youl peak to soon

And cancell out


Nobody in this world

Gets out of it alive.

Trust in your inner self

Stand up and take the dive


Hold on tight to your hat

Swing out that baseball bat

and Call int out

Dont be a mystery

Let all those people see

What your about

Keep yourself in control

Get out of the hole

Your in...yeh

Reach out into your soul

You can win


Chorus

_______

Come on ,

Come on

Your invited

Get excited

Cmon cmon

Get u United

Your invited

Cmon


No negativity

Make positivity

Grow and grow

Your capabilities

In all probability

Will steal the show



Embrace creativity

Your brains in captivity

And lost

Its in the delivery

Strike out at the world.




Chorus

_______

Come on ,

Come on

Your invited

Get excited

Cmon cmon

Get u United

Your invited


What you gonna do

When the sky falls down on ?

Open your arms

Hold them up into the

Sky


Chorus.....twice






 
Pushing the positivity out there.
This song came into my head and I could just hear greeny in there.
I contacted him with cap in hand and he agreed to collaborate.
I had the track almost done,sent Greeny  a vocal guide and he nailed it.
Basically I put drums ,two telecasters on,a bass,then sent it to Greeny.
He put on a vocal and a deliciously played shimmering guitar,and sent it back.
I then merged the two vocals into the track and added piano and strings.
Its a jolly little song about getting off your arse and loving life.
C,mon your invited  ;D
Title: Re: C,mon( Greeny and Kenny Mac)
Post by: hardlock on March 27, 2021, 05:08:00 AM
Very uplifting! Nice song all around. Harmonies tie it together well. Great collab!
Title: Re: C,mon( Greeny and Kenny Mac)
Post by: Mike Huntingford on March 27, 2021, 11:20:30 AM
You guys just nailed it - what a great concept and terrific collaboration.

Well done guys.

Mike
Title: Re: C,mon( Greeny and Kenny Mac)
Post by: maxit on March 27, 2021, 01:52:21 PM
Wow , this great song conquered me !!! I feel ... invited exactly!! So sweet and perfect , really braviiiiiii !!!!!
Title: Re: C,mon( Greeny and Kenny Mac)
Post by: Nelson on March 27, 2021, 03:40:35 PM
Jesus this feels like a Sting and U2 collaboration and they brought Bowie back for cameo in the bridge.
Outstanding guys
Title: Re: C,mon( Greeny and Kenny Mac)
Post by: Ray Brookes on March 27, 2021, 11:57:16 PM
Everything about this track is so bloody great. The vocal work, the production and the overall composition. And those Beatle-esque harmonies just blew me away; great stuff, guys.
Title: Re: C,mon( Greeny and Kenny Mac)
Post by: thetworegs on March 28, 2021, 12:59:59 AM
Great song loving those harmonies and the whole feel of the song
Title: Re: C,mon( Greeny and Kenny Mac)
Post by: Ferryman_1957 on March 28, 2021, 03:51:16 AM
This is totally epic! It's wonderful on many levels, but it's the piano and strings that drive this for me. I really like the way the piano part over the verses contrasts with the more gentle feel over the choruses. It is really uplifting and has a lovely feel to it. The arrangement overall is majestic in its scope and works really well, the guitars blend nicely into the piano and strings. I love the breakdown at about 3:35, that really creates the right platform for the choruses at the end.

The lyrics have sentiments we can all get behind, and the vocal performances from both of you are fab. The overall production is really good, there's a lot going on but you brought it all together really well. A wonderful and hugely enjoyable piece of music on many levels, great collab guys.
Title: Re: C,mon( Greeny and Kenny Mac)
Post by: Mike_S on March 28, 2021, 04:30:16 PM
Beautiful concept. Really arresting intro, those stabbing chords really catch the attention. It then opens out into something really special. Your two voices really blend beautifully. Impossible not to be moved by this. Well done lads.

Mike
Title: Re: C,mon( Greeny and Kenny Mac)
Post by: StephenM on March 28, 2021, 07:42:06 PM
Any allusion to baseball is automatically extra points in my book... aside from liking it all... the choppy piano... the way you pull it all back with just vocals and those panning guitars answering each other... really nice work
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Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on March 29, 2021, 12:53:59 PM
I like this. It's good a catchy " anthemic" quality, finding myself humming it for ages afterwards :) great collaboration, music and vocals.
Darren.
Title: Re: C,mon( Greeny and Kenny Mac)
Post by: cuthbert on March 29, 2021, 06:18:56 PM
What a cool duet! I loved it.

Well done, gents.
Title: Re: C,mon( Greeny and Kenny Mac)
Post by: Kenneth on March 30, 2021, 01:00:10 AM
This is what it's all about!
Wonderful.

Kenny, keep this going...keep writing songs...

Tim, that's your classic collab genius right there, as usual love your work.
Title: Re: C,mon( Greeny and Kenny Mac)
Post by: Bluesberry on March 30, 2021, 06:27:21 PM
This is so good it is beyond comment.....so flipping good....this is pretty damn good....its two heavy weights finding common ground and we are all the better for the music that poured forth from this chrystaline challice...dew from the gods....whew lads....
Title: Re: C,mon( Greeny and Kenny Mac)
Post by: BerryPatch on March 30, 2021, 06:37:18 PM
This ones a real beauty boys. Love how well your voices meld together, especially when the chorus hits. Gorgeous melodies a bound, the song has a melancholic sense about it while having an uplifting feel. Like the sun poking out after a rainy day. Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant.
Title: Re: C,mon( Greeny and Kenny Mac)
Post by: launched on March 30, 2021, 07:10:55 PM
Quote from: cuthbert on March 29, 2021, 06:18:56 PM... What a cool duet! I loved it. ...

I was going to say that! Enjoyed this one a lot guys - Duetfest??
Title: Re: C,mon( Greeny and Kenny Mac)
Post by: Greeny (No longer active) on April 17, 2021, 09:35:19 AM
Now with video! (all Kenny's work!)...


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PG6RHHUWPYA
Title: Re: C,mon NOW WITH VIDEO ( Greeny and Kenny Mac)
Post by: StephenM on April 17, 2021, 08:15:18 PM
loved the video lads....glad I came back to watch...and to get a glimpse into KM's studio... the dancing Beetle guy was kind of cool... as before...splendid song...and enjoyed seeing Tim on the gitfiddle as well..
Title: Re: C,mon NOW WITH VIDEO ( Greeny and Kenny Mac)
Post by: kenny mac on April 18, 2021, 04:50:24 AM
Tims 12 string guitar us so cool.
Im really fighting myself not to get one .
Title: Re: C,mon NOW WITH VIDEO ( Greeny and Kenny Mac)
Post by: Ferryman_1957 on April 18, 2021, 07:20:50 AM
Loving the video! Nice one guys.
Title: Re: C,mon NOW WITH VIDEO ( Greeny and Kenny Mac)
Post by: Jean Pierre on April 19, 2021, 10:33:17 PM
loved the viideo!....what a pleasure to see the SC guys in live situation neautiful song, beautiful work
Title: Re: C,mon NOW WITH VIDEO ( Greeny and Kenny Mac)
Post by: WarpCanada on April 19, 2021, 10:51:30 PM
The song was wonderful, and with the video on top, it's something extra special.   Made my evening.