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Title: Love of a Lifetime-Original
Post by: Johnbee on March 25, 2021, 06:57:01 PM
Me trying to write a song like Boz Scaggs.  ;)

Featuring Toontrack EZ Keys & EZ Drummer 2, Trilian Bass, NI Session Strings Pro 2, and UVI Orchestral Suite for the flute solo.
Enjoy!
It never used to be so cold. There never was a time
when words came so hard  to express the feelings in our hearts
The fire has gone out and in our injured hearts
we struggle to salvage what's left of any ember there
We went from being so in tune with one another
to just strangers passing by
in a dark and rainy night

But while it was right it was a love of a lifetime
We thought it could survive the storms
but when it went wrong it was impossible
to bring it back again

Time and again we fought the fight. We stayed committed to
the prospect that no other could have been for you or I
We were who we were, belonging to each other,
Exclusive of any different love. It could not be.
But somewhere we lost something in all our time together
Something magically sublime
Could we both have been so blind?

But while it right it was the love of a lifetime
It was not supposed to fail
But when it went wrong we never could bring it back to where it would prevail
For so long it seemed like it was invincible
Who could have known the fire would die?
But while it was right it was a love of a lifetime
There was never any doubt.

But while it was right it was a love of a lifetime
We thought it could survive the storms
but when it went wrong it was impossible
to bring it back again
For so long it seemed like it was invincible
Who would have known the fire would die?
But while it was right it was a love of a lifetime
Something beautiful is gone.

2021 John Bowen Music
Title: Re: Love of a Lifetime-Original
Post by: StephenM on March 25, 2021, 09:09:44 PM
I was quite a fan of Silk Degrees.... and I liked the Boz very much...but to me... you are better ( but hey what do I know)....

Lowdown was cool and it was a good album...  for what you do on the budget you get...yeah... I'll take your stuff ...

another winner John...

precise...detailed... interesting...
Title: Re: Love of a Lifetime-Original
Post by: Kenneth on March 26, 2021, 01:04:36 AM
It's happened to most of us.
Good song creating John... you definitely achieved it with this.
Title: Re: Love of a Lifetime-Original
Post by: Ferryman_1957 on March 26, 2021, 04:16:49 AM
A very bittersweet song John, a story very well told lyrically. A wonderful composition with very clever and well thought out arrangement. The piano playing is fab (as always) and there are some lovely touches (like the pizzicato strings). A great vocal over the top, you certainly don't make it easy for yourself with your complex melodies but you handle them really well, and the vocal sits beautifully in the mix.

You may have started a bit Boz Scaggs but that instrumental section from 3:47 is almost prog rock, the flute made it sound like early Genesis to me! It's a lovely section, and really creates a clever contrast to the rest of the song.

So much to like in this, another impressive and enjoyable piece of music from you. Well done!
Title: Re: Love of a Lifetime-Original
Post by: Greeny (No longer active) on March 26, 2021, 04:28:38 AM
Definitely looks back to the melodic, easy listening songwriting of the 70's, but I think you bring your own unique class and complexity to proceedings. There's so much richness here. That instrumental that kicks off at about 4:00 is absolutely sublime. I like how you create whole little worlds with your songs - they are deep, immersive experiences.

Fantastic.

I know why you'd want to emulate the Boz. I'm such a fan of Silk Degrees. It was first on my list when I started collecting vinyl again last year.
Title: Re: Love of a Lifetime-Original
Post by: Pete C on March 26, 2021, 04:52:51 AM
wow, what an accomplished sounding piece. Just listening to each instrument individually, each part is so well played and interesting.

Pete
Title: Re: Love of a Lifetime-Original
Post by: bruno on March 26, 2021, 07:07:39 AM
I absolutely love this - it reminds me of Styx, in a way.
I love the fact that you can hear songcrafters getting better and better on this site.
There's lots of complexity in the music, and fabulous and confident vocals. Take a bow.
B
Title: Re: Love of a Lifetime-Original
Post by: Farrell Jackson on March 26, 2021, 08:34:09 AM
Very well done John! You have created an appealing, complex song and subject. Excellent melody and vocals. Your voice and style here reminds me of Christopher Cross, especially on the chorus. Bravo!

Farrell
Title: Re: Love of a Lifetime-Original
Post by: Johnbee on March 26, 2021, 09:43:37 AM
Hey, Ferrel J, bruno,Pete C,Greeny, Ferryman,Ken & SteveM-Thanks so much.  It means a lot.
Steve, I really appreciate your comment, but there is no way I'm better than the Boz.  But thanks anyway.

 :) John B
Title: Re: Love of a Lifetime-Original
Post by: TPB on March 26, 2021, 11:58:14 AM
Keys and vocals both well played loving the keyboard work
Tim
Title: Re: Love of a Lifetime-Original
Post by: StephenM on March 26, 2021, 01:20:25 PM
Quote from: Johnbee on March 26, 2021, 09:43:37 AMHey, Ferrel J, bruno,Pete C,Greeny, Ferryman,Ken & SteveM-Thanks so much.  It means a lot.
Steve, I really appreciate your comment, but there is no way I'm better than the Boz.  But thanks anyway.

 :) John B


These things are subjective... I like your voice better... how about a Boz Skaggs cover?
Title: Re: Love of a Lifetime-Original
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on March 26, 2021, 03:30:37 PM
This sounds amazing, just like songs used to be from the 60's / 70's. I'm not sure I know boz scaggs, but your voice and the music style reminds me of Christopher cross which someone mentioned too. I love the timbre of your voice.
All the music sounds brilliant, kind of easy listening style. It's really good songwriting. Darren :)
Title: Re: Love of a Lifetime-Original
Post by: Johnbee on March 26, 2021, 07:01:14 PM
Thanks again Steve.  You're too kind.  I'd never attempt a Boz cover because I don't want to murder his beautiful work.  ;D
Darren-Thanks so much! 

For those who aren't sure who Boz Scaggs is, maybe you've heard this:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nf4_JbtPo6c
or this:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I-hKBmTAADo

 :) John B
Title: Re: Love of a Lifetime-Original
Post by: tonyc on March 27, 2021, 12:00:49 PM
another great song john , and love the lyrics . well put together and a great mix cool stuff ......cheers tony cee
Title: Re: Love of a Lifetime-Original
Post by: StephenM on March 27, 2021, 03:24:31 PM
heard this again today...I think if I ever could do a piece like this...this good... I might never do another.... there is so much here.... music is kind of like relationships I think... there is a listen as in I heard it playing in the background or while I was doing stuff and then there is "I listened to this intently, over and over" kind of like looking at someone you love....at 2:40 you created the most amazing backing vocals there...wow...had to hear this again ....
and as the piece goes on winding like a beautiful river flowing along a meadow of green...there is a "Kansas" (the band) like music scape you create....
this is a great piece here John...
thanks...
Title: Re: Love of a Lifetime-Original
Post by: Ray Brookes on March 28, 2021, 12:09:14 AM
I've said it before but I love hearing your latest compositions. Melodies from heaven and a vocal track that I could never hope to perform. Production as always is first class and the instrumentation brilliant.
Title: Re: Love of a Lifetime-Original
Post by: Johnbee on March 28, 2021, 08:31:43 AM
Quote from: TPB on March 26, 2021, 11:58:14 AMKeys and vocals both well played loving the keyboard work
Tim
Hey Tim, so sorry I failed to respond to your posting and your kind words.  I hate it when that happens. Thanks so much!
 ;) JB
Title: Re: Love of a Lifetime-Original
Post by: Johnbee on March 28, 2021, 08:38:47 AM
Hey, Tony, Steve (again) and Ray-Thank you all so very much.  Ray, I'm equally awed by your voice and I love the Phil Collins quality of it. You do fine in that area yourself.
 :) JB
Title: Re: Love of a Lifetime-Original
Post by: launched on March 30, 2021, 06:13:45 PM
I love how this was timestamped in several spots so I'll add mine: 2:42 had an awesome vocal harmony section. Happened only once but was worth rewinding a few times. You have a falsetto that kills, sounds great especially later in the song.

I'm a fan for sure
Title: Re: Love of a Lifetime-Original
Post by: Bluesberry on March 30, 2021, 06:36:57 PM
very complex songwriting...reminds me of Steely Dan...good one
Title: Re: Love of a Lifetime-Original
Post by: BerryPatch on March 30, 2021, 09:45:49 PM
Brilliant songcraft yet again John. I love the unexcepted lifts and section changes in your songs and this one is no exception. Rock solid groove as well, the instrumentation all sounds so great together.
Title: Re: Love of a Lifetime-Original
Post by: Redler on April 03, 2021, 10:17:30 PM
Another winner, John! Great composing and performance. I have always liked the skill how you can create the atmospheres in your music. Here's some excellent examples of great arranging as well; adding strings just on the right spots, stopping drums etc... Pure brilliance!
Title: Re: Love of a Lifetime-Original
Post by: Gritter on April 04, 2021, 12:31:04 PM
Great song. I hear Brian Wilson influence big time, especially your vocal delivery. This is awesome. Beautiful bitter-sweet song.
Title: Re: Love of a Lifetime-Original
Post by: launched on April 04, 2021, 12:52:28 PM
Another listen, I love this tune!
Title: Re: Love of a Lifetime-Original
Post by: Johnbee on April 06, 2021, 12:57:39 PM
Launched, Bluesberry, Berrypatch, Redler & Gritter-Thanks all so much.
 :) John B