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Post Your Work => Original Songs => Topic started by: thetworegs on February 24, 2021, 08:22:38 AM

Title: Sweet sweet love
Post by: thetworegs on February 24, 2021, 08:22:38 AM
Well this is number 10 and the last for my RPM 2021 Album about the Tv program Bride at first sight Australia and complications involved in marrying a bride at first sight. This one is about trying to end such a marriage and they won't have it ......a bit tounge in cheek but i'm sure you'll get the drift .......Thanks for listening
I'm looking for love
I am looking now
I'm looking for love
And I want it now
I'm looking for love
And I want it now

I'm afraid baby all I see from you is that your moaning at me
That I'm not good enough for you
You just want me to change
Your always on at me, trying to make me do this or do that
I don't want to do it
I don't want to be with you anymore
Don't you understand
I do not love you
I do not love you
I do not love you

All I want from you is some sweet sweet love
All I want from you is your sweet sweet love
All I want from you is your sweet sweet love
So give me, give me your sweet sweet love

I'm sure theres something wrong with you
I couldn't be any planer
I don't want to know
You can't change me
Theres nothing in my mind that says
Those three little words I love you
I really don't want to know
Do you understand

All I want from you is your sweet sweet love
All I want from you is your sweet sweet love
All I want from you is your sweet sweet love
All I want from you is your sweet sweet love
All I want from you is your sweet love

Look if you don't stop calling me
Texting me
Getting me on facebook
Anyway I don't want to know
Have I got to get some kind of court order to stop you
Just get out of my face
Get out of my world
Leave me alone
Please

All I want from you is your sweet sweet love
All I want from you is your sweet sweet love
All I want from you is your sweet sweet love
All I want from you is your sweet sweet love
Give me please your sweet sweet love
All I want from you is your sweet sweet love
All I want from you is your sweet sweet love
All I want from you is your sweet sweet love
So give me give me your sweet sweet love



How can I say this
No
No
Now we met for the first time at the alter
We got involved in a pretend marriage
For a TV program
It was make believe
Don't you understand

All I want from you is your sweet love
give me give me your sweet sweet love
give me give me your  sweet love
All I want from you is your sweet sweet love
All I want from you is your love

All I want from you is your sweet sweet love
So give me I demand it
give me your love
Give me give me your sweet sweet love
I am demanding your sweet sweet love
Title: Re: Sweet sweet love
Post by: TPB on February 24, 2021, 09:09:21 AM
very nice Trevor this one has the early Door's feel to it  the spoken parts break it up and make it a interesting listen
Tim
Title: Re: Sweet sweet love
Post by: Redler on February 24, 2021, 02:49:39 PM
Cool song with fine lyrics! Well written and arranged.

(Here's similar TV format...haven't watched it at all)
Title: Re: Sweet sweet love
Post by: Bluesberry on February 24, 2021, 04:52:46 PM
Very cool song Trev-Reg...I hear a monster song here....this would do good with more fleshing out....drums, bass.....guitar solos......bigger ass guitar sound....like the sound of the guitars on "Creep"......and some harmonies at the sweet sweet love parts....maybe some organ for good measure........that would really turn this into a monster song.....huge......its is a pretty cool song as it is....but oh man what a monster is lurking underneath the hood here........
Title: Re: Sweet sweet love
Post by: StephenM on February 24, 2021, 05:04:24 PM
I heard this a bunch the last couple of days...along with all the stuff on the latest playlist... this is big time cool.... aside from what it's about....it could be about.... Not letting her down easy.....
this is almost like 2 different songs.... very cool stuff...
Title: Re: Sweet sweet love
Post by: BerryPatch on February 24, 2021, 09:26:58 PM
A cool track indeed. I get a bit of an epic Zeppelin vibe from this one. Appropriate that this one closes out your RPM album. SWEET SWEET LOOOVE
Title: Re: Sweet sweet love
Post by: Nelson on February 24, 2021, 10:39:14 PM
Love the vocals in the chorus Reg.

Court Order ... out of my face.
I don't love you...... Cold Blooded lyrics

Digging that crunchy guitar
Title: Re: Sweet sweet love
Post by: hardlock on February 25, 2021, 02:50:30 AM
Sounds like both Reg's are at odds here?  Diggin' this song a lot!  Might try to add some parts as per Bluesberry's ideas for the fun of it. My kind of jam! 8)

Title: Re: Sweet sweet love
Post by: Greeny (No longer active) on February 25, 2021, 04:37:09 AM
I also missed the groove of some drums and bass, but this is a fine song and performance. Like Led Zep transplanted into a 1968 San Francisco Garage Band. The spoken parts work very well indeed.

Nice one!
Title: Re: Sweet sweet love
Post by: tonyc on February 25, 2021, 12:19:58 PM
great vocal , very robert plant type vocal . i to missed the drums but great song and lyrics .......cheers tony cee
Title: Re: Sweet sweet love
Post by: Ferryman_1957 on February 25, 2021, 12:34:48 PM
Another strong song with fabulous guitar sounds and a belter of a vocal. But I can only agree with the others, this one is calling out for a full band arrangement. Where's Chapperz when you need him....? ;)
Title: Re: Sweet sweet love
Post by: Mike_S on February 27, 2021, 04:20:37 PM
Very good Trevor... great subject matter and great lyrics. Great performances all round and totally original. Super stuff.

Mike
Title: Re: Sweet sweet love
Post by: Kenneth on February 27, 2021, 10:56:21 PM
Perfect pitch, perfect recording. Love it , the delay works so well.
Always been a fan.
Title: Re: Sweet sweet love
Post by: WarpCanada on February 28, 2021, 11:47:37 AM
This reminds me of T.Bone Burnett.   A cool, eclectic vibe.
Title: Re: Sweet sweet love
Post by: Hilary on February 28, 2021, 03:50:47 PM
What you trying to say Reggie?

Are you sure it's not a duet?

Loved it, made me smile - there's no point messing about now is there!
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