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Title: Lydia
Post by: Ray Brookes on November 21, 2020, 12:53:04 PM
I've seen you crash back down into the ash
Like an inverted Phoenix
So delectable yet totally ineffectual
Those intellectual verbal tricks
I've tried to save ya from your bad behaviour
And keep you safe within the mix
I've been here to stake you and whatever may break you
I've always been ready to fix
Oh, Lydia windswept and pale in my raincoat
Lydia shipwrecked and lost from the start
How could I ever turn my back to you
How could I ever deny you my heart.

That failed wannabe muso from the failed wannabe studio
And his angst filled introverted songs
Dumped you without any conscience; faked all that nonchalance; 
Amongst a rant of venomous tongues
And that fat salesman guy with his food stained tie
Last seen on the streets of Hong Kong
And what about that actor? My God what a chapter
Another story where you didn't belong
Oh, Lydia at the helm of your own personal Mayflower
Intrepid; clutching your horoscope and astronomical charts
How could I ever turn my back to you
How could I ever deny you my heart.

You visited the Bolshoi; read Chekhov and Tolstoy
You got your records of Mahler and Liszt
But common sense not so common and babe you look so solemn
Now you realise what you might have missed
Those laughing sons of bitches: all of 'em in stitches
Pointing at the slashes on your wrist
At your crack-whore clothes and the rings in your nose
As you stand there shaking your fist
Oh, Lydia femme fatale 'neath my blankets
Lydia texting old friends gambling on nostalgia
Oh, Lydia – free delivery, no surcharge outcalls only
Checking out the morning sky getting ready to depart
How could I ever turn my back to you
How could I ever deny you my heart.
Title: Re: Lydia
Post by: Hilary on November 21, 2020, 04:54:42 PM
Great storytelling and beautifully performed.
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Post by: StephenM on November 21, 2020, 06:51:52 PM
Epic....grand....the pinnacle... is it a true story? 
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Post by: hardlock on November 22, 2020, 02:44:06 AM
Wow, now that's song writing! Outstanding work throughout!
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Post by: Johnny McAleer on November 22, 2020, 05:22:57 AM
Excellent piece. Nice guitar and vocals and a great story to tell. Nice!
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Post by: The Gobi Desert Canoe Club on November 22, 2020, 06:39:13 AM
Great song, thank you so much for posting these fabulous lyrics. Superb performance and production.
Willie
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Post by: bruno on November 22, 2020, 09:36:11 AM
Quote from: Willie on November 22, 2020, 06:39:13 AMGreat song, thank you so much for posting these fabulous lyrics. Superb performance and production.
Willie
+1
A lovely song, so well recorded and played.
B
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Post by: pjd1 on November 22, 2020, 12:35:59 PM
Another beautifully played and recorded composition from you , just love to listen to your storys in your songs , this is my favourite of yours , incredible song and lovely feel and vibe to your music , vocal and guitar are ridiculously good , and right up there with the best

Dunny
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Post by: Oldrottenhead on November 22, 2020, 12:42:30 PM
just fabulous!
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Post by: thetworegs on November 25, 2020, 12:39:02 AM
Downloaded  this a while ago from the otherside and love it fab songwriting I'm a fan ????
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Post by: Farrell Jackson on November 25, 2020, 05:46:41 PM
Beautifully written, recorded, played, and performed... the words really tug at the heart. This is top notch songwriting Ray!

Farrell
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Post by: Ferryman_1957 on November 26, 2020, 08:14:51 AM
Wow, pure quality from start to finish Ray. Great songwriting and stunning lyrics, some fantastic word images in there. Beautifully sung and played, a fabulous listen. Well done.
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Post by: Bluesberry on January 03, 2021, 05:51:22 PM
Completly fantastic, the layers of instruments are perfect...this sounds like it was done in a profesional studio...it is a world-wide hit man, full of beauty and soul...I cant get over how good this sounds...incredible song
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Post by: Groundy on January 04, 2021, 11:51:12 PM
Great performance and top class songwriting,
Well done Ray, take a bow... Alex
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Post by: Redler on January 05, 2021, 11:19:18 AM
Great story telling song! The acoustic guitar sounds so sweet. Top class work on each way!