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Title: One Night Stand (I remember you)
Post by: The Gobi Desert Canoe Club on November 19, 2020, 04:22:05 AM
Hi all, hot off the press, has this ever happened to you?  Hope you enjoy.       Willie

Rickenbacker 12 String, Fender Strat,  Fender Precision, Various noises from GarageBand


Can't help thinking I know your face
I just can't remember the time or place
Where I saw you, maybe a dream
Or was it on a movie screen

Oh were you just a one night stand
You wanted love and I was on hand
I stayed the whole night through
Oh yeah, now I remember you

Never thought that we would meet again
In a doorwa,y out of the rain
Do you remember all the things we said
Or is this all inside my head

Oh were you just a one night stand
You wanted love and I was on hand
I stayed the whole night through
Oh yeah now , I remember you

Instrumental

It seems so long ago
Maybe a year or so
You whispered in my ear
I remember it oh so clear

Oh were you just a one night stand
You wanted love and I was on hand
I stayed the whole night through
Oh yeah now , I remember you

Outro
Title: Re: One Night Stand (I remember you)
Post by: hardlock on November 19, 2020, 05:29:37 AM
Thought of a dozen great comments to elaborate on, lyrics, production, tones, vibe, flow, etc. but it all comes down to one simple word that says it all for me:

PERFECT!
Title: Re: One Night Stand (I remember you)
Post by: StephenM on November 19, 2020, 07:32:04 AM
remarkeable!  really great soundscape... once again the likeness to Boston to me is quite amazing... good stuff
Title: Re: One Night Stand (I remember you)
Post by: cuthbert on November 19, 2020, 03:46:07 PM
Fantastic, Willie. Love the song and especially dig that fine Ricky jangle.
Title: Re: One Night Stand (I remember you)
Post by: Johnbee on November 19, 2020, 08:12:44 PM
Very nice melody.  It's the kind of melody that can grow on you very easily.

 :) John B
Title: Re: One Night Stand (I remember you)
Post by: TPB on November 19, 2020, 08:35:42 PM
And to think you were thinking of quitting music I am so glad you did not this song is outstanding keep the jangle alive
Tim
Title: Re: One Night Stand (I remember you)
Post by: Mike Huntingford on November 19, 2020, 09:18:58 PM
Boston - exactly what I thought.  Your sound so reminds me of Boston.  Terrific song that I enjoyed so very much.

Mike
Title: Re: One Night Stand (I remember you)
Post by: Hook on November 20, 2020, 07:05:51 AM
You can and constantly do, write grat songs brother. no exception here.
Rock on!
Title: Re: One Night Stand (I remember you)
Post by: WarpCanada on November 20, 2020, 01:12:07 PM
Lyrics are top shelf. Production is very good.  Vocal has good heft (did you double the vocal? what vocal processing did you add? It's very good).  Your vocal delivery is good, it feels wistful and sad, but the 80s guitar ballad energy of the song creates an experience that as others said, does remind me of Boston. 

If I was in  your band I would have wanted to take a Boston or Journey style guitar solo somewhere in there, but that wouldn't have improved things, as this one references a Boston sound without BEING that track. 

Another musical reference that just came to me is Power Pop.    Tommy Keene, These Are Places That Are Gone.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SB_u2gC5S5o

I would love to hear what happens to your ricky if you gain it up and go for Tommy Keene's sound in the track above, in a future musical outing.


That Rick 12 string sounds so good that now Santa needs to bring me one of those, and if he doesn't I may need to head into town on a mission to acquire some more jangle, as I haven't got enough jangle in my life.

Title: Re: One Night Stand (I remember you)
Post by: Johnny McAleer on November 21, 2020, 06:40:08 AM
I love this. A low-key Boston vibe in there I agree. I'm also hearing twin heroes Gerry Rafferty and Jeff Lynne watching over this excellent track. Technically and musically superb!  -Johnny
Title: Re: One Night Stand (I remember you)
Post by: bruno on November 22, 2020, 09:11:13 AM
Listened to this yesterday on my walk. From the opening chords, I thought Willie. You have a fantastically distinct sound in all your postings. This is a great tune, loads to enjoy about this tune.
B
Title: Re: One Night Stand (I remember you)
Post by: Mike_S on November 22, 2020, 03:13:02 PM
Sparkling guitars throughout. Lovely jangliness. Super tune Willie, most enjoyable.

Mike
Title: Re: One Night Stand (I remember you)
Post by: Ferryman_1957 on November 23, 2020, 04:40:37 AM
Nice work Willie. Great composition, lovely guitar sounds and really polished mixing and production. I really liked the string-sounding lead melodies - maybe "sounds" from Garageband or an effected guitar? A really enjoyable listen as always.

Has it ever happened to me? No, despite me wishing it had when I was younger!! :o ;D
Title: Re: One Night Stand (I remember you)
Post by: SE on November 26, 2020, 06:20:43 PM
Well done Willie, love,in the jangly guitar with  your excellent  vocal, really enjoyed the  listen!