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Post Your Work => Original Songs => Topic started by: thetworegs on September 09, 2020, 10:05:57 AM

Title: I want you
Post by: thetworegs on September 09, 2020, 10:05:57 AM
Poor old Reg everything was going swimmingly until he fell of the wagon, 6 weeks dissapeared and guess what his wife didn't understand and he's out on his ear again, he's got no one to blame but himself but he's gone a bit weird this time...........
I want you

Twisted up with pain
Wrapped up tight with guilt
Tight upon the chain
I want you
I Want you

I watch you from afar
Walk the children off to school
Your my caviar
I want you
I want you


You told me on the phone
I've got ta keep away
Every  time I call
Every single day
But I want you
I want you


 Can you please answer the phone ,Come on, i know your there, I saw you come in, come on for fucks sake
All I want to do is sort out the problems we've got,
 i know you don't want to speak to me but I'd like you to speak to me, I'd like to be fucking reasonable if I can
 oh for fucks sake,
can you answer the fucking phone
Corrr
Come on
Look
sorry about that
 I'll ring you later
we really need to sort something out,
We've got to sort it out
You know we do
We've got to sort it out haven't we
Look ignore that message
I'll ring you later
I love you

I   Don't know what I'm doing
My head spins around
I'm drinking too much
Till I fall to the ground
I want you
I want you


I'll give you what you want
But you gotta want it too
You know what I want
I'm needing you
I want you.
Can you please come to the phone
I need you
I want you
I know your there I saw you come in
I want you
 Come on for fucks sake just talk to me
I want you
I know you don't want to speak to me but I need to speak to you
I want you
Oh come on be fucking reasonable
I want you 


I want you
Music & Lyrics Reg
Title: Re: I want you
Post by: The Gobi Desert Canoe Club on September 09, 2020, 12:39:41 PM
Oh dear, poor Reg, can't do right for doing wrong. Excellent guitar and vocal.    Willie
Title: Re: I want you
Post by: Ray Brookes on September 09, 2020, 01:35:07 PM
Well written song and with an incisive narrative that presents a situation a lot of us have been in. The recording quality is stellar and love that vocal production. That pulsing rhythm guitar sets the mood perfectly as over-producing this song would negate the intimacy and not work at all. Great work; well done.
Title: Re: I want you
Post by: Mike_S on September 09, 2020, 03:02:34 PM
Love it Trevor. The spoken bit is brilliant and that jangling part of the guitar riff is so good. Played and sung with real conviction!!

Mike
Title: Re: I want you
Post by: StephenM on September 09, 2020, 06:37:44 PM
wowsers... first a little funny I hear... this could also be a song about someone whose wife is made about him chewing tobacco and kicks him out... ( as in "I want chew")...ok, I'm done with that now.. I just love your accent on the talking bit...  and your guitar playing is really solid... and I can kind of relate to this as at one time or another with both of my ladies I have had to deal with issues surrounding my fondness of alcohol...it is a love hate relationship so I surround myself with people who never touch it and I find it helps me to stay out of the deep end...I don't need to say it again... I am happy to observe your talent Reg....er Trev!
Title: Re: I want you
Post by: Kenneth on September 09, 2020, 06:50:34 PM
Powerful song and matters of the heart...
Brilliant Trevor.
Title: Re: I want you
Post by: Greeny (No longer active) on September 11, 2020, 03:25:38 AM
Love the treatment on the vocal, and the spoken sections are great. A really interesting, different and dramatic song. Belter!
Title: Re: I want you
Post by: TPB on September 11, 2020, 05:32:13 AM
Love the interplay between the music and vocal especially the spoken parts
Reg is on the money
Tim
Title: Re: I want you
Post by: Ferryman_1957 on September 12, 2020, 04:45:30 AM
I also love the vocal treatment (and of course the vocals), very well done especially on the "I want you" sections. Very cool track indeed, Reg is clearly in some trouble and it's a heartfelt vocal. Hope he gets out of trouble soon......
Title: Re: I want you
Post by: Pete C on September 12, 2020, 06:38:46 AM
Nice work, love how you fitted the spoken parts into the song. That jangly guitar sound is cool!

Pete
Title: Re: I want you
Post by: Redler on September 13, 2020, 12:07:56 AM
What a performance!! I love the intense vibe of this. The way you sing and play is so powerful. Excellent job!
Title: Re: I want you
Post by: Ella on September 13, 2020, 12:29:45 AM
This works so well! This singing and spoken parts and all. Very nice guitar riff and powerful chorus.
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